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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre

From ANON - Andrea Readwolf on August 17, 2012
Slightly perturbed/overwhelmed at the thought of Harry being pregnant again so soon. Can't decide if you're being really cruel/mean or just devious. [laughs] Still, it is what it is, and it's twins! Woot! No more of this five-baby bit. It's too scary when they come earlier like that! Dragon or not! ^__^

Um, read this quickly before work this morning; now I'm trying to remember the chapter I read versus the facebook comments. ugh. Brain is baked from too much sun. Ah, well.

I didn't even think of Max spicing up Harry's meal as being cruel until I was forcibly reminded of Harry's history with food-punishments; then I was torn between feeling bad for Max and being angry with him. The realization that Harry doesn't trust Max with his food now really hurt, but I'm glad they've developed a plan to move beyond that, and I'm happy for the domestic-scenes that will possibly build because of their solution. ^__^

Date night! What a lovely idea! And... [snorts] Harry and I share a similar reaction to red wine. [laughs] Although, I can't decide whether to be jealous/envious of his hot, wall sex with an even hotter smexy man like Max.... or wince in pain at what his back will look like come morning. Brick is NOT forgiving, not matter which type or how old. Ends of leaving little cuts and LOTS of abrassioins.... and it's worse and a horrible source of infections if it was an old, gritty brick wall, too. [shivers]

I apparently missed some of the conversations surrounding Regulus, but I'm glad you've given Severus closure now. (Although, there seems to be some suggestions that 1.) Regulus might have been put into stasis before he hit the water, and 2.) he's pregnant ?!?!?!?! lol!) Did I catch threads of someone trying to suggestion that Harry was really Severus's and Regulus's child? Oh, rumour has it... [snickers]

Um, hum.... Myron. I like--as in it makes me feel all warm and cozy--the fact that Harry seems so willing to run to Myron first of all the grandparents, and that he feels comfortable just dropping his babies off on Myron's hands so he can go run off and do something so idiotically Gryffindorish. [snickers] 'Cockblocked' indeed... Still, he called for Myron first. Trying to remember if Myron is Max's biological father or Richard. Still, it was Max's family Harry runs to first; not Nasta's dad or Blaise's Mom. To me, that speaks loads of his comfort-level and acceptance towards his in-laws. And what a vast extended family they are!

I... twins? Really? Will it be a natural heat cycle, I wonder.... You've already said boys are more likely, unlike in normal human births. I feel bad for Draco, but somehow I just don't think he's going to be the father again this next time. Of course, he's not really ready to be a father yet, is he? Even if he's already in a family as a dad-figure. [sighs] [double sigh] Other than Braiden being Blaise's and Faerie-baby Leo being Nasta's, I didn't really pay attention to who's whose with the three boys, though the girl is Nasta's....? Which... leaves two boys to Max and one other boy to Nasta, I think.

I confess, I sorta like Max more... followed by Blaise and/or Nasta. Both as their characters and as the next expecting father. Although, Max's family is pretty big... and Nasta has a brother and sister, whereas Blaise has only his mum and Braiden.... So maybe I'm leaning a little more towards Blaise. Plus, Blaise gave Harry/us that lovely kitchen smex. Not to mention helped instigate that wonderful engagement the night before.

Thank you for updating to regularly. I'm always a little giddy when a new chapter is announced!
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From ANON - Keleals on August 17, 2012
I wish there was some sort of way for Snape to be happy again. he is my favorite character. I'm just glad he was able to find regulus
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From ANON - quicksilvereyes on August 17, 2012
Great chapter! You said on Facebook that there will soon be another clutch. Could it be from this drunken public sex? Alcohol does elevate your body temperature...
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From Jan on August 17, 2012
Oh my giddy-on that was doubly yummy ^_^ Please update chapter 58 soon.

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From ANON - ArtemisEarth on August 17, 2012
I am still in love with this story. So much happened in this chapter it's almost hard to process it all. I'm going to have to re-read it before you get the next one up. Thank you for posting it, by the way. I know that you don't have to, but I really appreciate it.

I enjoyed the Harry/Max sex scene. It was intersting to see it from Max's point of view. I like how Drunk Harry = Demanding/Aggresive Sexual Harry. But why do I have the feeling that someone saw them? Someone with a camera? Who sells the picture to the Daily Profit? And that Harry didn't lose his boxers. They were taken by the same someone. I suppose I'll just have to wait to find out.

The babies are soooo cute. I can't wait to see when they start crawling/walking. I know it's a ways away yet but I imagine that they will be little hellraisers. I can just see them getting out of the rooms at Hogwarts and galavanting about the castle. XD Keep up the great work.
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From ANON - Emma on August 17, 2012
OMG SO GOOD!!! I cried so hard when the found Regulus!!! I am so happy though that Severus has some closure! I know you are sick of the matter but I do hope that Severus finds someone he can heal with and perhaps continue with his live with. Please? lol! Only if you want him to though. And it would have to be a male submissive cause I def can't see him with anyone else. lol But anyway, LOVED IT and CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!

PS Oh and just and idea though but for Scaled Bits, I was wondering if you would be open to the idea of writing about Draco's transformation and his usage of the suppressant potion? I was just thinking the other day that it would be an interesting read. But only if you want to though!

Thanks!
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From ANON - grim1989 on August 17, 2012
the whole time i read the part with them in the ally, I kept thinking Rita Skeeter is gonna be in their with them and a newpaper will show the next day >.< Harry has that bad of luck when it comes to stories about him.
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From ANON - Lizzosaur on August 17, 2012
DAMN! Who knew reading it from Max's POV would be that hot? ;)
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From ANON - djaddict on August 17, 2012
This story is so enjoyable! More goodness aroung every corner.

I do have one request of your muse. I would love to see some one on one Harry/Draco action and/or a date. I don't think Draco gets enough Harry! lol
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From ANON - chester on August 17, 2012
Wait a second! Snape continues to have unhappy unendings??? He now has to deal with both the dead bodies of his lover and his kid??!? That's horrible! I would have wanted him to have some happiness after everything that he went through! He deserves it! Please do something to make him happy - like the baby living or something!!!
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From ANON - BeinDraug on August 17, 2012
I LOVE YOU STAR.

This was brilliant and finally we can stop hearing questions about Regulus. The weer adorable im glad that leolin is doing so well and I desperately want to see more drunk/dominant harry
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From NinaSweets on August 17, 2012
Oh my God! I've spent the past few days glued to my computer reading this, I'll tell you it made going to work a real bitch but it was worth it. What an absolutely amazing story! So well written! You made me laugh and cry, just this perfect combination of comedy and drama. It is just amazing. Definitely one of the best creature fics I've ever read! I like that you haven't made it a typical Harry sub story, I like he's kept that fierceness without it getting ridiculous you know? I love your original characters and how you portray Draco and Blaise. Oh I absoloutely love it in fact I'm going back to the start and reading it again because I need more till you update! Just... oh I love it so much I've run out of ways to express that! Okay... I've gushed all I can... for now. Oh do you have a set day for updating or do you post on your facebook page when you update? I guess I shall find out soon
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From Zx14ninja on August 17, 2012
Why are scales that are green or yellow worth more than other scales? Do different colored scales have different properties or are they just rarer? and one other question (because I haven't bothered you enough yet ^_^) What happens to a mateship with more than one domanint if the submissive dies? Do the domanints stay together and become like a "package deal" if they decide to try for another submissive? Or do they split apart? I'm sorry I asked so many questions this time around, its just that I've been rereading and rereading my fav. chapters. Also you do a great job with characters and world building, which is the hardest part in my opinon.
I love this story, makes me feel better since I'm stuck at home with a cold.
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From Lady_Arachne on August 17, 2012
Oh wow!! This is an amazing chapter!! >:D

Loved the part about Regulas, loved the part after that, loved the part where Harry got punished, loved the part where Braiden was so ADORABLE, loved the part where Max took Harry to dinner, love the part where they had sex in the alley, loved the part when they stumbled into the bedroom drunk as fuck!! Loved everything about this chapter!! *giggles insanely*

And about you not checking for mistakes...*claps*...I didn't even notice the mistakes! When a chapter is so good to me, my brain fixes the small mistakes so I won't have to read it over and fix it myself as I read it again~!

Good chapter~! *claps* *grins* Can't wait for the next one~!
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From ANON - Lientjuhh on August 17, 2012
I totally love the sex scene.. And the little bedroom scene after that.. I like it.. well written.. :D
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