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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2012
    This is my favorite story right now I can not wait for more. I love all of the characters you have created or enhanced.
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  • From ANON - Tsukkina on July 05, 2012
    Hello,

    Congratulations for your 50 chapters and 7000 comments!
    I still love your fanfiction!

    Poor Harry, I expected a little after watching the vote for the pregnancy of H.
    Poor Max, Nasta and Blaise, having to choose between their probable heirs or Harry.
    Poor Draco too, but at least he still has 140 years to give birth to Harry.

    I find it unfortunate that Harry must to remove three of his babies, could you make sure to keep the fetus in stasis or use a surrogate mother?
    If I remember correctly, in your fictional the wizards (men) may have children, even if Nasta, Max, Blaise and Draco are drackens they are wizards, they may carry fetuses instead of Harry.
    I really don't want Harry is in danger or that he should kill her babies. TT_TT
    Please, leave earlier to deliver Harry that he suffers less.

    Amelle will be dead jealous XD I would love another confrontation Amelle VS Harry.

    I find there isn't enough villains in your fic: Dominic, Ron and Amelle. Dominic died, Ron calmed down and we do not often see Amelle. Is it that you create other villains? When Harry has fewer problems with her ​​pregnancy of course ...

    Also, I can't wait to see Harry reuses the tearful method of mother Blaise's against his mates.

    It's summer, are you on vacation? Are you going to post more often, even at normal pace or less often?

    Meanwhile your new chapters, I will read the old.
    ^ _ ^

    Excuse me if there are many mistakes, I'm not very good at English (I am French).
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  • From ANON - Lara_Lynx on July 05, 2012
    Wow, this was fast and absolutly wonderful! I hope that they don't take 3 Babys and that all of them will survive!! It would be very awful if only one would die... then I would bawl my eyes out! You don't want that, do you? I'm sorry for Draco I hope you think about it that he had sex with Harry only a couple of days later, so that one child could be his?! That would be great! But Draco and Harry are young they have other chances and Draco will love the kids like his own that is really awesome... I hope Max will have two, Nasta two and Blaise one and I hope for more girls then boys *g*

    I'm worried about the birth. It could be very dangerous, but I think that Harry is powerful and will be alright... He will be alright, right? Please say yes!

    Thank you for your fantastic (and fast) work on this! I love the story, I love the characters, I love the smut and I love you! ;)
    GO Massacre!

    PS: I think you can "see" it, but english is not my motherlanguage... and this review is one of my longest ever! Only for you! And I hate it to write something in english... I am not very good at this... I hope you understand all of my words ;)
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 05, 2012
    If your interested my deviantart is under qwertyx2012 I have a few sketches up but not many involve harry potter so I'm not sure whether you'd like them or not as I have no Idea what your interested in aside from jk rowlings wonderful work.
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  • From roni004 on July 05, 2012
    love it
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  • From dominique1 on July 05, 2012
    so not fair i think that if harry was not meat to have the babies his body should do it it self not some selective reduction i kind of hope that that he keeps all his babies and that their health harry's a dracken so he should be fine want more
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on July 05, 2012
    I love ch. 50! Poor Harry! He has to decide whether or not to kill some of his babies to give others life. Don't do it, Harry! You'll regret it!

    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ca Choel on July 05, 2012
    Ohh. I love this chapter. Poor poor Harry with that morning sickness. I do hope it gets easier for him.
    I can understand his reaction at the news of five chicks. It does sound like it might be a bit too much for him since he's already has a very young Braiden as well as school. I think that the best thing to do would be to follow the healers advice. I mean, he wouldn't suggest it if he didn't feel it was for the best. And I think that since Harry seems a bit reluctant to have more chicks at the moment it would be easier on him as well since I fear he might slip into a deep depression if he births them all. But I was wondering, if he decides to terminate three of the chicks - would that mess up with his instincts and make him more depressed or even suicidal? Because if that would happen then he must keep the chicks! But it's all up to you of course. I'm just thinking of Harry and Myron was right - Harry has a slight frame so it would put so much pressure on him that might kill him.
    Anyway I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I hope it will come as quickly as this one.
    Thank you for a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - kokoro on July 05, 2012
    sorry but you said four and after five i don't understand @_@
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  • From ANON - Lientjuhh on July 05, 2012
    I like it.. Well done.. :D
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  • From bloodshound on July 05, 2012
    poor harry... how could you decide. I know i couldn't. Especially when he doesn't know whose child they would be killing. It's a pity the wizarding world doesn't have artificial wombs available or a fertile surrogate to transfer the baby too.
    Harry is small enough that he might be forced to chose it (does this mean the earlier vote of the baby ratio is null and void?)
    All I can say is i can't see Har being able to go with this decision on a regular basis. Once he might be able to handle... maybe, after a lot of counseling and with much support but given the dracen propensity for throwing to multiple births it's sure to come up again, especially with four mates. would har be able to handle a continual sacrifice of his children? Well, maybe the later multiples will be fewer in number, twins, triplets etc. so it won't be as much of an issue.
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  • From ANON - Woodland Spirit on July 05, 2012
    Poor Harry! I'm not sure if I want him to have the selective reduction or not. Poor thing he's so miserable, can't wait for happy to come back.
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  • From HeartStar on July 05, 2012
    oh this is sad what will you have them choose it sounds like harry dosed want them but doesn't want to loose them either.....
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  • From PandaBlitz on July 05, 2012
    Oh my god.... How can a mother choose between her/his children? Even if they aren't even developed yet. Poor Harry. Poor Draco!

    The update that so quick and awesome! Please update again soon!
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  • From Amar_Mystickz on July 05, 2012
    theres pictures?
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