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By : crimson96
  • From AFFModerator on September 20, 2014

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  • From blackicekitten98 on March 14, 2014
    Has this story been forgotten? Would like to see an update. It is a good story.
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  • From ANON - Trancekid on February 29, 2012
    You aren't allowed to abandon this story. I love it, but I have waited quite a long time for updates...
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  • From ANON - Chibi_Neko on February 02, 2012
    Great story, can't wait for the next update.

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  • From ANON - Trancekid on January 19, 2012
    Have you abandoned this story? Seems a shame...
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  • From ANON - oOMissGOo on August 12, 2011
    like it would love to read more!!!
    thank you
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  • From Pheonixs on July 05, 2011
    Good story so far =]. Hope the next chapter comes out soon.
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  • From on March 24, 2011
    I guess I'm excited there will be more chapters, excellent narrative for my beautiful that would marry Harry and Draco Giny
    congratulations for this story will be waiting for another chapter.

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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 11, 2011
    chapter 24 please!!!!!!!!
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  • From jujukitty on March 09, 2011
    another wonderful chapter. poor narcissa stuck with two madmen and a helpless elf. at least harry's getting some action in his dreams lol. keep up the great work, can't wait to see what happens next :)
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  • From ANON - M W on March 02, 2011
    You've really captured the relationship between Harry and Draco beautifully. You have a great writing style and you develop the characters with true finesse. I really enjoy this story, please keep updating :)
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  • From jujukitty on February 26, 2011
    lol ron giving the big brother talk...or trying at least. and poor draco, stuck at the weasleys and asking them for help. another great chapter, keep it up, cna't wait for more :)
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  • From jujukitty on February 20, 2011
    yay for another chapter! and omg so sad when the two muggles died, especially the lady after her little talk with draco *sniffle* but very well written! and draco's first pillow fight lol.keep up the good work, can't wait for more :)
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  • From ANON - Skye on February 19, 2011
    I can't believe this only has two reviews!! This story is absolutely amazing! I read it in one sitting and I'm absolutely in love. I really do hope that you continue it! I'll pass this story along in some of my circles, it needs to be read!

    I love love love it. Please keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - myladymystere on February 19, 2011
    i really liked this and do hope you come back and add more.
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