Reviews for TrappedBy : TrotskysHeir |
Before I began, this isn't a criticism of the authors writing ability, just a question about its content and any honest beliefs about the subject matter. I'm truly curious if the author or anyone else believes this is remotely plausible. I'm serious. Yeah, it's fanfic about magical humans, but the implausibilities (impossibilities) in this story have nothing to do with magic or the laws of physics. No one enjoys rape, no one mentally healthy, anyway. Teenage girls experience randiness just like boys but their experiences are inherently different (unless it's anal sex, which provides equal opportunities for pain and damage.); female bodies are invaded, not used to invade. Any teenage girl who went through what happened in this story would be a shrieking, bloodied, and battered basket case in need of a surgeon, a psychiatrist, and years of therapy. I truly hope this wasn't a young impressionable female writing this. If so and you still believe this is realistic and desirable, please, please seek mental help. I'm not being facetious. If this is a male, you are equally delusional. Females enjoy sex in general, just as males do, but no one enjoys experiencing rape. Consent is everything and non negotiable, unless you're a rapist. Rapists delude themselves into thinking the response of a person's sex organs to their unwanted contact (e.g. blood flowing to the areas, lubrication) is proof of enjoyment and the woman "wanting it." That's ludicrous! A woman can be emotionally terrified while her vagina produces lubricant, her nipples get erect, and her hips writhe. A physical response to the stimulation of sex organs and other erogenous zones is NOT definitively indicative of enjoyment or pleasure. It's a purely physical response, just like pain and bleeding are physical responses to being stabbed. In order for their to be pleasure, the woman must want to engage in sex of her own free will. Equally important, the absence of a no is NOT the same thing as consent, particularly when it involves intoxication, coercion, fear, or any type of manipulation that robs a person of their free will. In other words, make sure she says yes, don't assume just because you don't actually hear "no." If the author is an Incel, please seek help. If you don't and you assault someone, I hope you're caught, tried, convicted, and sentenced to a long sentence in prison where I hope you receive the help you need.
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