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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - SilverLion on December 08, 2011
    What if Drackens foraged for nesting material, instead of taking whatever was nearby? Kinda like birds (especially bower birds). Those posters or that horrid orange bedspread of Ron's could still be nesting materials (though the bedspread might cause nightmares due to the color alone).

    I'd like to see Henley again (he was that really adorable baby-dom, right?). Maybe for Harry's next birthday he could visit? Henley = kawaii!

    Just a reminder to Max, Nasta, Draco and Blaise (once the last two hear about the Jerkleys): Vernon, Petunia, Dudley, and Marge (I include her because she's such a bitch) will not be good to eat. Neither is Umbitch, for that matter. Ptomaine is no fun guys (and that's from the horse's mouth).
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  • From SilentInvictus on December 08, 2011
    Wow! I feel like I won a lottery or something! :D 1000! Congrats! This chapter was well done, even if it was shorter than most. I liked how reluctant Harry was to speak about his trauma, because it reflects how real child abuse victims are.

    I also liked the Nasta and Maz scene at the end.. so sweet! :D

    Ciao!
    SI
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  • From ANON - karen on December 08, 2011
    i like your story u have a author who wrote under your last story andrea redwolf i think it was can u send me a link to her page or have her e-mail me her page please thank you
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  • From Dxinsider on December 08, 2011
    I cant wait for Draco and Blaris to get in on this heehee GREAT JOB!
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  • From ANON - Ellen on December 08, 2011
    I love this story so much! I think you handled the dursley part so well, and it's really cute how Nasta comforted Max!
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  • From ANON - heartstar on December 08, 2011
    Oh wow I liked how you had the mates react. I also like the idea for the out take stories *s* I hope you have a wonderful christmas.
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  • From ANON - baka_onna2003 on December 08, 2011
    Hello again. Once again, loved this chapter (then again, I'm in love with this story, so I may be a bit biased). I think that the shortness of this chapter was very good. It takes time as readers to digest horrible things like what happened to Harry, even though we already know some of what the author is going to write about. A deleted scenes story? Me gusta.

    Happy Writings (and quick updates!),
    baka_onna2003
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  • From ANON - lil devil on December 08, 2011
    ALL of the adults knew about Harry's home life not just Molly. Remus, Sereves, Sirus, Dumbledore, Authur, and Im pretty sure even Hermonie knew (why you said other wise idk)
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  • From ANON - Princesskay1128 on December 08, 2011
    LOVE IT!! As always!! :) I really hope you end up doing something like Snape using oculmency (I have NO clue how to spell that) or Dumbledore giving the boys his pensive that way the baby doesn't get stressed out and the boys still find out how it REALLY was for Harry, not just second hand.
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  • From bloodshound on December 08, 2011
    rather than cut bits, think of them as extra's. I think its an awesome idea.
    I can under stand the elder mates worry but i believe har has a point. Now is NOT the time. he's held it together well to this point, let it lie a bit longer until his baby is birthed.
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  • From ANON - Jazz on December 08, 2011
    I feel like it would be easier if Harry put all his childhood memories into a pensive and let his domanents look into it that way he won't have to talk about it and max, nasta, blaise, and draco will be informed. *sigh*
    anyway, thanks for posting the chapter no matter how short or long it is and i think the seperate "cut scenes" idea is fantastic, but i worry because you said something about having to wait till after christmas. :( do you mean for the "cut scenes" thing or the next chapter? cause if i have to wait till after christams for the next chapter i think i'll cry.
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  • From ANON - Kawaiiyashie on December 08, 2011
    Wonderful chapter cant wait for the next one. You should just name it rise of the drackens the story behind the sceens or out takes either way i will be reading it!
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  • From ANON - Night on December 07, 2011
    Love it!!! More. More. :D
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  • From hellangelhellina on December 07, 2011
    I loved the story. I am so glad the turth will be reviled so that miss understandings can be avoided. I can't wait to see what they do when the learn his past.
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  • From djaddict on December 06, 2011
    Happy Day!! New chapter!!!!

    So glad to see that the 'boys' are getting the real picture about what Harry's life with the Dursleys was like. Hope there is retribution in the future!!

    Your Harry is just so sweet.

    Enjoying so much!
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