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Reviews for Semblance of Normality

By : Ladylala04
  • From LadyLaran on October 21, 2011
    I feel bad for Harry. Wonder if the memory corruption was something Ron did to cover an embarrassing situation?
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  • From Samibear on October 12, 2011
    Omg! When are they going to find out that harry loves them. Are you going to make this long?
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  • From MacPhisto on August 07, 2011
    PLEASE update soon!

    we NEED to know what Ron said!
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  • From SalonKitty on August 01, 2011
    I'll just re-iterate how I love the way Harry is such a romantic in this, even with all of his 'eye-groping'. There's a sweetness there that you haven't foregone simply because he has hot sex fantasies about his two best friends. It makes his hand-wringing and guilt over his thoughts for them all the more believable and somewhat sad. You just want him to be happy.

    I also really enjoy how much thought you put into the Auror offices, the state of affairs at the Ministry, and the names (of spells, of people, of places) you use in your story. They are as thought-out and engaging as Rowling's in the series.

    You're building up a nice tension as we get more hungry for the secret to come out. Who will break first? I can hardly wait to find out.
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  • From cellester on May 31, 2011
    love this story hope you continue it. one of the ideas i would like is harry haveing sex with hermione and ron walking in and spanking him then forcing harry to blow him before taking him in the ass. while rons in his ass harry starts to eat out hermione. harry could be their sub and they could dominate him.
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  • From melinda1293 on May 27, 2011
    I'm still patiently waiting to find out what Ron told Harry LOL. I hope you are planning to continue this.
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  • From StillHorny on May 15, 2011
    Oh my!!! Your graphic description of Harry's fantasy made it VERY HOT in hear *fanning myself*!!

    I sooo hope that you continue this story. I would love to see Harry's wishes come true. A full on threesome of the "golden trio' is so erotic.

    MORE, please!
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  • From SalonKitty on May 10, 2011
    Oh, go on! You know that smut was all yours! All I can say us, day-umm, Harry sure knows some hot stuff to get off on! It's probably a good thing that Ron and Hermione were already out when he came down, because really, how does one look their best friends in their faces when one has just had a fantasy about them like that? Bit awkwardly, I'm guessing.

    I'm curious to know if Ron or--especially!--Hermione have ever noticed their best mate's intense, longing stares at them from time to time, lol. Cause you know it happens.

    Now, Harry better get his hands on a pensieve because I'm really dying to know what Ron told him!

    Okay, Captcha is just getting absurd, now. I don't even know how the hell I'm supposed to replicate that.
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  • From melinda1293 on May 10, 2011
    Wow, that was very nice. And still I don't know what Ron said gggrrrrr LOL.
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  • From melinda1293 on May 03, 2011
    Ack! What did he say, what did he say? LOL

    I just read a quick one shot story where Ron and Harry have a conversation about why they don't hug:

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6230807/1/Boys_Dont_Do_That

    This chapter seemed to tie right into that which was hilarious to me. Get to the smut already :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2011
    ohhh this is getting really interesting can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From StillHorny on May 01, 2011
    Oh my!! What exactly DID Ron say?!?!?!?!? I have a feeling from the snippets that Harry DID hear, that it could be juice. It could even make Harry VERY HAPPY...I can only hope!

    You are such a tease...but I like that in a writer. Just so long as you come back and put some action behind the teasing.
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  • From SalonKitty on April 27, 2011
    I like Harry's humor in this. The way you took the plot from the series and layered Harry's longing into it worked out really well. You made it all sound perfectly logical. And I could see Ginny as being an ideal stand-in for both of his mates with their various traits rolled into one.

    But I really liked how pleased Harry is with his Junior Auror business cards. It shows how simple and sweet he still is, regardless of his complicated love life. I can see Harry being attracted to both, actually. People like to point to canon as justification that Harry never had any amorous feelings towards Hermione, but honestly, I think JKR was just trying too hard.
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  • From GingerCat1 on April 26, 2011
    Oddly enough i do see Harry having sexual thoughts about Ron in the books but unlike in your story i don't think Ron would feel that way about Harry and i know that Harry and Hermione don't like each other like that.

    Still i do imagine that there would have been a part of Harry that has always imagined what it would be like to have Ron inside him (even though he is in love with Ginny). I don't see Harry as being gay, rather i see him as being straight but also being Ronsexual at the same time (meaning Ron is the only guy he has ever thought about shagging).
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  • From StillHorny on April 25, 2011
    I like the back-story and detailing how long Harry has been in love with his two best friends. Especially the wanking part!!!

    Now, bring on the smut!!!

    Can you tell, I'm a smut slut ;) *snicker*
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