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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Secrets of Magic

By : Jacenthedarkknight
  • From MayorHaggar on April 14, 2011
    Another good chapter. The relationship between Harry and Gabrielle has felt very believable so far. I also really liked the scene with Remus, as he was one of my favorite characters in the books.

    Out of curiosity, are you posting this story anywhere else? It'd be nice if I could get some kind of automatic alert when it is updated, as I don't check the Threesome/Moresome section very often (it seems to be mostly male/male stuff, which I stay away from.) This website doesn't have any sort of alert system, though.
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  • From bloodshound on April 14, 2011
    ahhhhh, damn. I was just getting into it and then i ran out of chapters.
    Write more? Pretty please. *bats eyelashes at you.
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  • From launcelot335 on April 12, 2011
    I actually just made an account on here, just to review your writing.
    This story has an amazing build to it, I'm reviewing to make sure you post the rest of it up here!
    Im a big Harry/Hermione fan, and I like gabby aswell. so this is an amazing combo for me. i love your style and the way you write gabrielle is exactly how i invissioned her to be.

    Keep Writing!

    Ryan.
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  • From ScnBrain2011 on April 11, 2011
    A GREAT story! Can't wait for more. I like how you have Gabrielle feeling the sadness of Harry when they are so far apart. And how you have her angry with Harry's aunt and uncle for how they treat him. I'm excited to see how you have her...explain herself to them, perhaps a little "Veela-Allure" on them maybe, hehe.

    I do have a question though, and that would be if you mind if I did my own story using the idea of Gabrielle and Harry being bonded? Not involving Hermione or anything, but still involving them. Your story inspired me to write my own. Before I even considered writing it though, I wanted to ask your permission to use the idea. Please feel free to contact me with your approval or denial.

    Also, as a side note, do please check out my first posted story, Finding His Crystal in the Movies > Star Wars (All) > Het - Male/Female IF you so choose.

    Sincerely, The Brain
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  • From Malcho1234 on April 10, 2011
    Good story, but I'm a little angry with what you wrote about Bulgaria.
    I hope that you'll update soon.
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  • From pfeil on April 08, 2011
    Somehow I don't think that's the kind of imagining of her in bed that Hermione wants Harry to be doing...
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  • From Chanku27 on April 07, 2011
    I love the plot of this story and it is very well written. I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
    Your version of the characters are really great so far and pairing Gabrielle with Harry and Hermione is very interesting.
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  • From bsmith2114 on April 06, 2011
    Excellent!
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  • From MayorHaggar on April 05, 2011
    I enjoyed these first two chapters--the story seems to be off to a promising start. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From newtothis on April 05, 2011
    why this seem like a good start, i hope this does not turn into all the other harry story with more then one girl, where they bash ron and make him a jerk, or jealous, and just stop being friend with him. i understand this would be hard the girl you love with your best friend but i hope no bashing of ron. good luck with your story.
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  • From Shago123 on April 05, 2011
    Awsome plot
    keep it up. im happy theres finally a new story that has Harry being striaght. anywayscant wait to read more
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  • From bsmith2114 on April 05, 2011
    Excellent start!! Love this pairing or tirad if you will. well written. I also like Daphne Greengrass with Harry as a nice Grif slythern pairing. Not enough of either of these. Well done!!!
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  • From Daye on April 05, 2011
    Interesting stuff. Seems strange Hermione's mind has not already leaped to 'intercepted mail' especially since the same thing happened at the start of book/year 2.

    Brit slang note; To be Chuffed is to be pleased not to be annoyed.
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  • From dominique1 on April 05, 2011
    this is a really good story want more
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  • From dominique1 on April 05, 2011
    this is good but why threesome with herimone
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