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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - dust in the wind on June 28, 2011
    i just noticed something. you are writing all my favorite stories. *gets down on my knees and kisses your feet*. keep it coming.
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  • From SParker on June 26, 2011
    about #26....

    Well, now we just wait & see what the consequences
    of the meeting will be.

    O_O Oh, and thank you for putting the three souls
    explanation in there, Lomona. O___O
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  • From SParker on June 24, 2011
    about #25...

    I don't know if I've said this before, but Draco is a 'mess'. :-)
    He IS fun to read in this story, doesn't take himself seriously,
    which is good.

    It's also good to see Harry IS able to take care of himself, for
    a minute or two..or three, I thought he needed folks to hold his
    hand. SO, to see him take action is nice.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on June 24, 2011
    I think there would be more panic in the air. Harry is jobless in this economy. bad days ahead
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  • From SParker on June 15, 2011
    about #23...

    1. Good lawd...it JUST occurred to me, 20+ chapters later, that
    your titles are based on 'time'. Is there a reason for the theme?
    Does it mean that time is running out or something?

    2. ????....Did you just give Draco Malfoy, a Muggle equivalent of
    a ringtone...in his FLOO system? O_o
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  • From ANON - kit on June 08, 2011
    how strange for hermione and ron to try and get rid of everything that was gained for them by Harry. I know that they want their achievements to be through their own actions and 'justified', but for them to quit their jobs, leak details that may result in george's arrest, etc, is a little too much. I like Ginny's perspective in how she will ignore the foundation and make her success her own from that moment on rather then to end her whole business based on principles.
    I'm eager to see how this all plays out. :)
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  • From SParker on June 07, 2011
    Yes, you did mention that there's a soul for each 'occasion',
    I just thought you had a more detailed description of each, like
    a character trait.
    ***********************
    about #22..

    I'm telling you spreading that rumor has disaster written ALL
    over it, maybe Harry should hire a Slytherin for damage control
    and I never thought I'd see a Weasley project an air of...restraint.

    Good of her to take the high road on this one, after all when it's
    all said & done, Harry was ONLY doing it to help...all of them.

    Other than that, you got yourself a complex story, can't wait to
    see how you 'bring it home'. :-)
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on June 07, 2011
    Luna has always lived in bizarro world, I just can't see Ginny living there with her. But as long as she's not bringing Harry down with here cannon love....
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  • From SParker on June 06, 2011
    about #21...

    Hahaha! If I said it once, I'll say it again.
    Draco is a MESS! :-)

    I have never seen a character as one-tracked minded
    as he is...

    Harry: 'Draco, this is a simple complex situation'
    Draco: 'Of course this is a simple sex situation,
    you're the one making it hard.'
    Harry: O_o 'I said 'complex'
    Draco: 'Oh....pity'

    ...but he is entertaining when he wants to be, makes
    me wonder does he EVER get mad?

    By the way, I'm surprised no one has really asked, but
    how would you describe each of these '3 souls' that Harry
    has for any given situation?
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  • From ANON - polka dot on June 04, 2011
    aww, well if that at love, at least it's smutty
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  • From ANON - Lara on June 03, 2011
    Okay, first of all, you are probably one of my favorite Harry/Draco authors of all time, if not my number one favorite. I've read nearly every story you've written and they are all incredible. Practicing Liars and Inter Vivos have to be two of my favorite (I have a weakness for at-Hogwarts fics). Now, for my review: I love Contracted. The contract seems just like something Harry would do. He really doesn't seem to realize how to harnass influence himself, so making the proverbial deal with the devil truly is something that he would do. Draco is perfectly written. A little cocky, but not as bad as at Hogwarts; proud of his family name so he wants to make it better; feeling like he owes Harry; wanting to,not change Harry, but bring out the real Harry again. It's just perfect. I've also decided to review this specifc chapter because of Hermoine and Ron's reaction to the contract. Seems about right. Now, anger I can understand and accept, but they were just mean! Which is how they're very Gryffindor selves would react. They got everything they ever wanted because their friend essentially sold himself for their causes, happiness, careers, giving up any choice he had to do what he wanted and instead of trying to help him to get out of it or trying to understand what would bring him to do that, they get mad at him. I'm mad at them, which is a testament to your writing. I'm even more invested in this story than I was before, which is saying a lot. Excellently written, and I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Nubia on June 02, 2011
    I am angry with Ron and Granger because they are so hard on Harry did not make the contract only for good help and I liked the chapter, the next chapter please jejejej.

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  • From SParker on June 01, 2011
    about #20...

    1. Hermione shivered. "Harry. No. You couldn't have hidden that from us. You can't act that well."
    - oookay..I'm not Harry, but even I felt a little insulted by that comment.

    2. Ron closed his eyes, and opened them. "I wouldn't have got into the program on my own?" he asked in a leaden voice..
    - uhhh...HELL noooo!!! Ya' just ain't that good! Next!

    3. All in all, I won't say how I REALLY feel about those two narrow-minded individuals who act like they've
    forgotten that Harry is a self-sacrificing individual & has always been since they were kids!!! Have their
    brains leaked since they started working in the Ministry..or did Harry make them feel THAT incompetent?
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  • From ANON - kit on June 01, 2011
    well, that was intense!
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  • From ANON - Nubia on May 30, 2011
    I think his plan to take the game to Sandborn going to take time because it is a clever person Draco also good time will tell what will happen. good chapter.
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