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Reviews for The Downfall of Greed

By : tcarlson
  • From StillHorny on June 07, 2011
    Oh, you DID NOT just leave us on the edge of that cliff!?!?!?!?!

    You are a truely evil and wicked author *smirk*

    Please, please, please...don't leave us hanging like this!!!!!!
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  • From StillHorny on May 29, 2011
    How can Hermoine tell Lucius that he will never have her again?!?!?!? She knows and has said that she loves him.

    But I guess the moment of truth is upon Lucius now. What will he do?

    Please post soon.
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  • From StillHorny on May 27, 2011
    Oh no, is Lucius really going to give Hermoine over to the Dark Lord?!?!?!?!?!?!

    I do, but I don't want the next chapter. Is that weird or what?
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  • From StillHorny on May 20, 2011
    She came back, just to be with him!?!?!?!?

    How will he face her the next morning. Or even better, the next night, when he must give her over to the Dark Lord?

    The plot thickens and definately peaks the curiousity.
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  • From StillHorny on May 17, 2011
    Oh, no...is Lucius falling in "love"?!?!?!?!

    What will he do when the Dark Lord wants his Mudblood? The plot thickens.

    More, please!
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  • From StillHorny on May 15, 2011
    Oh, Lucius is in too deep now. He has no way out; not that I see him wanting out anytime soon.

    This is going to end badly for Lucis. I can see it coming.

    More please!!!
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  • From Remarkable on April 18, 2011
    Oh this is just freaking awesome and totally so much more in character with what could happen than the fluffy bunnies in so many other fics. Cna't wait to read the next installment!
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  • From StillHorny on April 17, 2011
    What a dark chapter. I knew there had to be some comming.

    I enjoyed, Lucius' anger at having the Dark Lord touch Hermoine. He is in WAY over his head!!

    I did like that Draco did not want to stay for the further desecration of the dead bodies. He at least has his limits.
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  • From StillHorny on April 14, 2011
    Loved it!!

    I think Lucius is falling for Hermoine as much as she is for him. But will the Dark Lord put an end to their 'play time'?

    The plot thickens!?!?!?!?!?
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  • From StillHorny on April 10, 2011
    Oh, Hermione is such a 'back talker'; I suspect that she will get punished for this more than anything else.

    I cannot wait to see what Hermoine is dreaming of!?!?!?! Maybe a few dirty dreams of herself and Lucius (maybe with Draco and/or Snape); that would be just too lovely!!

    More, please!
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  • From StillHorny on April 10, 2011
    OMG, the screaming at the end was absolutely PRICELESS!!!!!!!!!

    I love how Lucius, now wants to possess her. This is the start of his downfall.

    By the way, why was the last time Lucius kissed anyone was when Draco was born? What is the deal there?

    More, please!
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  • From StillHorny on April 02, 2011
    How can I get my hands on some of that potion?!?!?!?

    I loved the line about the 'humourus gift'...that was priceless!

    Please continue, I can't wait to see what Lucius will do next.
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  • From Remarkable on March 20, 2011
    It must be very humiliating to enjoy the product of rape and be slapped in the face with such cold words in the aftermath, simply "being prepared for the Dark Lord" like she is some Mudblood Filet Mignon. Poor Hermione.
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  • From StillHorny on March 20, 2011
    The bit about sending the stained sheets to the Dark Lord was...priceless!!!

    Now that they have gotten rid of 'that pesky virginity'; I hope that Lucius will show her how to be truely submissive.

    More, please.
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  • From StillHorny on March 17, 2011
    Oh, the image of being a virgin with a VERY experianced Lucius, is almost TOO MUCH!!!!

    I am so hoping that Hermoine does struggle some; then Lucius can punish her (just a little).

    More, please.
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