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By : sazsazzel
  • From danawarner on May 31, 2011
    Maybe Sev should have ravished his mate in the SHOWER first (being covered in mud after all)
    PS: I don't review much on this site because I *HATE* the security code you have to type (this is IF you can even read it)
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  • From ANON - Alto on May 30, 2011
    First of all, good job so far.
    This is a lil fluffy though.
    Not true to Severus' character.

    Avincendia

    Avi is the prefix for bird.
    Incendia is latin for fire.
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  • From bloodshound on May 30, 2011
    what, no clean uup shower first? lol
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  • From Akari-Seikatsu on May 30, 2011
    I think that Phoenixlight would be a good name for the fifth house. Awesome story by the way. I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what name you choose for the fifth house. I also can't wait to find out what happened to make the fifth house vanish and who gets sorted into the new house. Somehow I get the feeling that Harry will be resorted into the house.
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  • From ANON - stacey on May 30, 2011
    how about the Phoenix Force i know it way off i think, but the phoenix represents many think in life to another cultural.

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  • From ravenwinter on May 30, 2011
    The Phoenix or Phoinix house, your going to have enough troble coming up with back ground on the house and it's founder and naming said founder. If you don't like Phoenix or Phoinix there is Pyrrhos (pie-rose), means 'flame-like',it's the name of Achilles son.
    If you have trouble with names agian try going to '20000 names .com' they have names from around the world.
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  • From Goddess81 on May 30, 2011
    In China and Japan the Fenghuang bird was a symbol of the imperial house, and it represented "fire, the sun, justice, obedience, and fidelity". In the Chinese tradition it appears very rarely, and only to mark the beginning of a new era, while in other traditions it would only appear on times of peace and prosperity and disappear on times of trouble. It was originally a Chinese mythical bird, introduced to Japan on the Asuka period.

    I think that Fenghuang would be a great name for the fifth house, loving the story by the way Xx
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  • From sweetasphodel on May 30, 2011
    There is nothing wrong with KISS [Keep it Simple Stupid ;)] and naming the fifth house Phoenix House. Sometimes we authors tend to wrack our brains entirely too much when it isn't even necessary. I am enjoying your story. Keep up the good work.
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  • From curious123 on May 24, 2011
    interesting fic. rather bemusing, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - lemondropfan64 on May 21, 2011
    Nicely done. I laughed sooooo hard at the mental image of Voldie drinking a martini! I think the last chapter went really well! I'm sorry to hear of your writer's block, but glad you were able to get around it :D
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  • From bloodshound on May 21, 2011
    About the block, don't sweaat it. I can't work all structured either... When my sis told me that's the way most people do it I was gob smackedd. I let the story go where it will and if I lose the spark of it, jot down the points I had hastily and let it sit till I get inspired again... but currently, you don't really have that option huh. (scratches head.) That's why I'd never put up any of my unfinished stuff. *makes face. I hate leaving people hanging. At any rate, I'm glad you're unblocked (deblocked? whatever) enough to continue. ^^
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  • From bloodshound on May 21, 2011
    Hmmm, things stirring under the surface dunna sound so good. I'm glad Sev is helping Harry get over his psych troubles... Having thoughs creature instincts must be throwing him a bit too.
    Wow, Dumbles has really flipped. He's totally lost it neh?
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  • From ANON - loopy on May 11, 2011
    omg i love it lol i cant wait for the update..fawlkes is my fav, hes just want i pictured him to be keep up the great writing, you have been one of the very few writers to make me accually laugh out loud...
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  • From landra02 on May 09, 2011
    *is.still.laughing* your story is great!! I had real fun reading this story and I want to read more!!! Especially Fawkes falling from his perch and the summoning of ALL the houselves! I can't wait for another update. Do you have an update-mailinglist?? If you do please add me^^
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  • From ANON - Janet on May 09, 2011
    sorry not very good at this but just wanted to say I love this story thank you for sharing your talent with us.
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