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By : ADave1964
  • From jamescun on November 24, 2011
    plz write more
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  • From AmityVerity on June 30, 2011
    not bad. i liked it.
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  • From Brissygirl on June 28, 2011
    Enjoying the story so far!

    I have noticed a couple of mistakes in the last couple of chapters that you might want to change. "Viktor needed to get back to the ship and Cedric needed to get back to Gryffindor." Cedric is a Hufflepuff. And in this chapter you've contradicted yourself about Quidditch. In one of the early chapters Dumbledore says Quidditch has been cancelled for the year, but in this chapter you have Harry watching Gryffindor lose a match to Slytherin and Oliver resigning from the team. Neither of these things would happen if Quidditch wasn't being played at all during the school year. A way to fix the mistake would be to say that it was an impromptu game to distract them from exams or boredom or something. Just a thought.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From Ravenheart on June 02, 2011
    While I did like the premise of the story, I hated the ending. Harry, a slave for Malfoy during a week?! Don't make me laugh! He'd probably just kill the kid and be done with it. And corrupting first years? Not everyone is gay, specially 11/12 year olds.
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  • From Luciusinuson on May 29, 2011
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! It can't be the end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY!?!?!?!?!?!
    lol i loved it though love. Hope you write more! obviously not in this story but others please! From anything!
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  • From dominique1 on May 29, 2011
    i hope harry gets his money back all of it and his property i hate that you turn him in to a huge whore i like shrio and viktor as his mates only
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  • From dominique1 on May 29, 2011
    viktor krum marcus flint anyone but the weasley unless the really care for him
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  • From hellangelhellina on May 26, 2011
    love it boy sex every where.
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  • From SilverLion on May 08, 2011
    Okay, Ron and Draco both need to be dominated by Harry and Shiro. I'm thinking just a shade off of being non-con (dub-con). Maybe all they need to lighten up is a good hard fucking. Snape shouldn't be with Harry at all (maybe he could somehow end up in the Graveyard instead of Cedric?). And definitely more Harry/Victor/Cedric (maybe some Shiro thrown in for the hell of it?).
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  • From dominique1 on May 04, 2011
    i like viktor harry and marcus but if this going to be just slut and sexy harry not plot are love than good luck with that
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  • From bill560682 on May 04, 2011
    now i know at some point you are going to want to bring harry back into his house i say don't. i would have harry start wearing a plain black tie and remove his house badge from his clothes. an yes i know once harry starts doing well in the contest some of his former house will regret kicking him out and once he wins the contest almost all of them will be begging him to come back but they have to learn your actions have results you may later have to live with.as far as malfoy goes i would let him attack me and thereby let the magic of the contest punish him since he is attacking one of the contestants, because there is likely some kind of magic protecting them from being harmed otherwise it would be a free for all as to who could take out the other schools champain first.
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  • From bill560682 on May 04, 2011
    now with the weasley twins and thier joke shop i would think they would try making as many contacts at the other schools as they could. that way even before they get out of school they are already selling thier pranks at all 3 schools not just hogwarts. an if they get lucky some of the students from the other schools would have friends at different schools so they are sellin g to 5 or even 7 schools before they leave hogwarts so that most of thier business is owl orders from around the world.
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  • From SilverLion on May 04, 2011
    When are we gonna get some Shiro/Harry action? Oooh, and you definitely have to include Cedric. Although, Cedric's probably a little too vanilla for Harry, but maybe he'd be up for spanking? Him spanking Harry that is (he does that in a story over on ff.net - Once Upon a Cedric and it's sequels). I see him as more of a gentle lover type though.
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  • From Flare on May 04, 2011
    This is amazing please keep it up...and why does the majorty of Griff. want Harry to move out is it because he is in the tornement? will they wantr him back in after he wins so they can say the winner is in their house...and what about the ones who do want him in the house. Like Nevill, Fred, george, hermione, the two brothers, and shinron(SP) how will they deal with Harry basicly being kicked out by Ron..and please tell me Harry is going to get back atthem for kicking him out...embarres the somehow or somthing.
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  • From ValheruYaoi on May 04, 2011
    cool :) yay fun story and love how it's been written so far :)
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