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Reviews for Punishment

By : AddictedArchangel
  • From DarkIris on December 07, 2021

    The writing itself is well done but Hermione's response is not just OOC, it is patently inconceivable that any woman would respond that way. To even imply Hermione would've been remotely turned on emotionally while being raped is ridiculous and psychologically damaging. Anyone who is raped may respond physically but that in no way implies consent or enjoyment. Stimulate a penis and it will get erect because blood flows to the area. Stimulate a vagina, even when a woman is emotionally terrified, and blood will flow to the area causing lubrication but not enjoyment or pleasure. It's a physical response like bleeding when cut. A young woman in this situation would be terrified and traumatized (and she would've experienced searing pain, not surprise, at being violently violated, especially if she is a virgin --,though you didn't really specify, just intimated.) 

    You could have written an accurate response and kept to the plot, instead you implied women enjoy being raped. I know this is fiction but I see this over and over again, particularly on this site. Young males read these stories too. I have to wonder if it's why so many women reported sexual harassment and assault during the Me Too movement and why so many men think sexual assault isn't all that bad. Most alarmingly, many police won't investigate reported assault. It's rarely prosecuted, rarely leads to conviction and when it does, many judges refuse to treat it as a real crime; handing out probation, while sentencing shoplifters to 5 years in prison or the possession of marijuana with even harsher sentences. It's been about 10 years since this story was written and I have to wonder if stories like this from females (or at least feminine screen names) are contributing to the life changing savaging women are experiencing more and more. Please be more responsible with what you put out there.


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  • From ANON - IamAnon! on July 27, 2011
    Really well written, it's not often to come across a story with a good writer. And intriguing plot, you could've easily made that a one-shot but you set it up for more chapters :) chapters which i am looking forward to! Thank you very much for writing, and I hope to see you next time!
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  • From Lizski on April 30, 2011
    VERY nice! More, please!
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  • From cmstrobridge on April 19, 2011
    Wow that was hot and creepy at the same time. Nice job. lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2011
    nice story! but please write more of this, it can't be only a oneshot!!!
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  • From ANON - Winged17 on April 06, 2011
    I loved it! Wonderfully written, you really got the characters down. I would love to see more of this if you get any more inspiration, hell, my mind is already thinking up some further scenarios! Please keep writing either way, and try not to lose the book perspective. After reading so many fanfictions, it's hard to keep true to the books, but you still have that ability.
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  • From lilith395 on April 05, 2011
    Are you sure this is your first story? It's rather good. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - BluDragon on April 05, 2011
    Please let there be a possibility of this story being continued !!!

    The story is just amazing and the relationship intense with some scandalous excitment.

    Thank You!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 04, 2011
    More please :D
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  • From StillHorny on April 04, 2011
    OMG...that was so HOT!!!! A very perverse Snape and equally perverse Hermoine (she did like it). I suspect that she will find other rules to break in front of Snape and encourage her friends to break them too. I know I would, if I was going to get that 'type' of punishment from Snape *fan self*!!!!

    I hope you make more additions to the Potter fiction.
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