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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From phoenixmalfoy on January 05, 2012
    This chapter was great. Maybe the Weasley's and Hermione now could help Harry during his disapperances when he goes on heat to be 'sick'. I think the father of the baby should be Draco. He is likly hiding underlying doubts about his mates love towards him even after his birthday due to the fact that his mating heat was also Max's mating heat because of Harry's Dracken rejecting him. It would also please his parents, pleasing him more.
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  • From ANON - Tig on January 05, 2012
    I love this story. I can't wait for your next update.
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  • From Pennfold on January 01, 2012
    Spent the whole night reading what you have so far and am deeply looking forward to seeing where this story goes in future. Made an account so I could actually gush over this story. ^.^
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on January 01, 2012
    i love the last chapter and can not wait for the next one . and i love the other story that u have up on line too and i have been reading the other stroy that u have and just love them and i can not wait to read more for u . so good luck on the next chapter .
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  • From djaddict on December 31, 2011
    "nothing brought on the start of a labour quicker than a surprise party, except perhaps a vindaloo curry."

    ROTFLMAO!!! Loved this line!!!

    I love this series so much. Each and every update is such a treat.

    Could Harry possibly be pregnant with twins? Just seems like the thing that would happen to him. Ya know - surprise!baby lol


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  • From katsumichiyuki on December 31, 2011
    If I said this story didn't alter my life I'd be lying. I go around categorizing people. I've made lists of threesomes and foursomes of my friends and the people they like, who would be top dominant and submissive and fertility based on their parents' fertility. Earlier I explained to mi amiga that she would probably would've turned out as a dominant female and she looked at me as if I had gone mad. I began reading this about 3 days ago and since I don't have much time to read during the day, I spent my time from 12 to 5 or 6 morning time reading this. I'm very much awaiting your next instalment darling, good luck. I'm going to busy myself with rereading it over so I catch anything I may have missed and also to pass the time until your next update. Please don't stress yourself out with writing, I understand the feeling of caring what your readers think, but priorities also come first. Sleep should be the first thing on your list if not eating. If you need three or four months to recooperate then so be it, I don't know about anyone else but I don't mind waiting that long. Stay healthy and keep working hard!
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  • From ANON - ArtemisEarth on December 30, 2011
    I am quite enjoying your story. I find it very intriguing. I find myself waiting on the edge of my seat for the next installment. I would like to thank you for taking the time to post this online for others to enjoy too. So thank you. :) But I do have a question about the story for you. I was hoping it would be answered in the newest chapter but I found that it wasn't. So here it is...

    So Harry was outside at his nest and then he came inside. His feet were dirty, correct? So he had gone upstairs and washed them before he had vomited and passed out. So here is my question. Wouldn't he have left a trail of dirty foot prints leading from outside to the bathroom? Wouldn't his mates find it and want to know why he was outside? They didn't know that he was building a nest yet, so why wouldn't they wonder why? Especially if he dropped his core temperature by being outside?

    Sorry for the long question. It was just bugging me. I hope you had a great Christmas and have a wonderful New Year.

    Once again thank you for writing your story. Have a pleasent day.
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  • From ANON - heartstar on December 30, 2011
    rry has really hurt his wing huh? When will they notice
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2011
    I'm sorry I missed the previous chapter. I love what Harry's doing in regards to nesting. I hope he apologizes later for getting the others in trouble, since he didn't mean to. Can't wait to see what happens next. Will Harry be in the nest on his birthday or will the party go on as planned? I'm so excited.
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  • From ANON - LadyDeath39 on December 30, 2011
    I hope Harry doesn't go into early labour or that his mates find his nest, but on the bright side doesn't matter what you write we will more then likely love it. Looking forward to more action in the New Year, hope you have a good one =)
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  • From zotkwikola on December 29, 2011
    yay, updates are nice. I'll go read "the scaled bits" now. Ps. Belgium is not that wonderful. If i could i would move somewhare warm. Like calefornia.
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  • From JaceBeleren on December 29, 2011
    Harry's mates were already walking on eggshells with Harry's past; now with Harry's nest in the picture they will have to be extra careful. I can't wait to see what Blaise, Draco, Max, Nasta and the rest of Harry's friends have planned for his party.
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  • From TibbytheWitchy on December 29, 2011
    You keep mentioning/putting together Harry with Nasta and Max, less and less with Blaise and Draco, with four mates you really have to be careful that you don't forget how important each one is, I'd love to see more one on one between Harry and his first two mates, after all the trials they went through with their mating... Other than that everything is going great! Can't wait to meet the baby and find out who's the Daddy! Well the other Daddy anyways XD
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  • From PandaGaara on December 29, 2011
    I absolutely LOVE this story. I get excited when I see any story with the words "The Rise...". Though I do have one question! Will Harry automatically know the father of his chicks when he gives birth or will they have to do a paternity a test? Anyway hope you enjoyed your holidays and have a happy new year!
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  • From Leania07 on December 29, 2011
    I love this story!! I have to agree, I've found a lot of really good stories that have been left hanging for a long time and it is frustrating (and a bit disappointing). I hope the guys will be able to keep their curiosity in check, what would happen if someone else (like from Max's family) caught sight of Harry nesting? I await your next chapter!
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