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From Popcornbandit on April 20, 2011
P.S. I wrote that obnoxiously long review and forgot to sign in before sending it. Oh shucks! xD
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From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2011
I just wrote you a super long review, then accidentally clicked a link and lost it. . . xD

Let's try this one more time. Hope you like them long. >:D

I'm glad Hermione is starting to learn a little bit more about how manipulative Tom, excuse me, Marcus can be (even though we've pretty much already known what he is up to. Like a new form of Slughorn my goodness).

I also feel a little bad for her that the girls are disliking her because she has a past with Draco, but at least she made a new friend. Also because all those female students making googly eyes at 'her man'. (Ok so they aren't technically together but she obviously feels highly attracted to him and he seems to only be sexually attracted to her. I wonder how those girls would take it if they knew? Jealousy can be a dangerous emotion).

As for Draco I want to know so bad what he is doing there. If he isn't a student why was he there and is he still a bigoted jerk or does he realize Pureblood doesn't mean you're better? Also Hermione's hatred of him is perfectly understandable, and I doubt they could ever be friends unless he somehow shows regret and apologizes.

Althea, I swear, she just gets cuter and cuter.

Hermione Granger (even in the books) had to of been pretty if not beautiful, if you think about it. The reaction at the ball(Which proves she could look drop-dead gorgeous if she fixed her hair and put on a little make-up), Cormac (who is so self-absorbed and narcissistic would not go to a party with an ugly girl), Krum (Famous, super quidditch star who could of had anyone) and Ronald all had a thing for her.

Tom Riddle was notoriously good looking. So therefore chances are Althea is going to be a beauty. And then her parents are both like, super geniuses and extremely powerful magic-wise. This leads me to believe she will most likely inherit her parents intelligence. Therefore my deduction is any child born from Tom and Hermione would most likely be talented (magic wise), intelligent and beautiful like her parents. (Ok Handsome in Tom's case. Not even I dare call Voldemort beautiful in fear of a quick Avada being sent my way).

And I think you're playing her out exactly as she should be. (I also think you're developing her nicely without turning her into a Mary Sue).

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From ANON - Sludgeycore on April 13, 2011
This story is great! I especially liked the most recent chapter; Hermione's character seems especially on spot. The way she notices that Voldemort is holding back his personality is incredibly realistic. I was a little reluctant to read a story about Hermione being a (at the time) single mom, but the way you're taking this store is remarkable. I hope you update soon.
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From MrsPrince on April 12, 2011
I love the story and how you ended ch. 7! Please update!!!
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From QueenRuby on April 11, 2011
LOVE!! The story. Though I still want to read a story where Voldamort had to change nappies. Though I know you have hims with a new face in this story the thought pops in my head. How dose one wrinkle ones nose if one has no nose?
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From iheartskittles on April 11, 2011
Ha! So the reason she wasn't that into him was because he supressed too many of his Dark Lordish tendencies! Oh the irony! I have a feeling she's just unleashed the beast. She better hold on tight, cause I have a feeling things are about to get crazy.

I loved his conversation with Althea about Hermione's possible boyfriends. Voldy told Althea he'd terminate anyone who Hermione was interested in and Althea saying, "Good." That was awesome! She definitely got a lot of her Daddy in her. I wonder how long it will take for Althea to let her father's identity slip. Can't wait.

I also loved Hermione bringing up what an asset Snape was against the Dark Lord. Mwahahaha! I hope she remembers that conversation when she finds out his true identity. And he said he'd never join the Death Eaters...That's technically true, I guess. He'd never join them, he'd rule them. There is a distinct difference.

Thanks for the update; I loved the chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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From Popcornbandit on April 11, 2011
Yay!

No girl wants a guy who holds back from her, even if it is because he wants to be the 'gentleman'. I wonder if he saw into her mind before he pulled that stunt or if it was all just anger? Ah well, either way he has given Hermione something to think about, 'Passionate' indeed. *bwahaha* I love it though
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From ANON - Mari on April 04, 2011
Another great chapter. I am blown away by how hot and spontaneous all the smexy times were. I still stand by the fact old Voldy is gonna kick some serious ass when he finds out someone is messing with his little girl. I think as much as you have made me love this ship (and really, it was a BIIIIG stretch to jump on board and now I'm just loving it), seeing him as a father figure and also his snide comments about Harry are just priceless. Wonderful update, thank you for sharing with us, always a treat to read.
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From Popcornbandit on April 04, 2011
Update again woman! :D

No really though! Voldemort had good self control, but Hermione's anger is understandable, she was scared. xD
Good to see she finally sees herself as a mom because clearly she cares about her daughter, she just never realized how much.

That shadow thing freaks me out, is it the Fae I wonder? probably. :[

Cannot wait for the next update! Good work, once again! :D

xoxo
Rei
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From iheartskittles on April 03, 2011
She's going to try to stay away from him? Oh good luck with that, honey. The man just decided he wants to have regular interludes...you aren't getting away from him that easily. I don't see how she thinks she could stay away from him when he is her neighbor, either. This should definitely be interesting. And that had to be some hot smexing if they literally set the place on fire! No, he is definitely not going to let her go any time soon.

I'm glad that Hermione is discovering the motherly instincts that were previously evading her. Maybe with her attention focused more on Althea she'll be able to start speaking English and communicating better. I hope so, I feel so sad for Althea. It's got to be lonely to only have a weird shadow snake and undercover Dark Lord to talk to.

Thanks for the udpate!
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From iheartskittles on March 26, 2011
Oh I hope we get a Volemort POV next! I can't wait to see if Althea asks him about Voldemort since she had to of heard them talking about him. I also really want to know what was going through his head when he "met" Harry Potter. That was awesome!

I'm glad that she and Ron seemed to have buried the hatchet. It's definitely weird to think of the Golden Trio being so distant with one another. I mean, they all risked their lives for each other. That's got to mean something, right? I wonder what the deal was with Mrs. Weasley. And it seems like Harry is suspicious of Voldemort being Althea's father. I mean, the timing is pretty coincidental.

Thanks for the update!
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From iheartskittles on March 19, 2011
I love getting into Voldemort's head! He is sooo in denial! I am also very curious as to what the shadow snake was. Very intriguing. Thanks for the update!
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From Popcornbandit on March 19, 2011
Oh nonono. I think I know what is going on but I won't say it in case I'm right. . . xD

BUT ALL I WILL SAY IS THOSE TRICKY BASTARDS!! (Fairies)

Also thanks for updating! I've been waiting to see more of Althea, shes such a cutie. She makes me want to reconsider having kids. . . Almost. xD

Poor Tom/Voldemort doesn't know what to do about his feelings/lust. Poor guy must be SO unused to it, being the Dark-Lord-Who-Knows-Nothing-About-Love-Friendship-Kindess-Or-Anything-Else-Nice (Talk about a long title. . . xD)

I actually think his title should be, The-Man-Who-Just-Wouldn't-Frikken-Die. I mean how many times has he been 'killed' now? 5? 9? 5003245? xD

xoxo

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From ANON - Mari on March 19, 2011
Your Voldemort is wonderfully evil and yet it will be fascinating to watch him become a father. I am of course quite curious to see where that little tease with the evil shadow goes, I have a feeling once invested Voldy is going to be quite a protective father and not want anyone but himself corrupting his daughter. Poor Hermoine she gets up her courage to ask him to share a bed after he's cleaned up her puke? I doubt she'll see the bad timing and feel poorly for it which is a pity as its going to be lots of UST until one of these two snaps and then the super fun times they shall begin again. Love your story and the way you've put this pairing together.
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From Popcornbandit on March 11, 2011
Tom, always th actor. I have a feeling he really could care less about getting to know Hermione, who I am now worried for since he heard about her little escapede.

On a brighter note they're getting down to business and maybe now cute little Althea will be able to learn to talk since Hermione knows her problem. :D

Cannot wait for more updates, wonderful story. (Especially Althea, shes just so darling!)
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