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Reviews for The Right Choice

By : Holly
  • From Annecia89 on December 05, 2014
    Very sad... I wouldn't be surprised if Harry killed himself.
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  • From gossipgirl84 on June 23, 2012
    I thought about reading the whole thing but it's too depressing and disturbing, with Draco being with Voldermort, gag me. Anyways, don't be offended, I am just sick of reading angsty, depressing stories.
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  • From gossipgirl84 on June 23, 2012
    Could I be anymore grossed out? eww. I hate Draco or Harry with anyone else except for each other.
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  • From ANON - Shari Cox on August 05, 2011
    Loving the story so far.. Hoping to see another chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Weldwench on July 31, 2011
    Hey there
    I'm really enjoying your story so far; thanks so much for writing it. I just thought I'd help review your paragraph structure. You have a tendency to split the actions and dialogue of a character between two paragraphs, and the reader can't tell who's speaking easily. So for example you have something like:

    "story story story story story Draco looked to Harry.

    (new paragraph) 'who's dialogue is this?'. Harry frowned"

    So although I know Draco is supposed to be the speaker, the break indicates that it's actually Harry speaking at the time.
    Anyway, great story. Hope you don't mind the review!

    -ww
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  • From RRW on July 17, 2011
    I'm sorry you are not going to continue this story and I am shocked it did not get more reviews. Its really good. I usually don't read as much on AFF because of the lack of e-mail alerts on this site as opposed to the other fan sites. If you posted on those sites too, I'm sure you would have received more reviews. Great story!
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  • From SilentDreamer on July 15, 2011
    You need to finish this!!! T-T I'm still crying!!!! I need the closure, please!!!!!!!
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  • From helga1967 on July 14, 2011
    All have a price, the decision that Draco made was hard and necesary but have a high cost. I loved so far
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  • From dominique1 on July 06, 2011
    i so hope that harry gets his baby back before she grows up
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  • From Jessica86 on June 28, 2011
    I love this story. And I feel really bad for both Harry and Draco. I can't believe that Voldemort will take their child. I really hope that they'll be able to escape before it happens and be a little family together. And what's up with all the dissapearenses?
    I hope you'll update soon
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  • From mrequecky on June 01, 2011
    Wow, loooved! Poor Harry and Draco...
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  • From ulla on May 24, 2011
    interesting story! I love Draco's scheming... but I have to know: is this a repost of a WIP or a complete fic?
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