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Reviews for An Unlikely Desire

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  • From ANON - Miss Poodle on May 12, 2011
    this is SO good, may I please have more?!
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  • From ANON - GuiltyPleasure on May 04, 2011
    This story is so hot. I would give almost anything to be a fly on the wall while these three went at it. Very nice descriptions. I love that this story isn't written as though it is a porno, but as though they are truly beginning a relationship.
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  • From ANON - Miss poodle on May 03, 2011
    I loved it, the way you wrote it from the different persons POV was quite good, I guess I am a pervert, because I love those three together... I'll be looking forward to next chapter!
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  • From sparrowswing on May 03, 2011
    I think first-person point of view works perfectly for this. And really, I don't understand how anyone could think of it as "distracting". First person helps put me in the mindset, feel like I'm actually there experiencing it myself. I had an English teacher once who told me I could never be an author if I wrote in first person, but my stories still won awards and some of my favorite authors write in that style. Some people are just too narrow-minded.

    Okay, I've finished ranting. On the subject of the story, this is spectacularly sexy and I can't wait for more.
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  • From magentasouth on May 02, 2011
    No - in this situation the first person mode works well. Keep going!
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  • From magentasouth on May 02, 2011
    YAY!!!!! There is nothing like a good malfoy three way!
    More more more!
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  • From tsukinotora on May 02, 2011
    Sooooo hot
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  • From ANON - Seraphiccandy21 on May 02, 2011
    It was a great story but I got very distracted by the first person perspective. Could u maybe write a story thats in third person perspective ? It's such a pity really cos otherwise it was totally hot...
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  • From ANON - Mitsu on May 02, 2011
    Wow...just wow. You've blown my brain with this one, please please please update soon? Pretty please? I love how dominant Lucius seems, but might I request that in the coming chapters, could we have more of Draco talking? Your Draco is rather submissive and I'd love to see more of what he thinks concerning this, if possible of course.
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