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Reviews for The Marriage of True Minds

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From on April 24, 2011
    I liked this chapter maybe Draco has feelings for Harry so he decided to go talk to I'll wait the next chapter.

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  • From bloodshound on April 23, 2011
    Does that mean Harry could have some Potter heirs too? Nicely managed idea though, sort of a magical surrogacy.
    Can't say as i blame Narcissa on choosing Harry too, at least they know where they stand with him. A nice lack of head games. Now all tey gotta do is bring Harry around... have fun with that Draco mwahaha.
    I liked Draco's point on his fathers curtailing of his knowledge. It's an important point to reach.
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on April 23, 2011
    but 'What about Love?' I can hear that song playing in the background.
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  • From ANON - little_nite_owl on April 23, 2011
    Oh yes, this is MOST satisfying. I really like the way you use language in your stories.

    This business about conceiving children outside of the marriage bond is quite interesting. My mind is whirling with possibilities and questions.
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  • From ANON - BK on April 23, 2011
    yay :) yes there is some now, haha sort of ;)
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  • From SParker on April 21, 2011
    about #14...

    1. Yaaay Draco!!! That's right tell that skinny arse skank
    to take her bags and DON'T let the door hit you on the
    way out...even if he WASN'T at his home when he told her
    off, the Malfoy way. :-p

    2. Damn, Narcissa really did make Lucius feel like he
    was related to the gnomes by the time she was through with
    him. I wonder how he feels now...at two feet tall! :-D

    3. Now, do something with Idiot Ron, who REALLY is a
    kill-joy for existing at this point.
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  • From NightLo on April 21, 2011
    After catching up for so many lost chapters, now I start wondering...'when' do they change their mind on this bond...it is really a start of serious matter if you compare Harry/Draco with Astoria/Ginny, what you see in them, what you do not see in the other and then you try to defend for the differences, lastly you also let that affect you much...it means you care or like about the other enough...

    Would Draco start courting Harry seriously after his thinking? Would Lucius dissolve the bond after finding out the appearance of steel if he really cares the name of Malfoy so much? Will the bond force Harry to spend more time with the Malfoys? And what will happen if...the bond finally dissolves?
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  • From on April 21, 2011
    Poor Draco turned out that the bride was not what I wanted and Harry is happy because he wants to marry and have family Giny good chapter.
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  • From bloodshound on April 21, 2011
    hmmm, 1 potential spouce down, 1 to go. Draco seems slightly less in denial than Harry, though only slightly. The list in Draco's hand, a potential spouse list?
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  • From ANON - W on April 21, 2011
    I really liked this chapter^^
    (I thought it would be best to say the important things first)

    Although it was a quiet chapter, it made me feel as if the story was gathering momentum. That they both start to think about the other and what he wants is a good sign. And I really have to applaud Narcissa for the way she was handling her husband. Although I still don't really know why steel would be so important in the rings, it certainly seemed to have shaken Lucius. I think she has a lot more influence on him than Draco realizes. But why didn't she use it sooner? Perhaps she wasn't sarcastic when she said that she tinks Harry a better partner for Draco than Astoria...

    And the dialogue with Astoria was just brilliant! Draco really starts to loosen up. He isn't the iceberg he pretended to be at the beginning and he also isn't searching for one, eighter. By the way, one sentence really had me thinking of Shakespeare^^ "I sought a partnership, and you showed me a harness." That was just a beautiful metaphor and I don't think I'll forget that one any time soon! Simply brilliant!
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  • From ANON - BK on April 20, 2011
    I like this a lot, i just wish there was some actual progress already ffs! lol
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  • From ANON - polka dot on April 19, 2011
    Oh wow AFF is finally letting me review again. It's been really picky lately. I can understand Harry's frustration. It's the story of my life now. Anyway I do see Draco being very vindictive even if it makes him unhappy. But living well is the best revenge. he would be better off throwing Lucius out of the house. I'm sure daddy would be thrown in Azkaban in no time at all.
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  • From SParker on April 19, 2011
    about lucky #13...

    Damn Harry, got claws...with that hiss??? O_o

    Well, it's no wonder Harry's feeling a little
    endearment towards Draco, if he keeps grabbing
    Harry's hand every 5 minutes. :-)

    Other than that, looks like progress is being made
    getting our boys together.
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  • From bloodshound on April 18, 2011
    I'm with Harry on this one. Poking a maddened snake isn't smart. Stil, are we sure there isn't something wrong with Luc? Why iss he so desperate? Its like he really does need his head read.
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  • From ANON - kit on April 18, 2011
    Even though the chapter was mostly just dialogue between draco and harry, I was intrigued by how they would handle the situation with lucius and just couldn't take my eyes off the page until i finished the chapter. I enjoying reading about how harry and draco are getting closer and closer together even though they don't want to. Im wondering how much of their feelings and progress in the relationship are influenced from the rings?
    Well, Im excited to read what will happen in the next chapter; specifically what narcissa will do to lucius. thanks for the quick and lengthy updates!
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