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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - dominique1 on May 24, 2012
    didn't i read somewhere that if a dracken hurt a child that they get sentence to death go amelle can die
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on May 24, 2012
    please update again i can't deal with not knowing if she killed the babies
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  • From ANON - Kawaiiyashie on May 24, 2012
    Omg your a seer! Your correct i hate you for leaving us with a cliffhanger!!!!!! Any who awsome chapter hehe i do hope harry gets some well deserved revenge on max's fathers and amelle. For your little game i choose D12. Cant wait for the next chapter i'll be stalking you on aff.net and facebook hehe....
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on May 24, 2012
    12 A harry's pregnant i hope he doesn't lose this baby or babies i hope that he goes ape shit on amelle now ourcesar please don't kill this baby our babies want more
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  • From ANON - roosickle on May 24, 2012
    wheeeeeeeeeeeeee, have I ever told you how much I love you : ) I loved it, the way in which you are filling in the characters in so i
    n depth and detailed, the lecherous uncle the loving older siblings still playfully fighting over old arguments , it all adds to the overall depth of the story, although I do feel a little sorry for Harry, I personally would have wanted more than one lot of awesome shmexy time befor I fell pregnant again LOL, although I imagine Amelle is going to be ina shitload of trouble for attacking a pregnant sub !
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  • From ANON - Syreen on May 24, 2012
    Awesome chapter, thank you! :) I don't think I will ever be bored with this story.
    But of course I have a question... again. If it was already asked or there are an explanation somewhere in the story that I didn't notice, I apologize. So, why is it that all those subs doesn't want to let their children just be children and go to play? It is said it's natural to be so protective, but there was that dracken meeting a few months ago and the children there could run freely and play with each other. At this party there are at least 40 or more strong men, all of them family members, where can children be more protected?

    Alexander seems to dislike those subs, LOL. Except Harry :D But surely he likes Asleigh too, doesn't he? She is so nice woman :)
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  • From ANON - brittany on May 24, 2012
    Im not trying to nit-pick or anything of the sort but in the beginning of this chapter when they are making fun of his food baby he mentions that he has only had sex with himself and the toys.... But there was an amazing sex scene just the chapter before. Was that just part of the joke since he couldn't be pregnant since he wasn't in heat or just a tiny error? I don't want ya to think im being rude or anything its just that when i write i like for people to point out when my stuff doesn't match up. Love the story and so happy for this update.... I was going a little sour crazy :-)
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  • From BellixiesPixies on May 23, 2012
    lol dunno why i have not read this one..
    xD i got confused with all the posts at fb i guess. xD hope Harry does not turns into a psycho mom...
    :$ he has shown a great control of his instincts in the past..
    so hopefully it is just the scare. tnk u
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on May 23, 2012
    Chapter 45 is awesome! When will Draco learn to think before he speaks?

    P.S. My fanfic account is SevLoverKat. Just so you know.
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  • From ANON - everyone96 on May 23, 2012
    i love this story i almost had an heart attackt when i didden find the story on my fav list on fanfiction.net. but then i fundt it agein lcky :D cant wait to read the nexst chapter bet it gonna be amezing :D
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  • From SailorSol on May 23, 2012
    If I haven't said so before, I love this fic, and the work you've put into it, including the details, like family we'll only see once.
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  • From ANON - Ca Cohel on May 23, 2012
    Aww. I loved this chapter. Thank you do much for updating - it feels like its been ages since the last time. I do hope it doesn't take as long to get the next one out.
    Braiden is just adorable. Now that you've given him Blaise's eyes can't you give him Harry's hair? I would love to see all the scenes where - especially Draco - will curse that mopp of hair. It would drive him mad ^^
    It's really cute how you introduce Max's family and I would love to hear more about them. And I love that Myron seemed to have loosened up while chasing his son around. That was hilarious. And Alexander is such a nice man too. He really seems to adore Harry - like everyone else of course.
    But please - don't let Harry become like those other overprotective submissives. It would feel so wrong if that happened. I mean, Harry may not always be the most logical one out there but he even said that it's more like a prison (or however he put it) for the chicks to be treated like that. Please don't let him become like that. It would hurt so much to read. Fine of it's just for a chapter or two - but he has to snap out of it. Please *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From Jan on May 23, 2012
    So happy your back and updating ^_^ I absolutely love this story, and have since it started ^_~
    LOL, I'm wishing it many more birthdays if the future as well... or sequels, which ever I'm not picky ^_^

    Please update chapter 46 soon :D
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  • From PeriLover on May 23, 2012
    As usual, another wonderful chapter! Your characters are so well thought out. I have no writing talent at all, but do love a good story! Thank you for all the hard work you do, it is appreciated!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on May 22, 2012
    YAY! A new chapter! I was so excited to see this!!!! Ok, so Harry is now going to go just as crazy as all of the other mothers are about their children? Hmmm... I hope not = ) I loved Alexander and how he seems to be doting on Harry. Lol Harry needs all he that he can get! = ) I loved the newest chapter and I'm sorry that you've been so stressed due to fanfiction.net and all. I hope you don't have to go through all of that again any time soon! = ) I can't wait to see/read the rest of Alexander's birthday party and Harry's (maybe) better realization of the fact that Braiden will be ok with the old biddies = )
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