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Reviews for The Marriage of True Minds

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Cinder1013 on March 23, 2011
    I'm very anxious to hear what those scars are all about. You've really intrigued me. More soon, please.
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  • From CherryBomb on March 23, 2011
    Again, I /love/ your Beautiful writing style. I really can't wait to see where you take Malfoy and Potter in this fic.
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  • From Freada749 on March 22, 2011
    About Ch 4:

    I really don't think the best way to convince people that you're content with your marriage is to inadvertently restrain and almost kill someone with reflexive magic on the first day... There must be something really serious about those scars. Has Harry had other outbursts like this before? I find it a bit weird to believe that the other Aurors are so accepting of this display of power, even as they recognize that it's dangerous. I'm also curious what happens if there's no light when Harry wakes up. For some reason the movie Shrek comes to mind, even though I don't think that's quite it. :P
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  • From ANON - Lumcer on March 22, 2011
    Wowwie I really am getting into this, so you have me during over the scars here. And draco can be such a pounce but I love him all the same. Lucius needs to be hit over the head with a frying pan. Write more soon please!

    KCK-Lumcer
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  • From bloodshound on March 22, 2011
    din think Harry would have it in him to lie to his friends and family. Pity none of them are dark enough to have connetions... or the will, to assasinate Malfoy sr.... it'd take care of a lot of problems. :P
    Still, Harry's reaction to the room and his scars are most intriguing.
    I eagerly await more.
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  • From ANON - Mehla_Seraphim on March 17, 2011
    Typo? "His ancestors hadn't cared about Malfoy hairs and their spouses giving their bodies to other people;" Anywho I think this story is growing on me. I prefer the stories where Harry and Draco aren't completely horrible to each other.
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  • From Freada749 on March 17, 2011
    About Ch 3:

    Tisk, tisk. Lying so early in the marriage? :P I loved that actually. Much more in character than having only each other to talk to about something so serious. I had a big respect for Ginny moment when she wouldn't let Harry kiss her. As much as I don't like her being involved because she's usually in the way of our boys I did like her having dignity instead of being an annoying little fangirl about it. That happens too often. This put her on a parallel with Astoria, even though the two would probably consider each other so different, and that was also refreshing. I so curious about what happens when someone touches the rings! I'm hope that will play apart later on so I get to see it!

    All that aside, my favourite part of this chapter was about the Malfoys' view of Harry as part of the family. Draco saying Harry wasn't "were he belonged" and Narcissa saying that he was theirs. That strong pull of family will be a very strong pull. As much as the Weasleys have a sense of family it doesn't seem like they would be THAT inclusive and protective.
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  • From bloodshound on March 17, 2011
    there you go again, answering most of my Q's in the chappie. ^^
    I know you said this one would be long ish... but i am curios to know how thwy get around the need for heirs when they discover they love each other... and when is Luc going to finish his hissy fit.
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  • From YamiBakura on March 17, 2011
    Chapter 3

    Narcissa is one of my accidental favourite characters, and I'm really happy with the way you portray her here. Definitely looking forward to more of this.
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  • From SParker on March 17, 2011
    about #3...

    Damn, just as I was getting into it...the chapter
    ends. Your chapters are TOOO short! *pouts*

    Anyway, I like this and Narcissa playing Devil's
    Advocate [you should do a story with a tiltle like
    that] for Harry is..well it has me cackling..evilly.

    Is that a word evilly?
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  • From fudgebaby on March 16, 2011
    loving this!
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  • From bloodshound on March 15, 2011
    so bluntly put, Luc's being a brat throwing a hissy fit till her gets what he wants...
    He might be waiting a while on that one. Draco and Harry are both uber stubbourn.
    you've answered most of my Q's with this chapter... still, i'm suprised that the taken spouses family doesn't get to legally whinge.
    If he doesn't watch himself he's going to end up with bastard grand kiddies.
    one of the reviews had a point on Ginny too. She's not the type to take this sitting down.
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  • From Freada749 on March 15, 2011
    About Ch 2:

    "sped past like altuism past a Death Eater" :D Hahaha!

    I can certainly understand the practical reasons for going along with this now. They've definitely discussed it. What I don't really understand is how they think that their friends/future fianc
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  • From dominique1 on March 15, 2011
    i do hope that learn to love each other
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  • From SParker on March 15, 2011
    about #2..

    1. inimitably...hmph say THAT one five
    times fast.

    2. As intense as this was...I enjoyed Lucius'
    twisted brand of humor, no matter how much
    Harry wanted to hall off and smack the shit
    out of him.

    3. You may have seen the 'forced marriage' in
    the fandom, BUT have you seen it done lately
    in a Harry & Draco story/section, not in General.
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