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Reviews for An Unlikely Desire

By : KJmom827
  • From ravenwinter on May 17, 2011
    CH.4)If Harry can think, much less be scared, then he just HAS NOT been fucked well enough. Seems the Malfoy men are too used to keeping themselfs under control, Harry will have to work on breaking them of that. Good job *O*
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  • From ravenwinter on May 17, 2011
    CH.3) I LOVE your cock-loving-slut Harry, more more more!!! I hope Lucius gets into/comfotable with the daddy/son play quick.
    Love,love,love this chapter, YOU ARE A QUEEN!!!
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  • From ravenwinter on May 17, 2011
    CH.2) They are all so wonderful together. Father/son share-time,what fun. I think Lucius is holding back a bit, can't wait for him to let loose.
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  • From ravenwinter on May 17, 2011
    I'm going back to re-read each chapter.
    CH.1) I love Harry's dirty mouth/talk/thoughts. Lucius in charge / control sounds very good.
    Keep up the great job.
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  • From ANON - InuGuardian1984*notloggedin* on May 17, 2011
    OMG!!! I love the story!! It's so full of hot smex!! And three of the HOTTEST men in the Harry Potter universe. I could read each chapter over and over again. I love it!!!
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  • From cynaga on May 17, 2011
    masterful
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  • From ANON - Kermit on May 17, 2011
    I hope you will let Draco be a Dom and Harry a Sub. If Lucius is Dom then Harry and Draco sub. Spanking and punishment would be good to explore. Bondage could work.
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  • From bloodshound on May 17, 2011
    porn a licious, smut tastic, call it what you want. I call it hot, Hot, HOT! A credit to lovers of yaoi everywhere. Thankyou and looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2011
    i think this story gets hotter with every chapter.
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  • From ANON - Ris on May 15, 2011
    Well, that was a hot story. I can't wait til the next chapter.
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  • From Cinder1013 on May 13, 2011
    So so hot! Love it!
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  • From ANON - winter delight on May 13, 2011
    holy hell...that was hot. i really hope there is more of this story ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 12, 2011
    Wow. Your story is awesome. I really want to find out more about Draco's daddy kink and Harry the little cum slut. Perhaps some Lucius directed play between the boys? So hot. My husband loved it...well the fact that it got me hot and I pounced on him.
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  • From ravenwinter on May 12, 2011
    Your just so wonderful:) Can't wait to see what you come up with next (double teaming, Severus comes for a visit, toys...), See what you do to me? update soon PLEASE! Looking forward to next chapter *;*
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  • From bloodshound on May 12, 2011
    hot! Hot! HOT!
    More pls more. *begs shamelessly
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