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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - sarah louise jones on July 09, 2012
    I think I prefer the idea of more boys than girls in this clutch.
    It was a gorgeous chater.
    Amelle really does my nut in though!! Ceaser deserves better!!
    I feel so bad for Draco, bless him!! He'll have his chance at a chick soon enough I suppose.
    I want my own Nasta, Max, Draco, Blaise and Harry!! Their so adorable together!!
    It's so bad, I look up other stories to read and I try finding Max or Nasta and they aren't there... duh!! Completely fallen in love with them!!
    I'm still eagerly awaiting the arrival of Nasta's extended family to join the madness!!
    All the best,
    Sarah Louise Jones
    xx
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  • From ANON - CM on July 09, 2012
    I really like this part of the story where Lucius finally sees his faults and how he's hurting Draco. Though everytime I see the talk about the new babies makes me sad because Draco can't be a part of it. I know they have many years for him to have babies but I'm afraid that you'll finish the story without Draco having a child or not showing the day to day events with Harry carrying his child like the way he is now for the rest of the Dominants and maybe just state at the end that he gave birth to Draco's child just like that. It'll be sad if Draco's child only gets the rushed small snippets of their birth. Do you think you'll stop it without Draco having the child? Sorry, it just really makes me sad if the readers don't get to see Draco's child birth:(. I know it's your story but I'm just saying how I'm feeling :). I hope you are able to email me
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  • From ANON - under draco on July 09, 2012
    I forgot to add Amelle makes me so upset with her Mompetiton.
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  • From ANON - under draco on July 09, 2012
    Thank you for the fast updates. I'm glad Mr. Malfoy is becoming a better parent to Draco. Also thank you for adding a snipet of Snape in the lastest chapter. I think Regulus was kidnapped by another Dominant. Harry felt like me with my last pregnancy. I hated my daughter before she was born, I felt she was too soon after my first born. I tried to ignore getting ready for her. I cried to my fiance about not wanting her and I felt bad for not wanting her. Then I fell in love with her when she was born.
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  • From dominique1 on July 09, 2012
    actually this chapter explains a lot and the reason why draco should be a father yet you did that with the part of lucius and draco had their moment so no more whine and crying from me about draco not having a baby yet poor harry telling his family about first year kind of looking forward to him telling them everything and amelle is just a bitch i loved that briaden said mama
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  • From ANON - Lientjuhh on July 09, 2012
    I like it.. Well done.. :D
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  • From ANON - nicola on July 09, 2012
    Loved Loved Loved It!!!!! I love the fact that Lucius has sucked it up and made it up with Draco!
    Your the Best!
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  • From ANON - roosickle on July 09, 2012
    Love that threat !!! sticking fingers in eye's how creative are you??????great chapter ( as is normal of you) love the Snape interlude and yes you made me cry with the Lucius /Draco reuniting, so sweet . So ,a question for you, as you know I re read this quite often and would love to see Theo come back, I feel he really is an underused character, I don't see him as a baddy but as a possible love interest for Hermoine? I also had a weird thought the other day , if a submissive draken came to light who knew nothing about the whole idea and wasent as accepting as Harry is because of hi abandoment , the "meeting' could be seen as a choose your own rapist type of thing because really through hormones they have no option but to mate and if you didnt know about the society around it ,to a 16 year old thats what it looks like, or am I reading things wrong, just some feedback , not saying your 'world' is wrong just that I probably have a screwed imagination.
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  • From PandaBlitz on July 09, 2012
    Hmmm 2 girls and 3 boys... But the smallest child, a small little girl, will be to small and pass away after birth, or will need medical attention immediately.
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  • From bloodshound on July 09, 2012
    that's Har for you... but then I wouldn't have been able to pick and chose either. I hope all the little ones survive.
    How do preggo Drac's fly to their next in this state or do they make nests at a lower location tat they can get to?
    Braiden laughing was adorable.
    That was a hard, hard lesson for Blaise but one he wont be forgetting and a near miss for all of them. Har comes first, always, ever, only and that's something they can never afford to forget. Yay for visiting in laws. without em they may well have lost him and the kids too.
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  • From ANON - Myuna-chan on July 09, 2012
    Yaaay~ the update. Today I took my day off my work because I was sick. When I found out you updated chp49-51, I read them. Sometimes I always check your update, but I didn't know you already update more chapter, or I missed them before? ^^;a

    I was surprised when Harry got FIVE babies but so excited too (0＾＾)0☆♪
    I am glad he didn't abort 3 of them. I was angry with that healer even though he had the reason for it.
    About the father, I wish they had each father's gen. I was curious, can a baby have 2 gens from the dominant?
    I hope you make them have twin male babies...but, is it possible to have twin?

    Have a nice day (〃＾∇＾)♡
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  • From ANON - ranni on July 08, 2012
    great new chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
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  • From ANON - Carmen on July 08, 2012
    I love this! I really hope you update soon! I joined AFF just to review this honestly lol. And is there a way I could put this on alert like with FFnet? Cause I can't wait to read more! xD
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Justmine25 on July 08, 2012
    Ok them just found ur story yesterday and read all 51 chapters I am feelin it even tho I am mainly a draco/harry shipper I am sad sooooo sad none of the 6 children where draco's I really was hopin 4 the first child and since u made sure he wasn't part of the next set I am so disappointed but ln u but alas u said its far from ova so I will patiently wait for wen u will give him a chance will keep my eyrs open for some more of ur interestin story keep up the gud work. :)
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  • From ANON - WizardsGirl on July 08, 2012
    A wonderful update to be sure, Poor Harry! Love Myron and Richard. I hope you update again soon!!

    Hugs & Kittens,
    ~Wizard
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