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Reviews for Trial by Fire

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  • From ANON - theladykt on July 23, 2011
    wow he is one bad ass wizard
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  • From bloodshound on July 20, 2011
    *snickers. ddamsel in distress. Oh Sev is going to pay for that one laterr.
    Wow, Sev went easy on the brats. I hope he did a bit of memory fiddling other wise the dark families are going to scuttle straight to mr fuzzy bunny slippers and tell him alllllllllllll about it.
    About Ginny though, seriously, what the hellkirky is her major malfunction. Just cause shee didn't get a piece of that hot Haarry arse she goes off the deep end. Obscession is a dangerous and scary thing. I wonder what they'll do with her now. Maybe they aught to ship her off to charlie for a bit. A couple of months shoveling dragon droppings might give her a much needed attitude adjustment... or get her eaten. Either is fine at this point for the red haired waste of space. ^^
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  • From wherdatcomfrom on July 14, 2011
    A very well written story, so far. I think that you have found a good balance of pain and humor and I don't think you need to throw too much at your readers here. If you really WANT to write the torture scene, go fer it, but I agree that a little warning is only fair for those who would not like to read it, and then write in the after effects so they don't miss out on too much.
    Keep up the good work, and as always, write, write and write!
    Love, Anna.
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  • From ANON - Draconia Lesoto on July 14, 2011
    Whoops! Sorry the Anon about is me! thank god i check my reveiws after their posted! Sorry!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2011
    INDEPTH TORTURE SCENE IN DEPTH TORTURE SCENE!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *gets on knees* See i'm even begging you here!!! Please please please with a naked Draco on top??!!??!!??

    I wanna see those bastards and bitches PAY for what they've done to sweet Harry, plus they made my Severus upset! No one gets to do that but me! ( i have some weird day dreams don't ask :DD)

    Oh i wanted to ask you last time and forgot; Will you accept name idea's for the baby?
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  • From bloodshound on July 14, 2011
    This fic makes me giggle. ah, so good. As for Mio, was she sympathetic to Harry before? And is she still dating Ron? Cause both of those will effect which way she bounces but she is as clever as she is preachy so I think she'd make Harry a very good allie, if not a friend.
    Frost phoenix Sev huh? w00t.
    For myself, it depends on the fic but I'm usually happy to skip past the grusome details (unless you specifuically wanted to write some)and see what happens in the aftermath.
    Oh ginny x 3. You stupid little bint, whate WERE you thinking?! Her parents must be ropable.
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  • From ANON - heartstar on July 14, 2011
    Love this!!!!!!!!!!!!! More Please...
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  • From ANON - theladykt on July 14, 2011
    Woo hoo for healing powers and wings. Cant believe ginny was in on it
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  • From ANON - Third Angel on July 13, 2011
    Yay!!! another update!!

    Well, on the torture scene, I guess it would be based on what you are comfortable with writing about. I'm sure that there are blood thirsty readers, but sometimes it is creepier to leave it unsaid and then the reader has the option of how 'bad' the torture was. However, if you do choose to write it, you might indicate in the story before and after the gore so that the squeamish can pass it by.
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  • From ANON - orkchild on July 13, 2011
    no details
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  • From ANON - stacey123 on July 13, 2011
    well let me think hmm for ginny: she cannot have any child, no man will marry her.(ha ha)
    pansy: a spell to let darco hates her with a passion. (muhahaha)
    Crab and Goyle: let them sell their bodies to man,woman and other.(sweeet)

    damned my torture scene is so brutle, but ur welcome to some idea.

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  • From ANON - theladykt on July 12, 2011
    Awww poor Harry. Get'em Sev.
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  • From ANON - Draconia Lesoto on July 12, 2011
    NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
    That's that's so EVIL of you! a cliffy :(
    I love this story, love the plot (hey origanality for once! yay!) and YAY!! MPREG!
    PLeasepleaseplease don't make Harry lose the baby! I'd cry.
    I can't wait to see what happens with the Phhyros... wait i think i'm spelling that wrong... oh well. Can't wait to see how Draco plays into all of this i just love him :DD
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  • From bloodshound on July 12, 2011
    about my ida... if i tossed it up in suggestin here feel free to borrow, steal, whatever.
    Yay! points... now what do they get me? I know, how about a lack of evil cliffies of evil doom! *smacks you over the head with my 'hint'.
    Who got Harry, what'd they do to him, how the seven hells did they get in, is he okay, where was fawlks, what's with black phoenix Sev... and so on.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 11, 2011
    noctis my precious my dearest my darling please not you to! the story was perfect then dumbles SWORE he doesnt do that honey please dont do it again we dont need another tara sweety
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