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Reviews for To Find The Missing Lifeline

By : EvilConcubine
  • From heartshappedsunglasses on March 28, 2011
    is Harry finally going to break free from what ever Ginny did? How will Ron take the news of his manipulative sister? or is he in the plan to?? ^_^
    cant wait for your next chapter
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  • From ANON - Nitya on March 28, 2011
    Hello!^^

    I should be sleeping but when I saw there was a new chapter, I just couldn't :P

    There is one thing that could be better is the introduction to harry's home-made mind-healing :P I think that if the introduction was a bit longer (a crescendo that finally concludes with his mind-healing), I could appreciate a bit more his "discovery". In other words, the beginning was too abtrupt for me.

    But... finally! Harry can see the light to the right path :D Byebye Ginny :DD (I really don't like the pairing Harry/Ginny)

    Looking forward to the next chapter^^
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  • From Chiken89 on March 28, 2011
    poor Harry thinking it was all his fault when in reality it was Ginny digging her grave along with his!! Hopefully Harry figures everything out SOON!!
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  • From EtreDeViestre on March 28, 2011
    i love this fic!!
    i'm kinda late to read your story. Just read it last monday and can't stop reading it.
    i love draco character in your fic. i can grasp draco's feeling and it almost make me cry.
    Like it actually happen in my life that someone betrayed me.
    keep the great work and thank you for writing this great fic
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  • From fatladysinging on March 26, 2011
    Actually, Harry's falling-apart is VERY interesting. I want to see both sides. My only criticism is that you need a beta with a better command of English. On the whole- awesome job! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 26, 2011
    i had soooo hoped that severus would have figured it out!!!! siii need capter 16!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Primera on March 25, 2011
    Hehe! Draco is playing with fire and poor Sevvie is taking this all alone. I know what it's like. When my friend was pregnant her family was howling and going crazy because of her mood swings. And about Harry that was shocking. Damn Ginny! She's is killing him. I hope Harry is not going to end up in Azkaban :(((
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  • From ANON - Techie on March 25, 2011
    I /love/ this story! The plot and your characterization is great, even though I'm not a particular fan of Braco being the submissive you've managed to make me a believer. ;D

    My only complaint(and it's not really even that, just a suggestion) is about your word choice. I know you don't speak English natively, but perhaps try to find a beta who does to help you with your sentence structure and word choice? Sometimes you use words that are really too formal for the characters, or your structure is turned around. You could try going on the forums (there's a thread specifically for finding betas) or I'm sure one of your readers would be glad to beta for you(cough*me*cough* xD).

    Either way I really hope you continue with the updates, this is one of my favorite stories and I'm really eager to see how it all turns out, I hope that Harry figures everything out before he goes mad!
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  • From 4FreakJoySpastic on March 25, 2011
    God! I need more of this story. I love it. I can hardly wait for Draco to have his baby, and for Genny (is that how you spell her name? I don't pay attention.)to give it up! She dose not deserve Harry. I look forward to the next chapter. Much love. ~bye bye~
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  • From on March 24, 2011
    For starters do not have to thank for me is a pleasure to read your story two days ago I read the first chapter and began to mourn
    I think people who write and make your readers will flow your feelings is because we transmit what they are feeling at that moment when he wrote in this chapter I began to think about how Harry is being destroyed because of Giny and she I do not really love or perhaps a poor sickly love Harry I'am happy that Draco not have to go to the Ministry that if it was torture for him and knowing that more could endanger your baby's
    Congratulations.

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  • From ANON - kylie on March 23, 2011
    i do feel sorry for Harry...
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  • From SilentDreamer on March 23, 2011
    Grrrrrrrr!!!! I want Ginny dead!!! Fucking bitch she deserves that and more!! Grrrrrrr I really hopeNeville and Draco can get along, he needs someone other than Snape. Please more soon, u have me up the wall!!!! @_@
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  • From ANON - Nitya on March 23, 2011
    Yay! Another chapter
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  • From ANON - Brandon on March 23, 2011
    Love the new chapter. I got done reading it and was wondering how can no one see whats happening to Harry but Ginny is covering very well. I know we keep ragging on Harry for what he did but we need to remember that Harry has drugged with a very strong substance. I hope Hermione figures out something she is to smart to take what Ginny said and just leave it. I mean how ofter does she keep her nose out of things. I hope she drags Harry to St. Mungo's. I do have one question and it might have been answered but how can Harry be soo good at fighting off the imperius curse but can not fight off the curse? Well I just hope something gives soon i hate seeing Harry descend into hell and Draco so sad. they need to be together and Ginny needs to be put in her place...
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  • From CatSuperstar on March 23, 2011
    I really enjoy your story!!!!! Keep up the great work hun!! ^_^

    I was wondering if you have a mailing list for when you update?? If you do add me please!!! CatDriscoll@gmail.com
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