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Reviews for Finding True Happiness

By : CeliaEquus
  • From Samibear on August 10, 2011
    Sequel plzzzz! ^_^
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  • From Nexides on May 19, 2011
    Okay, I'm going to admit up front: I'm mainly reading this because the WTF-ness of the pairing intrigues me. You made a good first impression with chapter 1. Here's hoping it continues.
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  • From scarlettelover on May 10, 2011
    I love it I love it I love it!! PLEASE write a sequel!
    If you do, Hermione SHOULD be pregnant.
    As for Peeves, I think Peeves should be his last name...so it's like Jason Peeves or something like that. You know? So you still get the Peeves in there. :D
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  • From MalfoysBitch on April 25, 2011
    just read this story in one sitting! It was brilliant! Hope your going to do a sequal, hope hermione wont be pregnant, let them have fun first! And the 'pranks' peeves played on malfoy - brilliant! Poor Ginny! I had an idea he was using her as soon as it started, just didnt think it would be like that! And im glad you didnt go straight into happily ever after! That would just suck! Loved the whole story! And i think its adorable that you think dam is a swear word! (in ireland and the uk,its just a regular expression!!!)
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  • From Avivafae on April 15, 2011
    Id love a sequel, but a Hermione/Salazar story would be cool.
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  • From ktgymnastics on April 13, 2011
    This was a great ending to a wonderful story:)
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  • From dragongirl on April 13, 2011
    EPILOGUE EPILOGUE EPILOGUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL
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  • From Koolgirl18 on April 13, 2011
    Alright, now its time for the overall review! Usually when i follow stories to the end I like to take a look through them again and give my overall thoughts.

    First of all, I love that you had the guts to post a story with a rare and strange pairing such as this. Not every writer can put their kinkiest ideas out there without fearing the rejection. Its a harsh world out there in fanfiction--and you are one of the few survivors.

    The flow of the story was good. The smut scenes were amazing, incredibly nice. The dynamics between Peeves and Hermione was believable though I personally thought your Hermione was a little too mild tempered. I also thought your Ginny was too mild tempered as well. In my interpretation of the characters, Hermione doesn't seem the type to just let Peeves go after he hurt her. She would hex his balls off and then break down and cry. She wouldn't let her school work suffer for a guy who hurt her. Her middle finger to Peeves would have been to move on with her life despite the fact that she was in pain. Hermione is a planner and she would have never left her life to fate the way that she did in this fic. Now one could argue that she was experiencing love for the first time but I personally don't think love would have muddled her logical brain quite as much as it did in this story.

    Ginny strikes me as the type of character who would embarrass both Harry and Luna without feeling ashamed about it in the end. She also doesn't strike me as the type of person to just let Luna have Harry. To me, If Ginny wanted Harry, she would have gone through great lengths to have him. She does have a fiery personality after all.

    That being said, for the way you had the story framed, I can see why you wrote your characters the way that you did (considering that I hate Harry and Ginny being paired together, I guess I shouldn't complain too much lol) and it still made the story good for me (obvious since I'm sitting here typing out an epic review for you lol). I didn't mention it before because I didn't want how I interpreted the characters to sway how you wrote the story. I loved what you did with them even if its not the way I would have written it.

    And despite my bitching (hee hee hee), all of your chapters came in a timely manner. As someone who was dumb enough to write a nine hundred page fanfiction as a way to ease into the fandom, I know how hard it can be to keep going consistently when the end is near.
    My only real criticism for the story is that the ending was too sudden (well for me it was too sudden). I felt it could have been eased into with a little more plot.

    But despite me being nit picky, you wrote a very good story and I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeves. You have a true fan here.

    Some pairings I would love to see by you (caution, there are some squee parings in here as well) are: Hermione/Arthur Weasley, Hermione/Kingsley, Ginny/Kingsley, Ginny/Lucius, Ginny/Snape, Luna/Arthur Weasley, Ginny/Arthur Weasley, Luna/Snape, Luna/Lucius, Luna/Kingsley, Luna/Remus, Luna/Sirius Black, Ginny/Sirius Black, Ginny/Remus, Hermione/Mr.Lovegood ... and that's all I can really think about right now (did I squeek you out?? lol)


    So, as a closing to this long ass review--good job!!! I love your style and can't wait to see more!

    Until then!

    Love,hugs, and kisses
    koolgirl18

    P.S. (Yeah, like this needs to be any longer) If you ever need help with anything, simply email me. If you go to my profile you will find my email there. Make sure you put "Fanfiction" in the heading so I can know not to delete you.
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  • From auntbecky on April 13, 2011
    Oh, and I just remembered. How about a nice juicy one with Hermione and Kingsley Shacklebolt please.
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  • From auntbecky on April 13, 2011
    Definetly a sequel. It was good but the ending left a lot of loose strings and I don't care for that much (just like I don't like Draco much either.) I think we should give him a good solid name like Michael. Michael Peeves does have a nice ring to it. As far as unusual pairings? I think a nice one with Luna and the elder Malfor would be in order.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2011
    If there is not some semblance of a happy ending, I will use Tigerblood to put a curse on you.
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  • From dragongirl on April 10, 2011
    WOW~That was WOW! Poor Ginny, I in particular don't like her much in the original but hey I got some sympathy for her feelings......... LOL
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  • From Tesgura on April 10, 2011
    I can't believe I didn't read this story for so long, but with all the positive reviews I saw I did and I'm so glad. This story is amazing! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ktgymnastics on April 10, 2011
    Ron is such a git. Great chapter:)
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  • From Koolgirl18 on April 10, 2011
    Yay Ginny chapter!!!

    You know, not enough people (including myself I will admit) write about Ginny bonding with Ron or her other brothers. I mean, I've grown up in a big family myself and I have formed close relationships with a few of my siblings. I would think Ginny would have done the same with at least one member (and Ron would make the most sense since he's the closet in age with her). Then again, Ron turned out to be an arse (as always) and ended up kind of ruining everything. But I don't feel too badly about that outcome cuz I can't stand Harry and Ginny together. hahahahaha

    Any who, great chapter! Can't wait to see how you end everything.

    Until then!

    Love, hugs, and kisses
    koolgirl18
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