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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - PandaBlitz on July 17, 2012
    ..... I LOVED IT! A little Faerie baby, he will be just so cute as a child and handsome as an adult.
    I'm so glad that every baby is alright at the moment.
    A little girl!? Yay! But I kinda feel sorry for her... 5 brothers, not to mention 5 parents to chase away any future boyfriend/girlfriend. I wouldn't want to mess with her biological father..

    I love the update, thank you so much!
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  • From daan73 on July 16, 2012
    wow i am speechless that was amazing!
    so powerful and intense
    i cannot wait for the new chapter
    how are the children how are harry and how will de mates and familly respond!
    what will be the name are they indeed al well ?
    so exciting!
    Dani Elle
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  • From daan73 on July 16, 2012
    beautiful amazing fabulous chapter!
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  • From ANON - Maiyanna on July 14, 2012
    I really love this story, and I can't wait for there to be more, but I was wondering....what is everyone's birthdays. Nasta's is Feb. 3rd. Harry's is July 31st. Blaise's is Oct. 12, but i don't remember Draco, Max, and the new babies. I think Braiden's is Aug. 19th. It was just something I was wondering.
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  • From Mithryl on July 14, 2012
    I must review... Not often, but I reviewed the appropriate chapter in the scaled bits so I really needed to comment here. I KNEW there were going to be problems the minute the famous last words were uttered "what can happen in a few hours" that opens more cans of worms than I care to contemplate. Hopefully we'll get the next chapter quickly-ish. Need some cheer or at least comfort after this mess. Very, very well written and made me cry. I'm currently re-reading from the beginning - AGAIN. Keep up the wonderful writing:)
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  • From YaoiPerv on July 14, 2012
    OMG Loving this story!! You have made the most addicting characters as well!!! LOVE THEM!! Please Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Shadowwolf03 on July 14, 2012
    Wow... intense, scary, and fantastic.
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  • From ANON - Angel_Kellar on July 14, 2012
    i started reading this story a long time ago it feels like, and then i sort of lost it. i'm so glad i finally found it again and have gotten caught up on all the chapters! You are an amazing, talented, creative writer. i have to say i do anxiously await the day Harry births a child for Draco. He's one of my absolute most favorite characters out of the entire series and it's somewhat sad to me that he's the only one without a biological child now. i understand that all the Drackens see the children as theirs, but i still think there's somewhat of a stronger connection with the biological parent. i feel like it's almost implied with the way Blaise is with Braiden(beautiful name, by the way-i'd love to name one of my own male children that). For now though i will wait patiently and excitedly for the day Draco does have his first biological child-though i do agree Harry needs a few years break with six infant children to let grow up a little bit first. And i am going to wait anxiously to see what the next chapter holds-how the babies are, what their genders are, and who is the biological parent for each child, and of course the most exciting part: their names! :D my own opinion of course-i have an absolute love for naming children-even though i don't have any of my own yet. :p And then of course, back to Harry's education and how he's going to handle that. This last chapter was amazing, one of my favorites, and it brought me to sad and then happy tears-an accomplishment if there ever was one to bring a person to both sad and happy tears in the span of a few minutes-and i'm so excited for the next chapter! i just can't contain it! i will also, definitely, be checking out the side story to this one. Until the next chapter, thanks for gracing us with this wonderful story! :)
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  • From ANON - Inkosdelirium on July 14, 2012
    Oh man, I have always been a fan of coming into creature inheritance fanfics but this is one of the most well written and amazing stories that I have ever read. I feel like I know each character, even the OC's which usually I don't even like. The whole story is flowing so well, I'm literally gushing about your story to all the ff writers I know because it is that amazing. You took this and completely made it your own. I can't believe it was left on such a great cliffhanger and I can't believe what happened!! Poor harry, poor mates. I hope that Amel---- I mean bitch didn't cause this to happen to the baby hen she originally hit him, like that baby doing magic unconsciously to protect the others. I am still so sad that Draco still hasn't had any yet :( Poor harry has to have more to make sure he can give him one to. !!! Gasp I hope this doesn't make harry barren I really really hope not!!!!!!!!! You are amazing!!! You really are, if you put other character in this (non HP) Then you caould definetly have sold this a s a book, I would 100% buy it. IT is amazing!!
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  • From ANON - MysticalElf on July 13, 2012
    umm... I hope it's not too late for voting on the gender of the children... umm.. I would like more girls.. to start evening things out a bit.. I would like the inside out baby to be a girl though.... *hint* lol...
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  • From Zx14ninja on July 13, 2012
    Do the dragon trainers that Nasta work with know he's a dracken?
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  • From ANON - Char on July 13, 2012
    I came across this story about a week ago and haven't been able to put it down since. I love the flow, the dialog, and the plot. I am now starting on the Bits. I also work at night, so I do understand how hard it is. Please keep up the great work. I will be waiting all the way here in California.
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  • From ANON - abby on July 13, 2012
    hi your story is one of the best stories that I have read in a long time. Usually I don't read works in progress because whenever I start it, the author disappears of the face of the earth. Your story has had me on the edge of my seat for weeks it is an amazing story line, I love where you've taken it. Thank You and I hope you continue to write great stories such as this.
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  • From TheBabblingBrooke on July 13, 2012
    First off: HOLY FRICKIN' CLIFFHANGER!

    Wow, intense update, wasn't expecting it for maybe another chapter or two, even though I knew that Harry would be going into labor early. Glad you didn't reveal the dad's and genders in this one though, gives me a last chance to throw my guess in. I really hope the little one makes it and Harry wakes up soon. (REALLY glad it didn't turn out like the first version you posted in The Scaled Bits ~shutters~ that would have been aweful).

    Blaise: one boy
    Max: two boys, one girl
    Nasta: one girl, farie

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  • From HeartStar on July 12, 2012
    oh my god the last baby oh the poor dear will he /she survive?

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