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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Zel on November 15, 2011
    This is interesting so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - heartstar on November 14, 2011
    I know what you mean I didn't work as long as a shifts that you dii but at the holiday in Walmart when I worked there andthe 99 cents stores aat any holiday it felt like it was gettting longer and longer....the toy and holiday department were always the worst to fix and refix throuout the day....*S* hang in there!
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  • From ANON - mistalis on November 14, 2011
    With everything going on once the guys learn of what harry has gone though, and what they might put him though I think Nasta should offer the dursleys up as dragon snacks.
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  • From ANON - baka_onna2003 on November 12, 2011
    This was a wonderful chapter. I like that the situations you create are the product of a gradual build up and not HERE-IT-IS-ALL-AT-ONCE!!! type of writing. It makes for a believeable read, a realistic story. Well, as realistic as magic and Drackens and male pregnancy can be, anyways. :) Did you base the Drackens off of any folklore or myths? If so, I would love to read them. The more I learn about them through your story the more I like them. They seem like sensible creatures. I hope work eases up on you. I know from experience that night shifts are some of the worst inventions ever. Do you know if the next chapter will be out before Christmas?

    Happy Writings,
    baka_onna2003
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  • From djaddict on November 12, 2011
    Is Harry going to come clean soon about his relatives? I hurt so much for him!!

    Really enjoying this very much!
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  • From ANON - Magi Silverwolf on November 12, 2011
    I've been reading since close to the beginning, but had trouble finding the time for a review. Don't really have time now--should really be doing work for my site--but figured I owe you at least a few words of encouragement. Working for so long straight, even almost straight, can make you barmy as I very well know from having to go through it periodically at my work.

    I really love how you took the idea and really made it your own. I do hope the issue with R.A.B. will start to make sense soon, but the mystery is very interesting. Did he die the same way as the books, I find myself wondering, or did Dracken hunters get him? And if they did, could Reg and Sev's child still be alive, but in immenient danger? Were they patient enough for that even? The idea nags at me like a sore tooth, but I guess I will just have to wait and see. ;]

    I can't wait to see how Harry's mates react to the Dursleys. The big question is, I feel, has Harry ever told anyone about it? His kith may only have the barest of clues (too small, bars on the window, casual references to "not getting on"). Harry never seemed to realize just how bad it truly was. Vernon triggered Lily's protection the summer before 5th year, for the sake of tomatoes! The fallout is going to be huge when the truth comes out. My money is on Ginny getting there first. ^^

    Oh, and speaking of Weasleys, don't feel bad about making Ron t. Jealous Idiot the bad guy. Ron always did need to pull his head out of his arse. Personally, I think it might have been penis envy that was the true source of all his anger issues. Soooo very glad that Hermione grew a pair and saw the light. Can I have a Praise Be to Insert?

    I like how Harry's mate all seem well placed in Dracken society, except for the one that is usually well placed in the Insert Creature Here society. I am really enjoying that little turnabout.

    Well, I've better end this before I babble for too long. Rest well and happy writing to you.

    ~M.A. Silverwolf
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  • From ANON - Marie on November 11, 2011
    It's a great story. I can hardly wait for the next time that you update. This is by fair one of my favorite stories of all-times for HP.

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  • From ANON - Lotus Strike on November 11, 2011
    I absolutely love this story. I can't wait for more chapters. And I can't wait to see when Draco bottoms.
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  • From justpucky on November 10, 2011
    I love this story. You said that Harry's mates find out about his family soon. Do we have to wait until after the baby is born for More information on Regulus' disappearance? Does Kreature have any insight like he did in cannon? Has harry thought to ask the Black house-elf about him?
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  • From ANON - heartstar on November 10, 2011
    OH Poor Harry I thought he had told at least some of it to blaise I guess not hmm More please whne you can I would love to see how his mates reate to it! Wow I am surprises nothing has shown yet..... *S*
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 09, 2011
    Great chapter! Once they find out, Harry's mates will probably want vengeance against the Dursleys, right?

    Also, take care of yourself! You're working such long hours with little to no break in between. It's ok if you don't update this story - your health and sanity is way more important!
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  • From ANON - Jedi Wish on November 09, 2011
    I love this story! I am always checking it for updates, and I have a tendancy to reread the entire story when new chapters are posted. I am sorry that you work life has been so crazy. I remember when my life was like that. Hope it gets better soon. I saw your comment about how Ron doesn't have a place in this story except as a jackass; I saw a news article where Rowling said that she almost killed off Ron in the middle of a series because she didn't like him; I don't think he was ever meant to be a good best friend. Good Writing!
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  • From ANON - cammie on November 09, 2011
    thank you so much for updating on your day off!! it made my day after having a crappy start to my week! i did have a silly question though. will blaise and draco continue to get taller or did they reach their full height when they came into their inheritance?
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  • From ANON - avril27 on November 09, 2011
    Thanks for the story update love this story. I work the graveyard shift so I know the feeling the Christmas is always the busies time of the for us. Get some rest and enjoy that day off.
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  • From FaerysWing on November 09, 2011
    Harry's baby isn't going to be hurt too much by being born early is it? The gestation period for the baby had already been shortened by two months, won't a premature birth be hurtful on the health of the baby?
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