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Reviews for Strangers in the Night

By : estherkolbe
  • From ladilyndi on May 06, 2012
    Very nice. I enjoy your writing.
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  • From QueenB on July 16, 2011
    Ch. 7 This was a very good fanfic. I didn't care for Harry's outburst in front of Albus and Minerva; he's older and that kind of childish behavior is no longer acceptable. But the rest of it was more than workmanlike.
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  • From bloodshound on July 05, 2011
    that little bastard! So is he serious or just shovelling bull. Damn, Sev and Harry were off to a good thing to. If it's real this is going to make things much more complicated.
    Oh and by the way. You are evil. EEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVVVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL. Friggen cliffies of doooooom.
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  • From Orkchild on July 05, 2011
    All those in favor of removing Renee from the gene pool with extreme prejudice say I. God what a cold heart it bastard.
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  • From wynja on June 18, 2011
    I like this a lot! It's interesting, intelligent and you handle the characters very well! The ONLY thing nagging me is a simple editing-thing... the first quotation-mark of every line is at the bottom! I have no idea how that's even done, but it's very annoying to read... it should look like:
    "My name is Harry," the young man said.
    This might seem like a stupid thing to complain about, but the fact is that, as it is, you don't really see that it's supposed to be a dialouge from the get-go and reading it is like having somone poking you in the arm all the time; annoying and you can't focus on the text. Please re-edit?
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  • From QueenB on June 16, 2011
    Ch. 4 Your usage of the English language remains idiosyncratic and flawed in terms of grammar; it also makes certain characters a little strange in terms of characterization. But your story is largely comprehensible.

    I am surprised by Renee
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  • From bloodshound on June 16, 2011
    Little prick! I wish the slimy little oiker would let go and get a life already... pls pls pls say that what ever darstidliness he's up to will come backk to bite him later (that cow rita too). Harry and Sev deserve better.
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  • From QueenB on June 14, 2011
    Ch. 3 While matters are progressing wonderfully for Harry, Severus is playing it a little too close to the chest to suit me. He asks Harry what he wants but the Potions master doesn
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  • From LydiasTravel on June 13, 2011
    I'm with you. I really like the story so far. Update soon. I'm eager to see where you take it.
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  • From ladynightvamp on June 13, 2011
    awwwwwwwwwwww.. they are cute!!! They are going to have to find something in common to talk about.
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  • From bloodshound on June 13, 2011
    Yep! right here. Reporting! *salutes.
    not leaving til this story is done.
    Intrieging, I wonder what area Harry will chose to focus on. and Yeah, those to so utterly set them up. Bet on it. ^^
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  • From QueenB on June 04, 2011
    Ch. 2 Wow! That was some kiss! In spite of the oddity of the quotation marks, I quite liked this chapter. When they finally have sex, I
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  • From QueenB on June 04, 2011
    Ch. 1 Dang that Rita Skeeter anyway. And that Renee struck me as absolutely repellant, flaunting his new boyfriend to torment Severus. Severus has moved on, you tosser, and to the Boy Who Lived. Top that!
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  • From Laney on May 16, 2011
    I really love this so far and can't wait to see an update!
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  • From iononhapaura on May 12, 2011
    I really love the story and I can't wait for the next chapter
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