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By : melinda1293
  • From TwistOfLime on June 12, 2011
    WOW. I love this story. I don't know what made me start reading it because I usually don't like non-con, especially when it's so graphic, but your writing just pulled me in. Your writing is phenomenal and I LOVE your characterizations!! Especially Ron. I'm obsessed with the chapters in Ron's POV (though you do an amazing job no matter whose POV the chapter is in). I feel like Ron always gets such a bad wrap in fanfiction, they always make him out to be a one-dimensional asshole. It's so refreshing to see him as a real character.

    I can't wait to see how Hermione sorts out her feelings for Harry and how Ron deals with it. I love the dynamic you've created between the three of them. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Matt on June 12, 2011
    This is an excellent story! I can't wait to read more!!!The storyline is excellent! Keep upi the excellent work!!!
    P.S. Are Harry and Ginny going to make up after what he said to her?
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  • From ANON - anon-kitchen on June 11, 2011
    Wow, just found this and have spent the entire afternoon reading the whole thing. This is an EXCELLENT story and I can't wait to read the rest of it!
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  • From bloodshound on June 11, 2011
    oh Harry. 1 step forwars, 3 steps back.
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  • From SalonKitty on June 11, 2011
    Did I just catch you after you posted again? I mean, I just got home, lol, and there it was.

    Well, that was a whole lot of sleeping in this chapter. I wondered what was going on with Ron and Hermione while Harry was out all this time, but perhaps we'll find out next chapter?

    You made cunnilingus sound horrific, btw. It's not easy to make a rape by a woman sound so horrendously awful, but you sure managed to accomplish it. I'm glad that Harry was comforted by Hermione, but you had me guessing there, what was going to happen with that potion Madam Pomfrey gave him still in Harry's system. I guess his nightmare cured him of any lingering boners.

    Very curious to hear Ron's take on it.
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  • From ANON - roque on June 07, 2011
    Also - I'd like to second Salon_Kitty's review. She nailed exactly how I'm feeling about the whole chapter! All the same high points, things I loved, etc. You are EXCELLENT. I'm so sad to have to wait for more... ;P
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  • From ANON - rogue on June 07, 2011
    Yayyyyyy you updated!!! I was so excited to see that, lol. I keep your story up in a tab in my browser just so I can check and see if it's been updated XD.
    I love the way you write! So engaging! And I can't wait to see how things are going to go with Harry, and how the dynamics are going to continue evolving within the Trio. :D
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  • From SalonKitty on June 07, 2011
    I thought the scene in the Forest of Dean was really gripping. You built the tension nicely, and I was somewhat surprised at how forthcoming Harry was in his bitter wisecracks about what Snape had done. He deliberately revealed to Ron and Hermione what had happened between him and Snape in the guise of his telling off, so that when he finally mentioned how Snape had used the threat against Hermione to control him, I knew that Ron was going to lose it. Pretty brilliant move on Harry's part, I'd say. It's like he's got his own guard with his two best friends as his soldiers.

    Snape's reactions were just what I'd expect; you did a great job of letting us see the ongoing struggle of the man, and yet still managing to elicit some sympathy from the reader for Snape's plight. After the horrific story Harry just told them all about what Voldemort did to Lucius, it would seem that Snape's days are numbered. I shuddered at the images you created.

    The fact that Snape tipped his hand early with his memories, however....very curious to see how that plays out and how it will change the dynamics of their continued hunt. After all that Harry has been through, after the attempt on his own life....how will he deal with the knowledge that he was meant for sacrifice all along? And how are Hermione and Ron going to handle the fallout?

    I really loved the whisperings in the dark between Harry and Hermione. You have me dying to know just what she thought of Harry's morning rutting, and it was sort of a tease having the chapter in her pov and then not giving us her thoughts on the matter, but I like the way she avoided having to answer him. She's obviously very confused about that part of their recovery.

    And Harry pushing himself in order to fight, insisting that he's fine no matter what---that's just classic Harry. He's like the Black Knight from Monty Python and the Holy Grail. 'Tis just a flesh wound!' Lol, I love him. But I hope he can get back on his feet soon. I wonder when Hermione will start to put pieces together again and lead them on the hunt. With Harry still so weak, he's really going to need her to see their way ahead. I hope she's up to the task.

    Oh, and one more thing...Ron protecting them *both* is just so much big love I almost can't stand it. J'adore.
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  • From ANON - PCP on June 06, 2011
    HOLY SHIT.

    This is fucking fantastic! I mean...just wow. Just really wow. Christ. I was looking for something gritty and dark and I totally got it with this fic. Thank you! Holy crap.

    EXCELLENT JOB and please update soon!


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  • From bloodshound on June 04, 2011
    Wholy Hell, Harry soooo was NOT up for that. I hope Draco makes it though. I'm glad he's giving Snape a chance and i hope Snape takes it.
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  • From ANON - fudge on May 30, 2011
    amazing story, great ch :)
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  • From Divinit on May 29, 2011
    Love that Harry has had enough, and is making both Ron and Hermione see they truly aren't helping him, no matter how good their intentions.

    As for the Ginny issue, I wish he'd not push her away.
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  • From cmstrobridge on May 28, 2011
    Oh wow what a start to your story.
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  • From SalonKitty on May 28, 2011
    Well, that was pretty intense. It didn't really feel short, at all, there was so much happening between the three of them.

    I have to be honest, Greycie, I had a hard time with the last chapter and really didn't know what to say about it. I was probably as pissed off at Hermione and Ron as Harry. It was tough knowing how he felt about the numbness and then having to suffer through him being dosed with the potion. Even Ron's aggressive sexuality had me wondering where his head was at, what he was so frightened of that it would cause him to make some questionable judgments in the context of the circumstances. But to be able to feel Harry's anger so acutely in this chapter was almost cathartic. It also highlighted the inevitable difficulties that would arise in their relationship after being underfoot for so long.

    His thoughts about Lucius' knife infecting him as a Dementor are so heartbreaking, he's so on the edge of his sanity. Although I agree with some of what he said to Hermione and Ron at the party, it was still harsh and sad to see how his rage is in danger of tearing them apart. But that's exactly what Bella and company meant to do, and I hope Harry comes to realize that soon. But with his returning strength, his fury was bound to come along with it and unfortunately, Ron and Hermione are the ones there to take the brunt of it.

    As for his morning wood getting cozy with Hermione's bum, it was bound to happen sooner or later. I was worried the onset would be the result of a sexed up nightmare and who knows where something like that would lead.

    I can understand why he would be determined to meet with Snape, too, even though his feelings are murderous. It was satisfying to read him getting focused on something outside of his head and outside of Grimmauld for a change. In a strange way, it's just the kind of rope he needs to pull him forward.

    Looking forward to the meet up in the Forest of Dean.
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  • From bloodshound on May 27, 2011
    its fine, it takes concentration to get into snapes headspace. take your time.
    Wow Ron and Mio really f'd up hardcore didn't they. So many complications and issuues. When he no longer has the hunt to focus on Harry iis going to be a baskrt case.
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