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Reviews for Atonement

By : absumoaevum
  • From ANON - ginzo on February 14, 2012
    Hey there, just read your last chapter and I gotta say it was pretty cool. There was a lot of plot development in the previous chapters so it was sort of nice to slow it down a little. I was wondering if it would be possible to show Draco in a more badass light lol, like having him march up to the slytherin stands to watch the game haha :D, tht wud be quite awesome but then again I am a complete and hopelessly big fan of Draco loll :p. Anyways awesome chapter, cheers!! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2012
    Just wanted to say that it's been a very long time since I've read a story like this. You have great pacing and character development. The whole premise is completely unlike any other story I've read, and it's very enjoyable. I actually read the entire thing in one go, simply because I was so engrossed that I just couldn't stop. You're a very talented writer, and I look forward to reading more of this story.
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  • From ANON - elementalwitch on February 13, 2012
    So good... so very good. I start reading these and after a page or two I usually say *sigh* But this one is keeping me going- I find I can't wait for updates, and I want to see what is next. It's believable I think.. the way they behave. I rather like that- some stories are so ooc and have them falling together so quickly. This, slow, methodical, following the rational steps- quite brilliant.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 11, 2012
    That was brilliant. I've never seen them "start over" in quite that way. Brave, to you! Strangers... I liked it! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - blindfaithoperadiva on February 10, 2012
    Me likies.
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  • From lillyput93 on February 10, 2012
    I really like this story!!!!! The Hufflepuff(did I even spell that right?) boys amuse me to no end! You need to work on your summary though. It doesn't reflect how awesome this story is!
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  • From abbycolao on February 09, 2012
    I don't remember if I've reviewed yet, but I really like your story
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  • From dracoschick007 on February 09, 2012
    Awwww, how sweet! I think becoming friends will be a great thing for bothe Hermione and Draco. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From Mikka on February 09, 2012
    At last, they forgive each other! ;_; It was so cute, with the hug and all the "I'm sorry"s that followed. I was a bit disappointed for not seeing Draco's thoughts in this chapter, but that ending made up for it. Oh please, please don't keep us waiting long. I'll keep checking every day for updates. :D
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on February 08, 2012
    This story is ridiculously well written i love it. I never read Draco as a hufflepuff but i find it to be amazing and so are your original characters, do you have this story anywhere else?
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 07, 2012
    From her thoughts to her breakdown to Draco's concern and support to her apology...that was beautiful! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From dracoschick007 on February 07, 2012
    WOW! That was a very intense chapter! Loved the whole Draco/Hermione scene at the end. Now I hope Ron and Harry can understand why Hermione is doing what she is doing. Harry might but Ron is such an ass that he just wont get it. Anyway, until next time, best wishes and happy writing!
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  • From ANON - ginzo on February 06, 2012
    wow this is a fantastic story, and i am loving how quickly the updates are coming cant wait for more updates :D. Personally i would love it if Draco burns his Dad in his trial because he wasn't present for his mom's trial lol, although i have never had much love for Lucius Malfoy as all the choices he made seemed to me that they were rather his own, and while its true that Lucius was subjected to the same bigotry that purebloods of Malfoy family have been subjected to, he still had quite a few chances available for him to become someone above those flawed morals. Well that's just me ranting though lol, it is a great great great story that is written extremely well and it is one that I am having a lot of fun reading. Also the whole confusion that you showed on Hermione's part, while it is taxing and frustrating, it is also quite thrilling as she feels as if she is just about to snap and come to a revelation. All in all the whole grey area that you depicted in this story, it is just very enjoyable to read, and as a fan I can't wait for more updates :D. So can we have another update soon plz loll :)
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  • From ANON - Elie on February 05, 2012
    I love it, no joke.

    It's not rushed, it has a plot, a believe make up of characters and traits although the back and forth of Hermione is giving my whiplash,but I certainly enjoy it and look forward to more!
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  • From dracoschick007 on February 04, 2012
    I new Narcissa would be acquitted! Now, when are we going to get to some Draco/Hermione action? I think the owlery would be a good place for a little conversation. So, when's another update going to be here?
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