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By : Lomonaaeren

From SParker on June 27, 2011
about #38..

Why that DIRTY little bastard!!! O_o

They'll be devastated! Draco more than Harry.
Will Mama Cissa come to the rescue, at least?

I hope their feelings don't get dampened by this
and make Harry think it WAS the bond and not just
true feelings.

*sigh* kill the author for that unexpected attack
on two people just discovering their feelings. :-(
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From ANON - shulan33 on June 27, 2011
I have stayed up all night reading this fantastic story of your's and was ecstatic to see that you had updated the story just as I was getting to the 37th chapter.
I am so looking forward to the next chapter, I wonder how still having the 4 bands will affect harry. Hopefully he'll see it in a positive light.
I have conflicted feelings over Ian. I don't like his relationship to harry but at the same time I feel for him. That he still tries to be with harry after catching him and draco many a time in ... compromising situations is in its own way sort of sweet, but also a bit pathetic.
Now I love the Laura character. She intrigues me. I like her attitude, she's spunky. lol. I can't wait to see Hermione, because she is also one of the girl characters that i like, (unlike Ginny) because of her strong personality.
One of the things I love about this story is that it really shows the transition into love between Harry and Draco. When every they have their little moments together i always feel a little tug on my heart strings. haha corny, right. I guess I'm just a sucker for love.
Anyway love your stories and can't wait for chapter 39~!
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From ANON - river girl on June 27, 2011
Ouch, what a cliff hanger! Wow, ok, I want to know what happens next. This story is really wrapping together but so many questions left. Though I'm really wondering what's going to happen with Laura and Ian. Wonder if the two of them would make a good match, instead, because Harry and Draco so, so, so need to figure this things out.

Also, thank you for writing one of the few Mrs. Malfoy's I like.
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From mrequecky on June 27, 2011
OMG!!! That was a sudden twist! I wonder that means...
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From ANON - Zip on June 27, 2011
Cliffhanger, nooo, I hope there will be update soon. Briliant chapter. Well, looks like Lucius is kind of late :P, serve s him right.
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From xcrystaldragonx on June 27, 2011
Totally awesome cliffie!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, so keep up the great work!!
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From NightLo on June 26, 2011
So now we have some leads / solutions for the most obvious problem, at least the case is coming to an end. Yet for the marriage, would Harry easily accept what Narcissa intends to offer, wouldn't Lucius somehow make it difficult? How's about Narcissa and Lucius knowledge of the beast? Would they oppose? Would they find out how to cleanse the beast from Harry?
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From ANON - Althydia on June 25, 2011
Also: seeing what Narcissa's punishment for Pansy was, I wonder what she would do to the decay wizards and Abernathy if she could get away with it...? Draco too, for that matter!
Harry is so strong to face his demons too. I'm in awe. :) I wish people in the wizarding world would realise how strong he is and everything he's endured for them, instead of believing the garbage found in the press about him.
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From ANON - Althydia on June 25, 2011
Another great chapter! Yes, Draco is possessive and protective of Harry indeed. But he wants to include Harry in decisions concerning him too and not hide things from him, which shows that he knows Harry better now and respects him. Now for Harry? He's more accepting of Draco's interferences, probably because he now understands that Draco is worried and cares about him. I loved it when he said 'Our family' and Draco made 'a face like the sunrise' - actually he often notices Draco shining or someting related to light or the sun. In oppositon to the darkness he's afraid of, Draco is a beacon of light and a positive influence? How sweet. :) Also, it's important that Draco shows his support of Harry to the other Aurors too, particularly when Harry will disclose very personal and traumatising information. I hope that it will also make Harry understand that supporting your husband is part of a marriage and not a weakness. And the ritual is put off for a while too, how convenient.
About Narcissa: I'm glad she's also looking out for Harry and trying to find ways to protect him. I think she's the one who notices the most how Draco and Harry are good for each other, as husbands and for their influence on each other. I guess she must be happy that Draco is listening less to his Malfoy upbringing and showing more Black characteristics? I wish Narcissa would be more explicit about her approval and how she wished they could stay married, though. So that Harry and Draco could realise that they have someone who genuinely wants them to stay married because they are good for each other. Plus, with Draco's feelings for his mother, I'm sure that if she told him that Harry would make a better spouse than anyone else Draco could find, it would influence his decision too...

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From SParker on June 24, 2011
about #37..

1. The second stage would mean a foul-smelling and painful venereal disease...
- damn..remind me NOT to piss off Mama Cissa. O_o

2. He needed the protection of a proper, proud, powerful family...
- what tha'...do you realize how many p's is in that sentence???
Admit it, you did it on PURPOSE. Hahahaha.. :-D

3. You know without a doubt I always love to see 'Take Charge' Harry,
even when he goes into danger mode. I hope Harry gets a chance to give
them a taste of what he felt, better yet I hope he gets a chance to fight the
beast properly one day.
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From bloodshound on June 24, 2011
wow, short n to the point compaired to the others. I;m getting the feeling that ritual ain't gonna end dup being used. heh
Those chaos mages. tsk. so selfish. *shakes head at them. and so obsessed. Will Harry really tell the truth? Still at least we are getting answers... and Harry is accepting being a Malfoy more and more. I hope Luc doens't do anything to mess with it now.
neh, how many bands are possible and will they get any more?
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From ANON - Silvry on June 21, 2011
I loved this chapter (ch 36)! The twist was amazing, I didn't see it coming at all. And the level of injury and the desperation in Draco had my heart sinking until I felt like passing out like Draco. Usually I can handle stuff like this but you have developed the story in a way that I have grown attached, and it actually worried me to see Harry get hurt so badly. And I must say I grinned and chuckled a little when the healer ignored Draco with an eye roll. Clearly he was persistent.

I feel a little bit bad for Ian, but at the same time I don't because he knew what he was getting into, and I am pleasantly surprised to see that he ended up showing Harry how attached he has become to Draco. I noticed he always compares Ian to Draco, and yet he never seems able to match up. It makes me smile because I am growing more and more fond of Draco.

On the subject of Draco I like how he is finally realizing how much he loves Harry and he is paying less attention to his other marriage plans. Oh and he is very clever! I loved his retorts against the reporters. Very elegant, with a well placed pinch of bite.

Keep up the amazing work. I cant wait to see what else is up that amazing sleeve of yours. I am always pleasantly surprised :3
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From NightLo on June 21, 2011
...why would the decay wizards/witches act so openly this time? Aren't they scretive and careful, that's why it takes months for them to sort out? I am just wondering what has changed....To me, they seem the type holding an illusional image of Harry, that he must be perfect and sad because all great heroes die at the end...???

A new band, now Ian does understand the meaning, how would he take such change? And how will Lucius and Narcissa think when they have so many bands between them?
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From ANON - Zip on June 21, 2011
That was a pretty chapter (36), I liked it a lot. There was action and emotion. :)
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From bloodshound on June 21, 2011
Heh, they just keep adding to that ring. ^^
Soon, I'm betting they won't be able to brake it even if Luc agrees or they try that ritual.
Poor Ian is practically getting writen out before he even got in. :P
I'm glad they've got a solid lead but damn those decay mages really have it in for Harry.
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