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Reviews for Contracted

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Erin_49 on April 11, 2011
    About Ch 8:

    "Maybe she did have something to worry about" Loved it! Calia's getting really anxious, I wasn't quite expecting that. I knew she would have to be driven away somehow but I thought it would be more of a private thing, what with her being so well brought up and all. I have to agree with Draco on this one, she's not a suitable partner if she can't keep those emotions in check in public. Also, I thoroughly approve of this plan!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on April 10, 2011
    That's some plan Draco came up with. Definitely not your typical plan wink wink
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  • From ANON - polka dot on April 05, 2011
    stone babies it does seem utterly ridiculous. Then again, I'm reading an article entitled Babies with flat heads on the rise and it's in Time, so who knows, maybe.
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  • From SParker on April 05, 2011
    about #7...

    Whatever happened to simple words?

    No..
    I...
    Don't..
    Want...
    To..
    Marry..
    You..

    See, was that hard? :-)

    ..and if you want you can do 'Yo..Azz' at the end instead. :-)
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  • From Freada749 on April 04, 2011
    About Ch 7:

    I feel for Callia in this chapter. It sounds like, as much as she agreed to a marriage based on convenience, she was really hoping to get love and a family somewhere in the bargain. I'm a bit concerned about how flustered Harry seemed in this chapter. The idea of freedom seems to have shaken him rather badly. My concern is that, while the Slytherins can free him relatively soon, he may give away the game before it's time with his mistakes.
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  • From ANON - purple-er on April 01, 2011
    Pansy was hilarious and evil. ^^
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  • From bloodshound on March 31, 2011
    Harry needs a smack up the head for the mind view he's boxed himself into. Hopefully the Slyths will jolt him out of it. And what deviousness is Pansy up tp. Oh man, i can't wait to see it when things start to crack. ^^
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  • From ANON - polka dot on March 31, 2011
    yeah, I'm not sure if Harry's gonna want that kind of help. Talk about the cure being worse than the disease.
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  • From Freada749 on March 31, 2011
    About Ch 6:

    I've never been a fan of Ginny/Luna but this scene gave me a few chuckles. I'm starting to really like Pansy. It's nice to see a character so blatently arrogant and amused at others without being completely pompous or outright insane. It makes me feel better about agreeing with her. :P
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  • From SParker on March 28, 2011
    2011-03-28 id # 3001354704
    about #5...

    Now, that's interesting what you did...make a
    pure blooded woman, who you expect to only
    marry, tend parties and make sure they always
    have an ear open for gossip...and make her a
    thief and it was Daphne, of all people.

    Why her?

    By the way, when is Harry going to get off his
    ass and make a move?


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  • From bloodshound on March 27, 2011
    ooh, Harry is sooooooooooooo going to lose control of his 'three souls' at some point in the future. I can practically taste it.
    Yes Harry get use to the wafts of hope, they're around to stay. ^^
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  • From Freada749 on March 27, 2011
    About Ch 5:

    I love Daphne Greengrass as a world class thief! Definitely someone useful to have around and by the looks of things at the end of the chapter she did a damn good job. She reminds me a bit of Artemis Fowl if you've ever read those books. Will we ever find out what was on the parchment she left in place of the contracts? This definitely was a turning point chapter not only because of Harry realizing how much he wants his freedom but also starting to consider what his relationship is with Draco.
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  • From Cinder1013 on March 25, 2011
    Love love love! I can't wait to see what tricks the Slytherins have up their sleeves. Especially Pansy.
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  • From bloodshound on March 23, 2011
    would he have kept up the 3 soul thing if hr got hitched? I mean where would he keep his alone time then? Send her off on shopping trips?
    Harry's gonna crack if
    malfoy aln't careful or maaybe he wants that.
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  • From Freada749 on March 23, 2011
    About Ch 4:

    Absolutely fantastic! I love how Draco is reading through Harry's mask. For a minute there I thought it wouldn't happen but that doubt just gives force to the strength of the mask and of Draco's abilities. Well done there! I really like that we're starting to see some deeper thoughts from Harry, how he feels about himself and the contract. It starts clearing up the situation and sets Draco in a higher esteem because he is now freeing Harry not only from the contract but from his damaging self-disgust.

    I also loved how often Draco said the word "temptation". :P
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