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By : melinda1293

From TwistOfLime on July 24, 2011
That was an evil little cliffhanger you left us with!! I love the way you write the relationship between the three of them and I can't wait to see what happens now.
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From cynaga on July 24, 2011
[ch 24] really nice RonXHer het and great segwey into RonxHarry.
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From ANON - K3N0R4 on July 24, 2011
This is more than likely the BEST Harry Potter story I've ever read. It's amazing! It just goes together soooo well. I can't wait until the next chapter. You left off quite an interesting cliffhanger there. It makes me wonder what Harry will do now that Ron's made his feelings known. I'll be checking in from time to time to see when you update your story. Happy Writing!
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From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2011
This has 2 b the best story I've read cin a long while really amazing
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From bloodshound on July 14, 2011
they are coping very well all things considered but I wouldn't be surprised if there was 1 or more suffering psd after all is said and done.
So HOW exactly are they going to get the info they need on the horcruxs?
Also, it's your story, up date as yyou will, though personaly i prefer sooner rather than later. >>
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From ANON - Night Owl on July 14, 2011
LOVE this fic. I can honestly say that I have never read any other H/Hr/R pairing that seemed even a fraction possible as this one does - and, if not effortlessly, this fic puts an amount of realism into THAT relationship struggle in a way that contributes even more. Congratulations on a continuing fantastic job - I am very excited to read what comes next. I can sympathize with the mourning period, but please keep going! Best of luck to you... oh and PS - HOT as HELL. ;) I like it!
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From ANON - rogue on July 11, 2011
I've been reading fanfic for about 11 years now, Harry Potter mostly, and this fic of yours is one of my favorites, EVER. I canNOT wait to keep reading, I so wish it were finished! lol. I'm so very, very glad you decided to finally share your masterpiece with us :D
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From Daye on June 28, 2011
This is a nice change of pace though I'm sure you'll mix it up next week by having Harry wolf out or Hermione's head explode or something. ;)

And we may be wondering back into DH proper territory? Given how much extra time they've taken sitting around at the mansion. I wonder how far along LV's got with his stuff, getting the elder wand I mean.
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From bloodshound on June 28, 2011
Appreciated the angst break. Not even literally previously tortured teens can be angsty all the time... just 99.5 percent of it. :P
I'm glad they're re establishing their relationship... are 3 somes permitted in thiss potteverse? Occasionally it looks like that's the direction their meandering in from time to time.
It;ll be interesting to see how they handle snatching that horcrux considering Harry's health is still wobbly.
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From SalonKitty on June 27, 2011
Great little cliffhanger there, and a good way to set up the next chapter. Bring on the next round of angst!

Lol, but concerning your notes I do think this chapter struck the right balance of intimacy between Harry and Hermione, and a shared relief between all three of them. I loved the way Harry was able to tease Ron about his 'horny hands' and I thought Ron's gruff embarrassment, particularly after we realize what kept him up all night, was right on cue. The silliness you allude to was not only needed for our trio, but realistic, especially after their huge blow out the day before. I was also impressed with the conversation between Harry and Hermione while they were still in bed and felt it rung true. Harry's qualms about being able to be with Ginny broke my heart as much as it did Hermione's, but I'm glad he was able to open up to her about it. You're working them closer to a certain ease in sharing these kinds of scary feelings with each other, and making it plausible for Harry to confide in them more and more.

This was a scar she could only hear and not see though, like the ones in his mind that she only heard in their whisperings in the dark or when they hemorrhaged, bleeding out into terrified nightmares

I thought that was a fantastic way to aptly describe Harry's more troubling emotional wounds. Lovely prose.
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From SalonKitty on June 17, 2011
An actual, Harry initiating it, hug. He couldn
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From ANON - fudge on June 17, 2011
love this story! once again, an amazing ch
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From Daye on June 17, 2011
Well I really liked Poppy standing up for herself with Harry and pointing it out that he was actually better afterwards. But then we went into Ron pretty much laying him to him as well. Seems like they decided to really stick it to him that day.

And why are they so insistent they all have to share a single bed? I mean sure they want to be in the room to keep an eye on Harry but they could easily move in another bed from another room. Or conjure a camp bed or move into another room that has more beds or anything. Seems to be slightly contrived drama to me. Even if they were in seperate beds you can still have the 'not supposed to be shagging' clause in there as well.
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From bloodshound on June 17, 2011
wow, messed up. Still, i think it's going to take Ron a bitt to adjust (if he does)to that idea.
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From ANON - apkblack on June 17, 2011
That was thoroughly and incredibly cathartic.

The integrity of your portrayal of Ron is really something special to me. Not like he's a favorite character normally, but you're so beautifully in his head, and it feels very true to the Ron we all know, the stream-of-Ron-consciousness you're laying out here.

And nothing is rushed, nothing is forced, and the end ... I was wincing just reading it, utterly immersed in Ron's confusion, right there with him.

So well done.
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