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Reviews for The Mayan Job

By : lilbitbord
  • From SimplyIsabelleS on July 09, 2016

    I find the idea for the story interesting, epecially that I studied Maya hieroglyphic writing for the whole year :D


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  • From Trelweny on June 05, 2013
    Ha! I fell off the couch laughing at the last line! Both wizards do have a good reason to be terrified of a "meet the parents" trip.

    Nice job of showing a "caring for Hermione" Scarbior. I must admit I was leery of reading after the synopsis but I was pleasantly surprised.

    Your OC David was interesting. Not to mention the peek into his relationship with Lisa.

    I would love to read this "beefed up" as it were; less rushed feeling. I think it has great potential but it felt like things were glossed over especially in descriptions and why/how Hermione got with Scarbior in the first place. Had he been following/looking for her already? What led to his caring for her, beyond the creepy interest he showed in HP:DH?

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From StillHorny on May 02, 2011
    Oh, I absolutely LOVED the ending. Bill having his own pack. That was a perfect way to have a threesome!!

    Also, a very HOT 'mating' and 'marking' scene.

    Thank you!!!!!
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  • From Tri on May 02, 2011
    Please, please, please write a short of Scabior and Hermione meeting again! I would love to see that.
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  • From StillHorny on April 21, 2011
    Oh, the plot thickens!!!

    An unaware werewolf mate. A secret lover. And three unknown abductors.

    What more could a reader want? Oh, maybe a Bill/Hermoine/Scabior sandwich!?!?!?!?!

    More, please!
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  • From ANON - Me on April 19, 2011
    Please update soon this seems like a great story and I can't wait to read more!:)
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  • From StillHorny on April 10, 2011
    Oh, I would know those words anywhere. Say hello to the bad guy, Scarbior.

    This is going to get wicked very quickly, I can see that.

    I so do hope for a threesome for Hermoine and her 'bad boys'. I am getting hot just thinking about it *fan self*!!!!

    Please post again VERY soon!
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