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By : ADave1964
  • From bill560682 on May 01, 2011
    personally i hope this is not going to be harry draco, i think harry already has enough possible partners since if he does start in with the kid from japan that would bring him up to 5. if you want to make harry into bondage you can mix it up a bit by having harry do bondage on the creevey brother and have the weasley twin and the kid from japan tie harry up that way both groups are happy those who want harry as master and those who want him as slave.
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  • From bill560682 on May 01, 2011
    now personally i think having snape thrown out as a potions master would be great. how you do that is simple, you have harry's aunt who taught him potions be a 7th level master and snape a 3rd level also have her have been head of the potion masters council for over 75 years back in her day. an even thou she is dead her ranking still counts. so if harry took his memories of snapes classes to the council he could get snape stripped of being a potions master in no time at all.
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  • From hellangelhellina on April 27, 2011
    i can't wait to read how things play out.
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  • From Flare on April 27, 2011
    Thia ia really goo and I can't wait for the next chapter please keep it up because I really love how you have Harry acting...though I have a couple questions has Harry met Ron's oldest brothers bill and Charlie? I mean he was suppose to met the in the fourth book when he went to ROn's for the summer but he didn't and the ear ring Harry has is it similar to the dragon fang in i think it was Bill's ear? And most importatnly are you you going to update again soon?
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  • From Alleya on April 26, 2011
    I really like this story and the way its going. Hopefully you'll update as soon as possible because I can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From pervyfaerie on April 25, 2011
    err in ch one you mentioned harry reading the paper and getting depressed when it mentioned serious was dead, thereby insinuating that this takes place after 5th year but then in ch2 herimone mentions percy got a job at the ministry there by making it take place before 4th year. and then a couple chapters after that you have percy having a problem with harry's new looks and that he might 'take points' when they return to hogwarts there by making it seem to be 3rd book or earlier. assuming that ch1 one is right you should fix the misleading information in ch2

    also if you still have fred and george at school then that is placing it atleast 5th year or earlier, if you are just changing canon and making it that they didnt leave school or they decided to go back the next year to finish then you might want to make a note of that in the story instead of just having them magically be there. if will be less confusing for your readers.

    oh, also if they were worried about not doing things until harry was ready i really ondt think they would realistically tie harry to a bed for his fist sexual experience atleast not without any type of discussion or even asking him. after all he could esily have freaked out about that kinda thing after being kidnapped at the of 4th year.
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  • From Flare on April 25, 2011
    this is very intresting and I really can't wait to see what you have planned nxt please keep it up because this story sounds very good.
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  • From Orkchild on April 25, 2011
    wonderful,wonderful the beginning of a great comming of age story and Dumbledork getting whats comming to him. Love it.
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  • From freemaka on April 23, 2011
    Great start. You may want to look at the formatting to make it easier to read, but aside from that I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Nadine21 on April 23, 2011
    You know since I've read how Harry was fascinated with Colin, who is a little feminine at least in the books I had hoped you would make Harry a dominant but I guess I was wrong, well I still like it. Now to my question what pairing are you going to use. If you are going with Harry as a sub I think it would be interesting to have Harry with older guys but not like sanpe or something more in the way of Cedric, Krum, Flint, the twins or anyone else. Just is this going to ba a Drarry story?
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