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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From BloodTear on February 05, 2012
    Great chapter! I love the fact that Max was worried because they had cooked breakfast on the counter they had sex on! That was fantastically funny! Great job!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 05, 2012
    Amazing chapter!!! I love the baby name.
    Great job!
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  • From ANON - Rachel on February 05, 2012
    This story is fantastic! I check AFF all the time to see if you've updated. I read other stories, but I'm really just waiting for more of this one! Absolutely love it. I'd love if you could recommend some of the fics that you enjoy or ones that give you inspiration for this story!
    I love seeing Harry with four other mates taking care of him. Seeing them helping him overcome the abuse and lack of self worth is great. I also enjoy seeing them dominating him (-; My favorite lemon so far was where Harry convinced Nasta to take him before the heat and Nasta was so dominant and controlling. I'd love to see more of that. I would love to see more of the domination and control aspects in their sex lives. Maybe a little something from Ginny's box of toys! I think a bondage scene with Max and Nasta dominating Harry would be crazy hot and believable since they are both very dominant and mature enough to use bondage safely without hurting Harry. But, lemons or not, I love reading your story! Thank you so much for all the time and effort you put into this! I hope it's as rewarding for you as it is enjoyable for me to read it!
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  • From bloodshound on February 05, 2012
    ty for the explanation and also for your up dating efforts. we do appreciate them, swear! well, i do any way. >>
    btw, what's a cwtch? is it like a type of cuddle? you used it twice so i'm hoping it';s not just a typo and i'm making a fool of myself.
    i hope luc and cissa get a bit more mentally flexible, enough to accept their son's new family cause draco really does miss em much.
    heh, har always wanted family, not he's part of several. ^^

    btw, do you mind if i borrow this particular dracon set up (the world it's set in anyway) to host one of my fics? I had an idea but i don't want to run with it until i got permission, cause it's not just the dracon idea i want to borrow, it's YOUR particular dracon set up.
    anyway my email is ckestra@hotmail.com if you want to discuss it more.
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  • From helga1967 on February 05, 2012
    Excellent The development is appropriate and all the chapter more than hot is cosy. Beautiful welcome back to Harry of a real family
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  • From ANON - Nicola on February 05, 2012
    WOW!!!! I loved it!!!!!!! CAN NOT wait for the next one! lol
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  • From roosickle on February 05, 2012
    I thought I was going to get my daisy chain there for a minute LOL, great chapter,loveit once again and the nameis perfect : )
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  • From ANON - loveremus on February 04, 2012
    Oohh, I love, love, love this story. I found it a few days ago and had to force myself to stop reading to do some real life. I can
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  • From ANON - Jazz on February 01, 2012
    I can't, for the life of me, figure out what that stuff that spilled over Harry and the baby was. :( i feel like it was the thing responcible for why the baby was so swollen when he was born.
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  • From ANON - Sanity on January 31, 2012
    OMG! Okay so I'm super obsessed with you awesome story!!! Love it to peices!
    I was wondering why don't Draco and Blaise interact with Nas and Max more? I mean it sort of seems like they aren't as bonded with the two older males a Harry. I love your story and I don't mean anything bad, I was just wondering. Draco does seem more confident aroud them but he still seems sort of- distant?
    Oh I loved how you gave each submissive a different type of talon. That's so kewl! You wrote this so amazingly! Oh and since everyone knows about what Harry is will Ron find out? I'm worried about that! Oh its a scary thought! I'm excited about the baby's name!
    Oh and Lupin! I'm excited about that to!
    Please, please, please update soon you amazing amazing person you!!!

    *hugs tightly with the intension of never letting go!*
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 31, 2012
    I am so excited to see how well you are doing the character development. Its going at a great pace and is very realistic. I hope to see another chapter soon as I can't wait to see what the men say about Harry's Dracken feelings towards grandma, and the baby name. I hope the baby name is not named after Harry's Dad and friends and who's last name will the baby have. They all have important family's and the issues is bounded to happen again with the other males. ^^
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  • From ANON - ArtemisEarth on January 30, 2012
    That was a HOT Lemon! I really enjoyed it. Especially Draco sitting there being all smug. Very nice.

    Aww. The baby sounds so cute. I'm glad Harry trusted her enough to hold his baby. That was so sad when she couldn't even see her Granddaughter.

    I wonder what Harry will name the baby. I kinda want it to be Sirius or at least the middle name to be Sirius.

    Thank you for sharing this with us. I can't wait for the next one.
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  • From xLilMissPerfectx on January 29, 2012
    Oh wow! Ok so this is the first time im reviewing this story even though ive been following this story from the beginning. This is my favorite chapter so far, I loved the birthing too I thought it was so interesting. And I was surprised that the baby was Blaise's only because at first I thought it was Max's just because I read that he had blue eyes. Although it does make sense that Blaise would be he father of harry's first hold since he was Harry's first mate. Oh and I laughed so hard I cried when Draco almost caused max to birth a kiitten when he said he took Blaise on Max's precious kitchen counters. I have never laughed hat hard! Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on January 29, 2012
    Cute chapter...I was wondering why Harrys mates were not more sexually active though? I mean both Nasta and Max hadn't had sex in a month and Draco...well at the beginning of the chap when he was turned on by teh laugh he said a month and then later on he said he had sex a week ago with Blaise so not sure on that one but still...a week! Its a bit unrealistic( if one can use that word)for a teenage boy to go a week not to mention a month(!!) without sex when it is so clearly available. Its always been my impression that Teenage boys have the kind of hormones that can let them have sex 6 times a day and still get horny a 7th time. And even men in their mid thirtys have sex more then once a month when they are in a relationship! Why are they so unsexual??? Does it have something to do with teh baby??
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  • From themaidenlyra on January 29, 2012
    Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I have been reading this story sence you first started it and it is one of my fav's. I lost internet for three months and I was so afraid that when I came back it would be to find out that you abandond it. So once again thank you.


    All my love The Maiden Lyra
    maiden6of6the6dark@yahoo.com
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