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From 07dyso02s on March 12, 2012
oh please write more soon. even is it just a quick chapter to tell us how harry teases his mates. i must know. i think he should wank himself off in the bathroom while his mates are standing outside and can't join in or may be in the living room in plain view. deffo need to know what he is going to do with the skirt.
xxx
please one more chapter today.
i'll love you forever.(lol).xx
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From ANON - mistalis on March 12, 2012
I loved this part it made me laugh all the way though, Go harry for taking away some of that evil womans hair.
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From Kuragari75 on March 12, 2012
Glad to see an update and very happy to hear things are getting a little better! lovely chapter! been waiting for what's-her-bitch to get taken down a peg. XD Can't wait to see what diabolical plan Harry has cooked up!
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From Leania07 on March 11, 2012
I'm glad Harry put that brat in her place. Really, insulting his family and NOT expecting to be attacked. Arrogant too if Harry could get her child from her so easily. Phew, what a stressful day! I absolutely loved the hinted deviousness that Harry has planned, oh I can't wait to read it! ^.^
I await the next!

Leania
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From phoenixmalfoy on March 11, 2012
I really do wish that Amelle would have suffered more damage, but with all those big, strong Drackens pulling them apart, sadly, it couldn't happen. I was hoping for Harry to get some sex at the end as well, but with that ending, you have me begging you for more, just to see the torture the mates suffer!!
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From ANON - Chrissy on March 11, 2012
Oh boy.

Nasta, Max, Blaise, and Draco are in for a world of lust. You go harry! I say that ginny should of sent him a stripper pole. Hey...Harry on a stripper pole stripping for the guys? Hot imagery for me. Bahaha!

On a side note. I'm glad you and your family are feeling better and I hope you keep getting better.
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From ladilyndi on March 11, 2012
Another great chapter. I really like how your, er, Harry's mind works (Ginny's too). LOL The relationship between Harry and Nasta is just so special. I do wonder though, now that Harry has openly defied his dominants, if the type of punishments would change? Or, does the fact that he did ignore them that it is considered that he believed himself to be right and there will be no punishment? I've wondered how Draco could punish Harry in public given that his cannot be done subtly though I did notice in another chapter that he squeezed Harry's thigh. So far the punishments seem to be immediately but, in a case like this chapter when that may be impossible due to injury, would Harry get another punishment such as grounding?

I wonder this given Caesar taking Amelle away to assert his dominance. I did like Alayla's comment of what Harry should do to Amelle. As usual, a very satisfying chapter. Thank you so much for writing it.
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From bloodshound on March 11, 2012
Yay! Pheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew! Stamps and whistles in the back ground, waving a Harry flag. About time someone laid a smack down on that uppity bitch. How someone as nice as max's bro ended up with such a cow I'll never know.
Come to think of it, if anyone was defective it's her. har at least produced a dracon... even if she didn't know that.
I'm glad that har wouldn't let them push him on the remi point and i hope sometime that rem finds someone and has kids of his own. He'd be an epic dad. Har had a point indeed, turn about is fair play and they should trust him. Goodness but har did a lot of fighting this chappie. ^^
I'm glad grandmama finally got to hold her granddaughter.
I can't wait to see what har gets up to with that toy box.

Believe me, i can relate to the good days and bad days bit. on a good day, i can walk with out needing a cane or crutches or anything. on a bad day, i'm almost confined to bed for the effort it takes to get around. Not quite the same I know, but the idea is similar. I can only hope your good days start to outnumber the bad. Grief is hard, so take as long as you need and we'll be happy with what chappies you can bring yourself to write.
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From roosickle on March 11, 2012
GO HARRY!!!you beat down on that submissive bitch !!!!!!!!!!!!woooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhooooooooooooooooo , love the chapter and can't wait to see what the others do about the skirt ( wink wink)
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From ANON - Syreen on March 09, 2012
I'm very sorry to hear about your aunt. Unfortunately everyone has to experience this kind of pain in their lifes but it still wouldn't make it easier :(

I don't remember if I reviewed this story before, but I would like to say now that it's one of my favourites. I started to re-read the whole story again I'm at chapter 'A very secret society'. I hope you don't mind me talking about older chapters, but there are a few things that I just noticed and I can't leave them without comment.

The first one is about Hermione. People didn’t like her because she ignored Harry and they were all over the fact that it was because of her relationship with Ron. In my opinion it doesn’t matter why she did it, she were just doing it and it was the mistake she made nothing else. You see as Max has said it: „She treated you like dirt, she ignored you and hurt you, chose her little boyfriend over you” He is right of course, I just have a problem with the last part. Choosing Ron over Harry… well, she is/was in love with Ron of course she would choose him. Her mistake wasn’t this but that she throw away the friendship which she could easily kept.

As I write this and trying to explain my thoughts it seems even to myself that I'm running in circles but I hope you understand what I'm trying to say. Let's assume that Ron wasn't the prick he is in this story and they are still friends with Harry. We know how he would have reacted about the news about Harry being together with Blaise and Draco, but let's say it, we know what Harry have said too: "Ron, I love both of them, I'm sorry if you can't accept that but I won't leave them" You know he would have said that and not just because they are mates but because he loves them. So, Harry would have chosen his boyfriends over their friendship too (or so I think).

I know it’s hard in fics to somehow explain why Lucius Malfoy isn’t in prison and I think that Ministry thing was a good idea. Of course everyone would kill to protect their family but still they would be called to account for those lifes. OR they should be, you see, it’s not really a consolation for the orphans whose parents Lucius has to killed off, that he did it for his family…

And lastly about Ron… I would like to hit him too but it was a little too much that he was the only one that got punishment after Harry beat him up. He shouldn’t have said those things but think about it: if you would have a friend who is 16 and is living together with a 37 years old man what would you think? Of course you don’t know that your friend is a Dracken and that their relationship is much more about then simply teenager love. I think a lot of us would come to the same conclusion like Ron (but of course we know it's not any of our business so we wouldn't say anything unless asked). It would have been fair if Harry got punisment too, things can’t happen always in his favor.

I think I wrote too much, sorry about that. English is not my native language it's really hard to translate my thoughts from my own language but I hope a was comprehensible. I really love this fic and the characters (and I hope there will be a hot scene between Max and Draco :P ).

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From loveremus on March 08, 2012
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From ANON - Kat on March 08, 2012
I'm so sorry to hear of your Aunt's passing, I wish you and your family well. As for this chapter I liked it, yes it was short but that's understandable and it's okies. Hope everything goes well -hugs- :)
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From Jan on March 07, 2012
I am so sorry for your loss, I hope that with time and love from family and friends both your Uncle and your family can find comfort and peace with your aunt's passing.

I hope all your readers agree with me when I say, don't worry about the story, it's the least important thing you should be worrying about, be there for your family first. We will always be here waiting for you, so no rush.
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From ANON - mistalis on March 04, 2012
the sorry and the joy,
the seeds sown as a child,
the pain instilled,
now come the time to relearn,
start anew,
a child you hold,
lovers bound to you,
restart,
relive,
relearn,
for in this life,
love shall always be ours to yern.
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From ANON - sara on March 04, 2012
I love your story, and defenatly understand the need to grive. Take all the time you need, I'll continue reading this story no matter how long it takes to update.
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