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Reviews for Redemption

By : triz
  • From winter748 on June 15, 2011
    Dang it! Evil cliffhanger is an understatement. Don't make me send Ron after you. Just kidding. I'm sure you could whip his ass anyway. Your story is very good. Thanks.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 15, 2011
    Good Lord, is this girl ever going to get a break? I can't believe how much she's being made to suffer. I have read many stories where I wanted to smack the living crap out of Ron, but this is one of the few times I've actually hated him. I don't care how hurt and angry a person is, only a monster says and does those things to another person. He's worse than the guards, because they did it for "fun", while he attacked his former "best friend" out of sheer anger and hatred. I can't say I feel much more for Harry, either. He's simply run away from it all. Sigh... I only hope when the full truth comes out, they honestly see and feel the horrible truth of what their "friendship" has done to her. Man, this story hurts. Thanks, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Megan on June 06, 2011
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From nanhelgeke on May 23, 2011
    I feel I should expand my one whiny line. First, I like your story. It is tough reading and I actually skipped few parts, but I haven't felt that any of the violence were sort of gratioutous writing, which I hate. I guess I just didn't expect that the "good guys" will continue with such inertia and without actually realizing that they are way out of the depth with Hermione and their ideas of what might be good with her have no relation with her present reality. They still hold an illusion that she'll wake up to be a girl they once knew. Also, I wonder if Snape will realize the irony of choosing to believe the texbook version of events instead of digging deeper and using your own brain?

    Ok, now I'm rambling. Basically, I hope you continue writing it.
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  • From StillHorny on May 20, 2011
    This story is very intriquing. I am surprised with each chapter.

    I cannot wait to see what happens next. How will the trial go? Will Harry attend and find out what has been happening to Hermoine? How will Severus convince Draco to visit Lucius?
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  • From nanhelgeke on May 16, 2011
    Why "without Lucius"?? Guilt? I don't understand their reasoning :( It is such a hearbreaker anyway :(
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  • From newtothis on May 04, 2011
    ron is right you kill his brother, so he has every reason to hate you.
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  • From ANON - Dawn on May 04, 2011
    Wow! It's almost physcally painful to see how lost Hermione is. Can't wait to see how you get Lucius out of Azkaban and to her. Will be awaiting your next chapter.
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  • From KellyJCR on May 04, 2011
    Finally we see the full extent of the damage. I love the softness Severus is using to try and rech through to her. I can't wait to see how your going to get Lucius out of Azkaban for Hermiones sake. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 04, 2011
    For goodness sake! Someone get her Lucius! It's not that hard people!

    Thank you for updating and I sorry to hear you were ill, but glad you're feeling better. I hope you can update again soon, because seeing her so broken is painful. I understand that she hurt people to get her job done and that it was wrong, but how can she have not one friend left? Is there no one among the people who called themselves her friends who is willing to listen? So sad. She finally gets her freedom and a chance to heal and she will have no one. So sad. :-( Please update again soon. I need something good to happen for her.

    HG4eva
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 24, 2011
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From StillHorny on April 15, 2011
    Dark and graphic...wow.

    I love that Lucius truely loves Hermoine. The plot is deepening...and I love it.

    More, please.
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  • From ANON - Dawn on April 15, 2011
    Heart wrenching! I could feel the emotion pouring off the page. I will await your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on April 15, 2011
    This is really great so far. I can't wait to see where you go next.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 15, 2011
    Oh, I'm still here. I ache for them. I don't know what your ultimate plan is for this story, but I do hope you have some plans for peace and forgiveness for them. I wonder if they can obliviate some of the more painful memories from both of them, so they don't have to live their lives with so much agony. I also wonder if Severus helped or hurt more by telling Lucius the truth. Sigh... Thank you, HG4eva
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