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Reviews for Lawful Good, Lawful Neutral: Chaos Within

By : Raholea
  • From ANON - e.pressnell on January 18, 2014
    I just love the plot and how you write. please could you let me know when you update this, thank-you!!!
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  • From ANON - blj.14 on April 25, 2013
    Ch5. Not the best beginning for Dray. What kind of Ron are we getting here,prat,faithful,friend or adversary. I like his new friend/protector.
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  • From ANON - blj.14 on April 25, 2013
    Ch4. Not enough Dray! I want,need,must have,more Draco. I enjoyed that chapter as well,but are they ever going to get any longer?
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  • From ANON - blj.14 on April 25, 2013
    Ch3. Seemed like such a short chapter,am I just being greedy? Does Harry also know Neville or anyone else? What is Dumbles up to.
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  • From ANON - blj.14 on April 25, 2013
    Ch2. That was awesome. I love Harry picking out his own wand components. I think I'm going to like strong,powerful Harry.
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  • From ANON - blj.14 on April 25, 2013
    I love Drarry and that is usually all I read. However, I'm all caught up with them, so I was browsing. I also like Siri so I thought I'd read the first chapter at least. I was intrigued, I'll admit I also like dragon stories. It's a plausible explanation for Harry's survival. I'm not thrilled about the long wait between updates,but who is? For now I'm reading the next chapter. Keep up the good work.:-D
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  • From wherdatcomfrom on December 12, 2011
    I'm loving this story, so far. Great plot, good job following canon and making adjustments as needed.
    Obviously, things will have to change, just because of the differences you begin with.
    I noticed in your AN that you claimed to keep the meeting with Draco same as book, technically you matched it to the movie, but it was perfect.
    I would like to point out that a new paragraph when a different character speaks, is proper. It gets distracting when two people talk in the same paragraph, but otherwise, Fabulous Work!!!
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  • From bloodshound on December 09, 2011
    I'm glad this one is continuing. I'd almost forgotten about it. But i do remember i liked it a lot. So, hybrid Harry. ^^
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  • From ANON - kourtney on December 09, 2011
    ohhh i just love the updates! i adore powerful harry and i can't wait for more!
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  • From Flare on December 08, 2011
    This sounds amazing but it is a smhp pairing or is the scent thing just telling harry that draco could be a potental mate or has dragon is his blood? what about the other weasly's did harry meet them and if so what about Charlie would he notice some of harry's more dragon like quailty if he showed them? oh i really can't wait to see what you have planned next so please, please please keep this up and update it again real soon because so far it has been really brillint and most defenatly has me hooked. Oh and just so you know i really love how you have this harry acting and can't wait to see the difference between yo story and the books because of the different attuitudes. Oh and I am sorry for any spelling mistakes that are in this reveiw I am a horriable speller.
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  • From ANON - kourtney on April 10, 2011
    YAY!!!!!!!!! I SOOOO LOVE THESE FIRST CHAPTERS AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! harry is so dang cute when he's powerful!
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  • From bloodshound on April 10, 2011
    dragon quater breed Harry in the snake pit? Intrieging.
    must be the dragon in him coming out making him so snappy.
    can't wait to see how he handlesw the basalisk.
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