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Reviews for Rescue Me

By : Cardinal
  • From bloodshound on May 04, 2011
    well cringe... they're getting on sooooooooo very well together. lol. Still, i want more where you can. I feel this is pretty honest to both of them so far.
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  • From sparrowswing on May 04, 2011
    This has a really familiar feel to it. I'm almost sure I've read it, or something quite similar, before. Is it a rewrite or repost, perhaps? Or maybe I'm just having a really bad case of Deja-vu. But I swear that little details like the house elf's name and that scene at the end there in the foyer are things I've read before... So weird. In any case, I would very much like to see where this goes. It's definitely a good beginning, if a little fast-paced at the moment. Development and exposition so often get rushed in fanfiction, since there's rarely a need to introduce the characters or settings. But I'm sure you'll slow things down as the story progresses. I can't wait to read more.

    By the way, your profile says to email you, but AFF removed emails from author profiles at some point, so you might want to list it in your "About" section (that's what I did, at least).
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  • From Cinder1013 on May 04, 2011
    Just read both chapters. Intriguing. How is Snape going to get Harry to tell him what happened?
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  • From Buumkin on May 03, 2011
    Good start! Don't be shy in your writing style, and keep writing!
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