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Reviews for The Downfall of Greed

By : tcarlson
  • From sarlanda on September 07, 2018

    I'm not going to read this all now, but the way you wrote Lucius and Bellatrix is excellent and very humorous


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  • From puddingboo on December 03, 2015
    Absolutely brilliant loved how u kept lucius personality as well as severus
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  • From ANON - S.Anne on October 06, 2012
    That was excellent, I was impressed! Normally, I lose interest a chapter or two in, but not this time. Well done.
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  • From obssesivelove19 on December 31, 2011
    THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL STORY I HAVE EVER READ....im not joking its so touching and just beautiful i cant give u 5 starz cuz nothing is perfect but my god u gave me a tast of a masterpiece i love the tension the lve the want the everything every other story i read its either sex sex sex or pain or just everything seperate but u took everything i loved and put it together im so glad i accidentily found this.....ITS ABSOULITLY BEAUTIFUL AND I will read it again until i cant stand it .....it took u months to make this wonderful love story and me only around 10 houres give or take a few houres to read it.....the best hours of my life well spent......i say YOU MUST LIVE ON AND WRITEE WROTE WRITE WRITE!!!!!! when u make another fic. keep the feelings there but with different charactores!!!!!!!!!
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  • From kadajclone on July 20, 2011
    Bravo, excellent story.But still would have liked to see at least 'some' regret over having killed the muggle girl and a little more anger on hermione's part but it just comes off as he broke her and sh'e suffering from a sever case of stockholme syndome and is just confusing that for love, so unless it got retconned mid-story i just dont see the order going "oh well you switched sides when it suited you and did a shitload of bad things that you feel no regret whatsoever in doing but ya sexed hermione up to the point where she gives up a chance at freedom to be with you so you must be a pretty decent guy underneath it all, heres your full pardon". but still overall, good story.
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  • From Whisperes on July 17, 2011
    One of the main reasons I became a member of AFF was to let you know how much I appreciate this story.
    I've always been quite a big fan of Lucius and his transition from a heartless torturous bastard to an awkwardly caring man is really really well written, not abrupt at all like it is with most stories nowadays.

    Amazing job, and I really look forward to the final chapter! :)
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  • From CafeAuLait on July 17, 2011
    I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I am not a Lucius/Hermione shipper and I read this on a whim. I don't like rapefics, but I was quite curious about this tale. I must say that it was completely different from how I thought it would be. It's an easy read and I very much enjoyed the tale.

    Thanks for sharing!
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  • From purefaith91 on July 16, 2011
    I'm confused. Why didn't Draco or Lucius take the polyjuice to become someone else? If the DNA does not change, it would not have affected that and they could have walked right in and out again. And Harry could have used some and gone with him as someone else also. Interesting...I love Harry. p
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  • From kadajclone on July 12, 2011
    VERY nice fic, im totally hooked at this point.The one small complaint i have is that hermione just seems to have completely forgot that her 'only reason to live' killed her innocent muggle friend right in front of her and harry and a few other characters seem to think its perfectly okay that hermione and lucius be together because he makes her happy disregarding the fact that he essentially broke her. but all in all good story, just waiting to see if lucius is going to have any serious bad karma heading his way for what he has done,please continue.
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  • From on July 11, 2011
    Damn but I hope you're still updating this story. I haven't fallen this hard for a fanfic for about six years. I'm generally not a big fan of rape victims falling for their captors, but damnit you've convinced me just this once. Also, Goblin Banking and Serverus inventing his own potions, frickin' hilarious. Serious congratulations on this story and, once more, I desperately hope you're going to update soon.
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  • From luciussmistress on July 10, 2011
    Beautifully done!!!!! Thank you so much! Poor Lucius! Soooooo tortured! I can't wait to read more! You are truly a gifted writer and I am sooooooo thankful that you share with us!

    Luciussmistress
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  • From luciussmistress on July 09, 2011
    Ohhhhhh please oh please I'm begging with my knees in the dirt! Please update soon! I am totally addicted!! I read A LOT of lumione stories and have NEVER reviewed because I figured it doesn't really make a difference, but if there's even a chance you read this and post another chapter it makes it completely worth it! I love your technique and verbiage, this story is beautifully created and amazingly well thought out! Its turned me into an utter junkie and I LOVE it! Please please update soon!!! You're awesome :D

    Luciussmistress
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  • From Ayamerose48 on July 03, 2011
    I just stared reading this story and I read through all 25 chapters in less than a few hours (with very few interruptions). The chapters weren't extremely long and it caught my attention from the beginning. I was clicking through the chapters so fast. Very interesting story. I love it..... I am anxious to see how Hermione and Lucius will end up.... please keep posting. :)
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  • From StillHorny on June 14, 2011
    Now would be a really good time for Hermoine to do wandless magic; or maybe the Order to come the the rescue.

    But perhaps not.

    I somberly await your next chapter.
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  • From mageemi on June 07, 2011
    Eeeeep! What an evil Cliffie! Who's coming through that door? I want to hope it's the order, that would make a great alibi for Lucius with Voldy, to be able to honestly say that the Order raided his house and took him and Hermione away. But somehow I am very scared that its You-know-who!
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