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By : TheLadyMiya
  • From CafeAuLait on May 13, 2011
    This is an interesting story.

    Thanks for sharing.
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  • From Popcornbandit on May 11, 2011
    So I was browsing my favorite FanFiction.net authors (One of which was you) just to see if there were any new interesting stories out (Mostly Tomione/Voldmione) and I noticed you updated Shared Flame on it! Imagine my shock and happiness as I quickly rushed over to AdultFanFiction.net to read the unedited version! (At least I assume you edit the FF.net version since they have a vendetta against sex scenes. The bastards).

    Oh ho ho ho ho. What a devious, sneaky bastard! How I love him. I simply just love his manipulativeness!(Which believe it or not manipulativeness is not considered a real word! Well balderdash says I! Anything can be a word as long as a person creates it! That is, after all, how all words started! A person created them!)

    Now that I have gotten my idolization of Voldemort/Tom/Marcus out of the way I can really get down to business. :D

    --Yeah, she started to get that feeling as well. However, knowledge was power, and as long as she was stuck with him in this tub, she thought she should try to learn as much as possible.

    -Yes but knowledge corrupts, so watch how far you're willing to go Hermy. Besides you're one lucky girl, having the Dark Lord all to yourself! He's even the father of your daughter. Plus there is lots of great sex involved. What's not to love!? So maybe you shouldn't watch out and just let yourself get corrupted. . . ;]

    --When she grew up, she would no doubt be as beautiful as Hermione. The boys would stand in line to
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  • From iheartskittles on May 11, 2011
    Mwahahaha! I knew he'd try to make her think she's crazy! He is a Slythrin after all! I wonder how long Hermione will be able to hold out not sleeping with him. My bet is not very long. Not that I can blame her. :) I wonder if he would have been able to follow through with torturing Althea. I know Hermione would never allow it, but I still wonder what, if anything, he would feel. I mean, he is already worried about boys. That line was awesome..."Boys will stand in line...to die." Mwahaha!

    Thanks for the udpate!



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  • From jsu1660n on May 11, 2011
    That was so much better than what he could have actually done to her. I was holding my breath the entire time thinking he was going to do something so horrible to her! It was funny how in the beginning he tried to reason and pretend he didn't know why she was calling him Voldemort. Classic! Great chapter. Hope you update soon.
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  • From mrequecky on May 08, 2011
    oh wow, absolutely loooved! >D
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  • From ANON - raven on May 07, 2011
    omggggg you have to update sooon!! im in love with all of your stories
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  • From Popcornbandit on May 05, 2011
    HOLY MOTHER OF CHEESESTICKS, BATMAN!!

    Wow. What a cliffy. I really distrust/don't like the shadow creature, it needs to stay away from Althea!

    Poor Voldemort, his secrets out, What to do? HERMIONE, YOU IDIOT!!

    You don't just say to Voldemort when he is trying to keep his identity a secret "Stay away from me, Voldy!"

    That's like simply trying to walk into Mordor! *facepalm*

    Voldemort got shot out a window *giggle* but he made Hermione and Althea cry! *Rage*

    Anyway. . .

    Update soon *airkiss*
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  • From QueenRuby on May 05, 2011
    Noooo!!! That was so mean! Leaving us hanging like that. So why dosen't Hermione ever call for back up from her freinds in this situation? update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Jade on May 04, 2011
    Ack! Cliffhanger. I hate those so here's cookies for you muses. I hope you update soon as this is a wonderful story.
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  • From iheartskittles on May 04, 2011
    Ah! I knew as soon as he said "Duelling" that either Hermione was going to figure him out or I was going to have to boycott this story. No way in hell does Hermione Granger see the man duel and not know it's him, and that's not even considering the fact that her parsel speaking daughter asked her what Voldemort has to do with Marcus. Mwahahaha! I'd be surprised if Draco didn't figure it out as well. Voldemort teaching Transfiguration is one thing. Voldemort with his wand out ready to duel is another thing entirely.

    But why oh why wouldn't Hermione grab Althea and bolt?!? You can get new clothes, honey! My ass would have grabbed my daughter and then apparated to Hogsmeade where I would have run into Honeydukes to use the secret passage into Hogwarts! Then I would have asked the RoR to give me a room where I could hide that would not be able to be found by Tom Marvolo Riddle, Lord Voldemort, The Dark Lord or Marcus Foster. Then I would have sent a patronus to Harry, Kingsley and McGonnagal asking them to meet her in the RoR with a pensieve, stat! But hey, that's jut me.

    I mean, she HAS to understand that if he got his hands on her he would probably either kill her or obliviate her. There is no way in HELL he'd let her go. Ever. He's the single most possessive person on the planet. As far as he is concerned, she is his. End of. I wonder if he'll try to convince her she's gone completely mental. I can hear it now, "He-who-mus-not-be-named? Really, Hermione? Are you listening to yourself?" Then he will spout off all the reason she did when she tried to deny what her eyes were telling her. Arg! I can't wait!! Please don't leave us hanging on this cliff for too long!! :)

    Thanks for the update...and for Hermione sending Voldemort flying! I got so caught up in the big reveal that I forgot to mention the awesomeness of that part of the chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Sludgeycore on May 04, 2011
    You're evil. Evil evil evil. Please update right away :(
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  • From jsu1660n on May 04, 2011
    OMG! She knows! She knows! Does that Shadow friend of Althea's have something to do with the fairies in the beginning of the story? Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From Popcornbandit on April 27, 2011
    HELL FUCKING YES!!!

    Not only did I get to read a new chapter but I got two, see it, TWO Lemons!

    *swoons*

    I freakin' love you. :D

    The whole power exchange thing makes sense, since we use a lot of energy to have sex and our emotions can be so wrapped up in it. Also, he is such a manipulative bastard. I love it. And I love him. :3

    I kept imagining Althea saying Scank you since she couldn't say the th sound. . . xD

    I think it is time for me to take my Harry Potter addiction to a whole new level and start talking with a hiss. :3
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  • From iheartskittles on April 26, 2011
    Thanks for the update! The smut was smut-tastic! I love how they both seem to get worked up over intellectual discussions. They are such nerds. I wonder what's the deal with Hermione entering his body. There's got to be some fairy trickery going on causing that, yeah? Also, I wonder if there is going to be some kind of side effect of the "stealing" of their sex magic. Perhaps it will bind him to her even more irrevocably than he already is? I'm very interested to see what comes of that. I would also love to see either someone hit on Hermione or threaten her in front of Marcus to see his reaction. I think that'd be quite interesting, especially if the person is a death eater. I really really love this story, and think about it way to much! Thanks!
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  • From iheartskittles on April 20, 2011
    Oh, how wonderful for Draco to be in Voldemort's classroom. I wonder how the Dark Lord feels about having a traitor in his presence. I loved it when Hermione said, "I got back. Aren't you in prison?" Hahaha! Would love to see the look on the ferret's face when she came back with that.

    So Marcus believes he is able to be strictly professional while in class and treat her like she was any other sudent. I wonder if that would be the case if he saw on of his male students make moves on Hermione. I would love to see something like that. Especially from his POV.

    I think Hermione is right about seeing him soon. We all know how they both get turned on by learning and knowledge. :) Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update!
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