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By : TheLadyMiya

From ANON - Alassea Riddle on August 04, 2012
Now THAT is what I call a chapter out of the ordinary. Great! Well done!

LOL Voldemort with a beard... that sounds kinda appealing. Maybe because it's him, cause I find nothing appealing about a beard XD

I feel kinda bad for Alex here. Poor thing doesn't know what's going through her dad's head. O.O Shame on you, Miya, cause we all know that these things reflect what YOU feel XD LOL

Oooh, MERLIN! I LOVE MERLIN! Thank you sooooooooooooo much for including him, even if it's just a portrait. I looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved it!
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From Nerys on July 16, 2012
As a most faithful and fast and never forgetfull beta, I must object to my comment regarding Ms Tamsin's characterisation not being taken under consideration. Miya, Miya, Miya, don't you see how OOC Ms Tamsin is? You have her sitting down NEXT to the Dark Lord while we all know she'd have plummeted in his lap, clutched all limbs around him and never would've let go. Just saying. *shakes head*

;)

Anyway, you know how much I loved the last chapter in the cave with all the action.

Loved the creativity of the tunnel digging and the description of going through it, that really souned claustrophobic and scary to me.

Loved how you had Merlin's painting be like an early version of moving paintings and his talk with Hermione.

Loved that Hermione went in and Voldemort got tossed in the water (er... I mean *shakes fist* such insolence! How dare you toss his almighty being in the water and make him lose his wand ... *sticks fist in mouth to muffle upcoming laughter*).

Loved the battle scene. Sure, just snatch her wand, LV, we all know she can't wield it at all. *rolls eyes* I especially liked how violent they both reacted to the other getting hurt and how you got him injured because he was checking up on her.

And then, Hermione having to fly ... it's so her to do it, despite her fears. Plus, I always enjoy an in charge Hermione. XDDD Also, I can't get over the sniggers I had when I read she basically stuck LV to her back like some sticker or backpack. *ROFLMAO at the mental image*

His fears of being put in stasis and thus helpless is so LV - I'm betting he'd preferred to just hang there, in pain, so he could comment on everything she did as they moved out of there.

Anyway, big kudos on your latest update and I'll look forward to the rest,

xx Nerys
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From ANON - sarahdaye9 on July 15, 2012
WOw! Amazing new chapter! Really loved the action scenes, as well as Hermione getting into Merlin's tomb and Tom getting stuck outside, made me laugh! Can't wait to see his reaction to hermione's copying efforts!
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From ANON - Alassea Riddle on July 12, 2012
Two reviews from me in one day, missy! Then again, you deserve better. I
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From ANON - Alassea Riddle on July 12, 2012
After a loooong wait, I finally review the chapter (and lookie! I
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From SalazarRaphael on July 03, 2012
I've followed your stories for a long time (the first one I read was The Contract a year ago), and while I curse your cliff hangers love the work and I REALLY wanna know what happens next in this story. REALLY!! I wanna see Hermione and Voldemort kick some fairy ass!!!!
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From ANON - Laura on June 26, 2012
Aw, man you cut out the sex scene lol!!! I wanted to read some hot anger sex! I'm so glad you updated I've been checking all the time, I love this story!
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From CafeAuLait on June 25, 2012
Ooh adventure time! YAY, lol, I like your adventures.

I like reading the story from Tom's pov. His logic is brilliant and very skewed. His logic about family makes me laugh. Although I do think he really cares about his daughters, even if he doesn't recognize it yet. (This was to the comment of him thinking about killing Alex.)

I have a feeling Alex is going to be a help to her family, although it might cause a bit of a hindrance.

I love that Hermione crucio'ed Tom. It was nice to see him on the other end of a wand, especially since he's so good at the curse.

Once Althea is found, I would LOVE to know what happens to her and Alex later in life. You're fics always serious, but I would really like to read a fic with Tom as the father of teenage girls, LOL,:dating, heart break, crushes, etc

I never read hp stories staring original characters, but I would read a fic based on Althea and Alex, especially Althea. I wonder if Teddy will still be a little shit at seventeen.
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From brightneeBee on June 24, 2012
Yay!!!! I've been waiting for the new chapter to be loaded! XD
I apologize for not reviewing sooner.... *punishes self* Bad, Bee! Bad, bad, Bee!
It's a habit that I am trying to break.
I loved this chapter, especially the end (and I am paraphrasing because I'm horrible at remembering word for word). "...since we've both managed to before..." "...do what?" "break into gringotts, of course..." Like it's the most nonchalant thing to say at that moment XD

Yay, Miya!!!!!
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From CafeAuLait on June 02, 2012
That's what I'm talking about. I can't wait for Hermione and Tom to tear the fairies. and anyone who gets in their way, apart.

Hermione has been going hard. I was sooo happy that she punched Harry in the face. I get why Harry did what he did, but still, he handled the entire thing wrong. On different note, after Hermione saw what happened with Ron she should have warned Harry to be on the look out for someone suspicious if she didn't want to tell him about the fairies. She and Tom became complacent, which is how Morgana pulled on over on them.

I like that Alex, although as temperamental as Tom, isn't a book worm like the rest of the family. I was sure because of her temper that she would be in Slytherin, but now, I'm thinking she's a Gryffindor. She's hot headed with a love of adventure, a true Gryffindor trait.

I hope Althea will at least enjoy her time with the fairies. It would suck if they hurt her, but I think they need her cooperation, so they'll make nice...until they get what they want.
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From CafeAuLait on June 02, 2012
The scene on the platform was heartbreaking. I'm so effing pissed at Harry. I'm not mad that he arrested them (I understand his reasoning); however, he shouldn't have done it in front of Alexandra. That was so effing inconsiderate of someone who has children himself.

Teddy is a dick. I know he's young, but I want to give him a swift kick in the pants.

I don't know how Hermione stays in a relationship with someone who doesn't love her. I could almost feel my heart hurting for her.
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From ANON - Laura on May 13, 2012
aaahhh I LOVE THIS STORY!!! It's my favorite hermione/voldemort out of all the ones I'm reading!!! It's so romantic but still real and believable! Good luck with your schoolwork I can't wait til June for more!!! XD
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From ANON - s on May 13, 2012
Wow! Good job to them for thouroughly discrediting harry! I bet no one is going to belive anything he says anymore! Totally cracked me up, him wanting to have sex in the cell too- good stress reliver though!s
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From AlasseaM on April 20, 2012
*cry* I'm so sorry for the late review Miya! *sob*
I really am. I even said "tomorrow"! Grrr! I should be cruciated! Twice! AAAHHHHHHH!
Can you ever forgive me? *puppy-eyes*

Sooo, let's start, shall we?
"Dad, where are my socks?" - First sentence and you already got me. I thought "oooh, what has the world come to? The Dark Lord is giving his baby girls socks..." LOL *widens eyes* AAAHHH! *hides* Althea is a free el- ehh... I said nothing. Ever. Got it?

"Careful with that, I just ironed them" - ROFLMAO I-I-I am noooot disrespectful. I am merely... erm... exercising my lungs. Yes, that's it, I'm exercising my lungs! Yep!
Well, as Nerys said, I want a Voldemort to do my housework too.......... "Nerys said", I said! Not me. Nope.

I want to go to Hogwarts toooooo! A new rumor says that it was Errol that actually didn't deliver the letters correctly! Wait! I have Pottermore now! *runs away*

Oooh, Althea has something similar to her father! O.O I am a little worried now. That's a very powerful wand.

"He was just finishing with the fried eggs (he was sick of porridge) when Hermione finally joined them" - He was sick of porridge made me laugh so much that I didn't realize Alexandra was there too until I reread the chapter.
So I actually failed reading this. Your fault Miya. *nods solemnly*

*snort* Of course he's manipulating his children to the directions he wants them to go. Whoop, whoop! I'm rooting for him! XD

Is it weird that I felt like cuddling Voldemort more than usual here? O.o

And then.... Harry's betrayal! >:/
He really didn't need to put Hermione in this. He should know of all people. But noooo... Killing Voldemort is more important than seeing that both girls lose their parents... of course he can't know the fact that they can both die but UUUGHHH! I HATE YOU HARRY! I never thought I would say that... D: I love Harry, but I hate him now... D:

Great chapter, dear Dictator and... proud owner of Nipple Bee.

- Allie
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From brightneeBee on April 16, 2012
im loving it, Miya!!!!! aff is finally letting me review this on my phone!!!!!! yay. love love love it, cant wait to read Shared Flame again :)
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