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From rapasunleashed on September 19, 2011
*drools all over keyboard*

so fantastically wonderful that im going to read it again and again til you update

XD

Grace

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From CodyMThomas on September 12, 2011
Very lovely and hot, this made my whole day a million times better, thank you! This was deliciously fun and kinky, and no the Lucius scenes did NOT disappoint at all, in fact I was extremely glad to see it. I'm also glad that you liked some of my ideas and I can't wait to see which ones you will incorporate and how. I am very much looking forward to that.

As for sounding, I would equate it to about the same, or even slightly more sensitive to the feeling of having something inserted into a vagina. Anal insertion is not nearly as sensitive as Urethral insertion, since the penis has far more nerve endings than an anus. And a lot of insertion enthusiasts I know (in addition to sounds and several other items) really enjoy a length of small beads slowly inserted just like you would insert anal beads or ben-wa balls and then masturbate with them in. a friend of mine even bought a length of pearls and cut one side so he had a nice length, some of which he inserted and the rest he wound around and decorated his cock and balls with. I have to admit the effect was lovely.

Since you don't seem to be skittish or easily offended, (you swore you couldn't be squicked so I'm trusting you on that) for more information on any kink you could possibly imagine, (And a few I guarantee you have probably never even thought possible) I highly recommend checking out and joining fetlife. com. It's a friendly and safe (NOT WORK SAFE) site for enthusiasts of any fetish where people can talk, share, discuss, and ask questions freely from people who actually DO the kind of stuff we write about, or in some cases write about the stuff they do. There is a group for Sounding and Urethral insertion, and more then one for daddy kink, bondage, several types of different kinds of submission, servitude, and probably anything else you could get asked about writing in the course of your stories. I have found it an invaluable asset and resource in the past, and I hope you do too. I am a member there, under the same name as here if you want to look me up.

I am eager to read more from you, in fact I think I shall check out your profile to see what else I can get into to tide me over till the next lovely chapter. see you soon. ^_^
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From bloodshound on September 11, 2011
0.0 so hot... so hot i'm being baked merely from reading... so goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood. *peers at you More?
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From jujukitty on September 11, 2011
ok, first off, the smut is hot! like very very, great job. and the little hint of somethign extra that keeps sneaking in just makes it more intense i think, gives it more feeling. can't wait to see what else you come up with for these three :)
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From CodyMThomas on September 11, 2011
I got to re-read this entire loveliness today and I enjoyed it just as much as the first time. (Wife was thankfully home for pouncing though) I did have an idea, see if you like it.

The practice of Sounding, aka the practice of implementing thin rods or tubes that come in an assortment of lengths, widths, and shapes that are designed to slide down the slit of the penis in order to achieve urethra stimulation, stretching, orgasm control, prostate stimulation, cock decoration, forcing a flaccid cock to remain in a semi-erect state, and even cock torture when mixed with bondage. It's one of my favorite kinks and it's hardly ever used in fanfiction that I've seen. I'd love to see it if you're up for it.
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From Lilitany on September 02, 2011
This may very well be the most depravedly dirty, smutty thing I have ever read, and I am enjoying every minute of it. This really isn't a threesome I ever thought of, and I admit to bypassing the story a few times, mainly because I've got a type of chapter story I like and I was just a little confused by the pairing. Honestly, though, it's hot. I didn't know what felching or snowballing were before that chapter, and didn't bother to look it up- I think I figured it out. And I wasn't bothered. The general kinkiness and intensity makes it mind-numbingly sexy, and on top of that, it's extremely well written, which is something I look for above a lot of other things when reading fanfiction (or anything else for that matter), and really appreciate. Grammar and spelling is good, and I actually am adoring the Drarry hints, since most smut I read has some kind of deeper feeling underneath. Call me a hopeless romantic, but while mindless sex and hate sex are all well and good, I love a love undercurrent. Intensely dirty acts just get that much better when done with someone you love. Nice job.
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From CodyMThomas on September 01, 2011
*bows down and worships the goddess of awesome smut fic* Oh man WHY isn't my wife home to pounce on? WHY?

Back at the chapter where you mentioned that you took suggestion requests I had double penetration, fisting, and spanking on the list for when I got to the end, since I wasn't stopping mid story to review, but then you wrote all of them before I could ask, so THANK YOU!

The Daddy kink was a surprising one for me. I really REALLY hate anything sexual that involves children with adults, especially where the adult tries to play off child molestation as something normal that the child should love to do. But having Draco be more than old enough to consent, (in fact instigate the interaction) and willing to voice his desires and then have Lucius RESPOND to those desires and do everything in his power to take care of his son's needs, while at the same time he also discovers his own... there was no squick factor at all for me, it was extremely hot and very well written and I would love to read more of this interaction for both of them.

I know you said you are trying so hard to keep plot out of this and what I'm going to ask for isn't plot per se, honest. I want to see Lucius getting more heavily involved with both boys, and incorporating himself to the point where that warmth does envelop him too would be a welcome thing, like asking Draco to be wearing something special and waiting in his Daddy's arm chair with a book he wants to be read, or exploring more of Harry's slutty submissive side, maybe tie Harry to the bed in a chastity device and leave him in Draco's care for the day, not letting Draco or Harry come until Lucius returns a few hours later and takes Harry at his leisure. Laying down and having the boys worship him completely before they are even allowed to kiss each other. More falling asleep in Lucius' arms and waking up that way too. That kinda thing.

but most of all, Harry kneeling by the side of Lucius' armchair plugged, bound and having his hair stroked while Draco is being read a story in his Daddy's lap with a cock up his bum and his nipples and cock being played with.

I want more Lucius time pretty pretty pretty PLEASE.

oh and by the way I am putting this in my Rec reading list just so I can easily find it again, this gem is NOT getting away!
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From bloodshound on August 30, 2011
blinks and exhales slowlly
wow, super kink, super kink, they're super kinky. (to the music of super freaky)
hot, very, very hot.
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From cynaga on August 30, 2011
too yummy~!
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From Jessica86 on May 29, 2011
This story is incredibly hot. Please, I need more chapters soon. This is brilliant. And I do hope that you but in some dominance like Lucius has been fantasising about, cause that would be bloody awesome.
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From ANON - BleedingHearts on May 29, 2011
Wow. I haven't been this turned on by a fic in a long time. You're a very talented writer. I couldn't stop reading this.
The characters are great and the amount of detail is perfect.
Please write more!
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From bloodshound on May 27, 2011
so, it's possible to cum with a ring on?... or did they take it off?
at any rrate, Harry, you kinky lil cock slut you. Will Draco be playing bottem any time soon? Harry might need a bit of recovery time. :P
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From hellangelhellina on May 25, 2011
this was fucking sexy. harry's such a slut, i love it.
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From bloodshound on May 18, 2011
your story, do as you will with it. We'll sit back and salivate. ;D
Still, the chapter warnings are a good idea. certainly wouldn't want to scare your readers. i wold ahve that that after the Durleys abuse he wouldn't want more... or maybe that's left a craving in him. Hmmmm.
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From ravenwinter on May 17, 2011
CH.5) Agian, I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! Giving or receiving Harrt seems to always be in charge. I would like Lucius and even Draco to be more dom. It would probably be a good idea if Lucius were to bring Severus home to teach them how DOM is done. Can you just see it? Prof.Snape in teacher mode, giving directions, punishments, making demands on everone. A take charge kind of guy. TOYS!!!!
Can't wait to see whats next, you go girl,just put it all out there. Your wonderful!!!!
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