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Reviews for An Unlikely Desire

By : KJmom827
  • From lizkrohn on April 07, 2017

    Yummy! A bit of story is alway nice - Lucius  needs an heir and so does Harry so what about a marriage with a surrogate to carry the Potter- Black-Malfoy heirs in the contract?

    Will Lucius back out and get him a Severus or will he stay as a trio with Draco and Harry?


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  • From ANON - jj on January 22, 2012
    damm that was hott!!
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  • From ANON - Hot & Bothered on January 08, 2012
    I'm generally not into slash pairings unless there is a female character present to take part (I need a girl to relate to it). However, this story is so hot, I can't help but be enthralled. I love the whole Daddy kink stuff. It's the implied innocence of it all. "Daddy, teach me." I find that terribly sexy.

    Also, didn't think I'd like the sounding thing, but that too was surprisingly erotic.

    You write this scenarios so well that you have this het reading girl rethinking her reading habits. Hope to see more of this story soon!
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  • From ANON - Seraphiccandy21 on October 24, 2011
    Love your stuff and hope u update soon :)
    P.S Was a little disapointed last chapter that Harry didn't stick a thermometer up Dracos ass to " take his temperature"...that would have been fun :P
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  • From Lilitany on October 06, 2011
    This story kills me, dear lord. I adore it. So very ridiculously intense and sexy. Aauugh, reduced to sentence fragments. Okay, so that was great. I don't even know what I could suggest that you haven't covered or someone else hasn't said! Hmmm...Would love a bit more Servant & Master play, if possible.
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  • From ANON - jesuswalks on October 05, 2011
    yay! that was unfairly hot.

    was Draco actually small in this (size wise) or just pretending?

    hopefully you do more bath stuff with them, so sexy!
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  • From ANON - jesuswalks on October 05, 2011
    you write ridiculously hot shit. i can't even deal with it. you may write squicky stuff but you write it in such a way that it's so tasteful and sexy. please keep doing what you're doing with this story, it's amazing!
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  • From bloodshound on October 04, 2011
    frowns at Har for not staying in character... and draco was doing so well.
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  • From andrea116 on October 04, 2011
    Yes, an update! And 2 new chapters no less! The Healer Harry bit was especially hot. Keep it up!
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  • From CodyMThomas on October 04, 2011
    hehehe you are spoiling me, two updates in a day. THANK YOU! bathtimes next? I seriously love every part of this story.
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  • From ANON - addiena saffir on October 04, 2011
    your a very sick individual to come up with this....I'm sicker for getting so turned on by it...jeez
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  • From bloodshound on October 04, 2011
    That wasn't squicky... *peers at you shaking my head. That was just hot... extremely hot... excuse me. I need to go and take care of something now. I'll be back for the next chappie.
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  • From CodyMThomas on October 04, 2011
    SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! Oh gods you have no idea how much I'm smiling right now. that was AWESOME! ThankyouthankyouthankyouTHANKYOU! *Super massive happy dance* ^_^

    OOOOH IDEA! mild/light Breathplay! And these are Malfoy men after all, so they would only use the best, maybe Silk scarves... Oh yeah, that kind of breathplay could definitely be fun. And that just happens to be something I do personally. You know where to reach me if you have any questions. ^_^
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  • From jesuswalks on September 29, 2011
    this is actually the best, sexiest, most well written story on here!
    i really hope you keep writing :)
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  • From andrea116 on September 25, 2011
    This is the hottest story I've ever read. That is all.
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