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By : StarLightMassacre

From ANON - MadMoony on June 11, 2012
Hi, this is my first review since I decided to read the whole story bf commenting. So firstly, thank you so much for writing this! It had been a long while since a fanfic had enraptured me in such a way and God knows how much I needed a distraction from my own life lately. I love all your original characters and the whole dracken concept is fascinating. Naturally, as every annoying/slightly obcessed fan I have a couple of questions that I hope won't bother you too much to answer (but I'll understand if you don't, with a busy schedule like yours XP).

So, I do LOVE reading Harry as a submissive partner in bed, this was one of the factors that attracted your fic to me so much. You know, submissive yet fierce - yummy! Out of bed, though, I've always seen Harry as a very independent and strong character, which doesn't mean he can't be sentimental and open about his emotions, and you seem to be portraying Harry just like that. What has been bothering me quite a lot is how Harry's dominants see him. I can't remember right now a line that Max said about Harry that pissed me off a lot so I'll mention one from Blaise instead. In chapter 41, he says "You all treat me as lesser, you treat me like Harry, like I
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From GravyBaby on June 11, 2012
THIS
STORY
ROOOOOOOOOOCKS!!!!!!
Oh and yes the Merry Gentry books do pick up after the first few chapters. I actually like MG better than AB for the simple fact that AB has gotten too angsty, bitchy, and bitter in the last few books I've finished. I have all except the last one but I have yet to even open the last 2 or 3 I bought. MG books have tons of sex, of course, but she doesn't get all pissy and cranky afterwards like AB does. FYI you'll want to check the pronunciation key for names and stuff. I can't remember which book it's in though. You'll probably do what I did and be like "WHAAAAAAAAT?" [headscratch]
BTW thank you SO MUCH for having Nasta's daddy take him to task! As much as he is one of my 2 faves (Blaise being the other) I wanted to smack him a few times for that caveman like attitude he puts out every once in a while treating Harry like a little kid.
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From ANON - bookworm0492 on June 09, 2012
Good evening! Ive been loving this story for a long while and love the direction and ideas and whatnot, im just wondering something. Earlier you mentioned something about Darcken hunters and whatnot. Will they ever come into play in the story? I mean, with Harry Potter being the boy who lived and the hero of the wizarding world, I get the feeling it wouldonly be a matter of time until hes found out by some shady person and then the Hunters will descend upon them!!

XD And Im also wondering if we'll learn anymore about how harry's final fight with Voldemort went down. Im greatly curious since he was such a vital role in the orginal series. XD

and dont get me wrong, Im in love with this story, the Dracken concept, Blaise and Dracoas mates, I adore Nasta and Max and all of their families and the Dracken community and everything XD Im just reaaaaaally looking forward to when the action picks back up again. seeing them all happy together is undeniably sweet and fluffy and ahh! Love it but, 0o Im craving a little tension and *le gasp* stuff. XD I mean, this is harry freackin Potter!! Greatniess is thrust upon and hes destined to do great things!! XD I hope im making sense, but at any rate, enjoy your summer and cant wait for the next update!!
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From Calliech28 on June 09, 2012
1. I LOVE this story! I squee and make everyone in my house look at me like I'm an idiot every time I see a new chapter. 2. The Meredith Gentry series does indeed pick up after the first few chapters. I had trouble with it at first too but about a third of the way through I was like wow. Anyway I Cannot Wait for the next chapter and enjoy your summer!
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From ANON - MysticalElf on June 09, 2012
This is one of my FAVORITE stories!!!! Thank you for putting this out where people ( I mean me!!) can read it as often as i like which I read a bit every day since I found it!! Thank you!!!
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From ANON - Andrea Readwolf on June 09, 2012
Merry Gentry does pick up--have you met Doyle or Sholto yet? I actually enjoy her harem of men more than Anita's, as much as I do adore Nathaniel's character, Merry's men are just so much more... well, godly. [snorts] Sorry, couldn't resist.

Well, dang! Talk about a heavy hitting chapter! (had to go back and reread it in some points...[smacks lips]). Love that Harry got his holiday. And more of a holiday than he bargained for! Ha! Good for them! And for us--did I mention, "yum!"

I'm actually a bit suprised that Harry's going back to school--as a student. I mean, I wonder how long it'll last. Because, well, I can see it's something he thinks he wants, right now, but the minute this pregnancy really takes hold of him... It's not going to be easy. Multiple pregnancies never are (not to say single pregnancies always are, you understand)... And with five babies...that's just going to make everything five times as difficult.

September will be tiring, but still workable, I'm sure. October will be pretty difficult. I can easily see Harry considering dropping some classes now to maybe, perchance pick them up again later. November will be a killer. Can't see him hardly making it to any classes at that point. Especially not if he does deliver increadiably early--4.5 months did you say? That would give them, what? Yule/New Year's babies? Depends on conception date, of course.

And I'm really struggling to see how they're going to care for 1 + 5 babies while at school. Even if Nasta is "working from home" and Harry takes a leave of absence from his schooling.... Still, if they can make it to June, Draco and Blaise will have some more time to dedicate before they jump into the work field. Trying to see if the boys would actually allow any of the Hogwarts students to help out/babysit. Suppose there's always the grandparents, now that Blaise's mum has proved herself....

A little perturbed by Remus's scene. Not sure what it was that turned me off from him during his pity-pout. Maybe the fact you mentioned he was offered a house near young-Harry and turned it down. Always kind of thought that after the grieving wolf had some time to come to term, he would demand to see his pack's pup... unless he was total guilted out of coming near the area. Still, I'm glad Tonks was able to have her wicked way with him! Ha!

Delicious chapter, and I've always been so delighted and excited looking forward to your updates. Sorry to hear you plan on actually enjoying the seasonal weather this summer if it means the muses won't be cracking! [eyes Seattle weather critically] Of course, sunshine and warm-moderate temps can be appealing....

~Andrea Readwolf
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From AmberEyedWolf on June 09, 2012
I cannot tell you how much I absolutely love this story,it probably tops most others I've read :) please update soon xxx
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From mizzwhip72 on June 08, 2012
Remus us happy and is in love. Tonks will make him happy.
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From PandaBlitz on June 08, 2012
I will now be reading this story in this site. I'm getting really annoyed with fanfiction.net.
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From ANON - kia on June 08, 2012
if you have an update list can you add me please. I love your story. I have read most of the HP stories and yours is the most original
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From ANON - Katja on June 08, 2012
I simply loved this chapter! Harry getting his first real vacation, seeing(?) the beach and all that other stuff. Brilliant.
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From Wyldcat1187 on June 08, 2012
I don't leave reviews very often but I absolutely have to for this. I truly enjoy your writing. I'm not only a fan of this but also of the Life and Times fic. It is really great to find a story that has such a well-developed plot, with original characters that readers can relate to and care about. I want to know more about all of the families and their lives (except Amelle because I love to hate her (; ) I look forward to every update and I've actually reread the whole thing 3 or 4 times. I don't know if I cried at the part that you thought but I did get teary during this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter (I don't mind waiting because I'll just reread it again during the wait). Keep up the excellent work.
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From Nene on June 08, 2012
They do pick up, but the Anita Blake series is better. Both series are full of smut. And I loved the holiday, it was good
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From HeartStar on June 08, 2012
thank you and i hope you have a wonderful summer.
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From ANON - ranni on June 08, 2012
Wow! That chapter just rocked my socks off. AWESOME! I love all the "special" attention harry got from all his mates. Sexy lemon scenes. Loved them all! Fantastic job. One of your best chapters yet. I love when harry gets some loving and pampering... so cute. Can't wait to see more.
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