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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Krystal on May 24, 2012
    Ok I love Amelle! Lol every time shes in a scene i find myself laughing. I mean she doesnt have control over her instincts cant blame her for that, we cant all be super powerful like Harry. And i reallly want baby Draco!! Im hoping for a mini girl Draco BUT your probably gonna give it to Max or Nasta. D12
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  • From ANON - Grim1989 on May 24, 2012
    >.< cliffhangers! I hope Harry and the baby be okay, if not Amelle is gonna be in huge trouble :o i kick her butt, she's got that personality i really hate.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on May 24, 2012
    That was a good chapter. No 'I Hate You's' from here
    D 12
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  • From ANON - Ca Cohel on May 24, 2012
    You big meanie! How can you leave us hanging there? :o so Harry's pregnant again? That is quite awesome - I didn't see that one coming. Please include some nice fierce drama in this pregnancy too ^^
    I'm glad that it was only a temporary thing win Harry being overprotective and weird. But I don't like how Myron and Richard treated him :( I mean, if Asleigh can forgive him for that lapse of judgment then surely those two can. I would have loved to see Alexander screaming at them for what they did. And I do hope that they will ask Harry for forgiveness. I know it might be a bit out of character for them, but seeing as they both love him so much and would do anything for him an apology can't be that difficult for then. Please... I don't want any tension between them.
    And I really hate Caesar's wife. How can she just hit Harry like that! I really don't like her and I hope that Caesar can grow some balls and make her behave.
    As you might be able to tell I really love this story. And I hope the next chapter will be up just as quickly as this one ^^
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  • From ANON - Vampirezdarkgurl (too lazy to log in) on May 24, 2012
    I'll pick A-6. Idk why but that stuck with me. Lol. Anyway I'm loving the story in no way have I hated it...except for cliffhanger chapters *looks at the end of chapter 46 then at author* I hope Harry doesn't lose the baby because I think that would KILL him not to mention I just hate reading about someone losing a baby because it brings up painful memories from my family. And I hope that bitch Amelle gets hers for hurting Harry.

    I hope the baby survives and the five welcome another healthy baby into their family.
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  • From HeartStar on May 24, 2012
    OH ARE YOU SERIOUS SO WILL HARRY LOOSE THIS BABY NOW THAT HE WAS ATTACKED BY THE BITCH! MORE PLEASE AND CONGRATS ON THE 1 YR ANNAVERARY! i HAVE BEEN WITH YOU THE WHOLE WAY.....
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  • From ANON - slash_adherent on May 24, 2012
    Oops, almost forgot, 10-A :D
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  • From Zx14ninja on May 24, 2012
    D-6, A-12, L-10
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  • From ANON - slash_adherent on May 24, 2012
    Yay!!! Another update and so quick! And I loved it. No clue why you were asking people to explain why they would hate it. The drama, god I'm eating up the drama with a spoon! Granted I could flay Myron and Richard for how they treated Harry but I do hope we get to see a nice resolution to that in the future and, *squee*, pregnant again! *glomps* you are amazing my dear. I just hope the kick didn't hurt anything.

    Really looking forward to the next chapter...

    And possibly seeing the little bitch put in her place. :D
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on May 24, 2012
    OMG i love this chapter...the whole convo between max and his brother was so funny...it's like almost 4 in the morning and i was laughing so much i woke my family...but it's a great chapter and i love the fact that harry took a bite out of that bitch...go harry...i hope the baby is okay thou.....the number and letter i like the most are L-12....hope to be reading more from you soon...and happy 1 year anniverary.
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  • From ANON - Izzy on May 24, 2012
    Love this chapter
    Poor harry tho richard and mayron were harsh.
    I hope that the new baby is ok with his stomach getting kicked.... hope you update soon im on the edge of my seat....

    Oh and L-6

    Cant wait for more :)
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  • From bloodshound on May 24, 2012
    *lets off party poppers, throws streamers and cues music "happy b day to u (x 2) happy b day dear tRotD, Happy b day toooooooo yoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooou." *warbles happily off keys and cheers, letting loose balloons.

    wow, guess i didnt review fast enough huh. well, 2 chappies to do in this review then.

    those family moments are absolutely adorable. yay the power of evil little skirts. mwhahahaha.

    wow, 5 days old and already has his own bank account. ^^ Gah, those newshounds are vultures, they really are.

    man, having two sets of instincts in you must be hard to deal with but the fall out punished everyone. I don't know why they're surprised that har still does emotionally based accidental magic... they knew he was powerful. after all, he needed four mates.

    wow, that's a LOT of siblings. ^^

    what makes kyra so scary?

    are all subs raised as subs like that? It makes them sound like a rather self important, stuck up bunch.

    wow, that info is a bit scary. is there any particular age that the lack of sub ='s mental wobbles for a dom or is it different for each?

    would the kids be safe running around then? I mean if there are molesty uncles and i presume aunts about, or is it only those of breeding age that have to worry?

    oops... draco REALLY needs to watch what he says... everything was going so well.

    Oh, DAMN them. they should KNOW it wasn't personal. Har was hissing at everyone. considering how long he HASN'T had to adjust to it, he's doing brilliantly well. They're going to have to do some serious crawling to make up for this, cause har will blame himself. it's what he does.

    ohhh, those two are going to get it. seriously.

    heh, go Caesar. lets see her resist that. ;p

    man, amelle really is a prize bitch. will she be in trouble if har loses this baby or would har's body have aborted it anyway since it was so soon after his last pregnancy. No wonder poor har was so horny but i think that's got to be the quietest heat he's ever had.

    with all those kicks to the gut, it's a pretty good bet that har's going to lose this baby. Since it was a freak occurrence, as i asked earlier, would har have lost this one anyway? I mean his body hadn't recovered from the last one yet.

    how is it none of his dom's knew about the next thing. is that a healer or experienced dom thing to know?

    thanks to syreen for asking the other major Q i meant to ask.

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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 24, 2012
    !!! Harry's pregnant again! Also, wouldn't at least the older Doms would have known that subs only demolish their nest when they feel heat is approaching?

    Great chapter!

    oh and um D6


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  • From ANON - Linds on May 24, 2012
    I'm just waiting for Harry to rip Amelle's head off, she is a truly narcissistic bitch.

    Now you aren't just gonna leave us with a cliffy like this of having Harry's stomach being kicked when is apparently recently pregnant.

    L-12
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  • From Woodlandspirit on May 24, 2012
    Pregnant? I was not expecting that! I pick A-12
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