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Reviews for Bonded in Blood

By : AikawaAkihiko
  • From CodyMThomas on May 29, 2011
    Not bored I loved every second of it! and woohoo hotness scene!
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  • From hellangelhellina on May 25, 2011
    can't wait for the aftermath.
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  • From writeaddict on May 17, 2011
    This chapter was good. It was awesome and I really enjoyed it. It may have had a lot of dialogue but it answered questions and you got to see how Snape and Harry were communicating and getting along. There was also a lot of progression. The beta move was a really good one- I didn't know you were looking for one. I only spotted one spelling error and that was when you were describing how attractive Snape found the green of Harry's eyes, you used the word greed instead. It was a very good chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next.
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  • From bloodshound on May 16, 2011
    Nope, dialog is neccissary sometimes. Kind of wonder what Snape's response to the Dursley's treatment of Harry will be though... and the responses of his friends to his new state... I'm sure telling Ginny is gunna be fun. *winces and ducks ahead of time.
    Nott deserves maiming a lot.
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  • From Nefren on May 13, 2011
    My English can be horrible at times, so bear with me and my comment...
    I'm sooo looking forward to next update. So far it has all the things I love most in FF. I only wish for you to write Harry-in-denial and lots of UST. And I want to know how Draco fits in this whole story. Maybe Harry'd attack him, when he won't be able to control his instincts. And then three of my favourite boys form a little coven of their own.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 07, 2011
    This is a really good story so far! Keep going!!
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  • From ravenwinter on May 06, 2011
    chap.#4) I've gone back and reread each chapter and reviewed. I like your story very much and I look forward to more, can't wait to see how you bring Draco into it and what will happen to Nott, I'm sure Nott thinks he got away with it. That was mean of you to leave a cliff like that >[
    Update soon please *o*
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  • From ravenwinter on May 06, 2011
    chap.#3) wonder what Severus will do when he finds out 'why' Harry is so thin and small? Hope the change isn't too bad, poor boys been through so much already.
    Another wonderful chapter, thank you.
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  • From ravenwinter on May 06, 2011
    chap.#2) Poor Draco and Harry,it seems that the schools resident poster boys for the light and dark are having some real problems.
    Good story, enjoy read it, keep up the good work.
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  • From ravenwinter on May 06, 2011
    chap.#1) GRU-and then some!!! Wow, thank Merlin for Snapes long nights.
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  • From ravenwinter on May 06, 2011
    #1) Harry was starved by the Dursley's in canon, but it was mostly brushed over.
    #2) Severus is not Draco's godfather in canon, only fandom, in canon Severus and Lucius don't like eachother and Lucius is always making problems for Severus with the dark lord.
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  • From ANON - HunterJumperLuvr on May 05, 2011
    It is actually Canon. Draco is Severus' godson. So you'll probably want to re-edit it. I would have told you earlier but I guess I missed the question.
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  • From Selene89 on May 04, 2011
    Draco being Severus' godson is fanon
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  • From Cinder1013 on May 04, 2011
    I love the transformation sequence. That was genius.

    So, is Draco going to be a part of their little coven? Or maybe a minion?

    Any famous vampires going to make camios ?
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  • From writeaddict on May 03, 2011
    Awesome. I was happy to see you updated. I really liked this chapter, you can see that they're bonding and that Snape really cares for him and doesn't just want sex.
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