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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre

From ANON - Karma2ualwayz on October 12, 2011
Where do i start? Just....~sighz like the fan girl i am~ this story is so good, im actually breaking my rule and keeping up with it. Normally WIP's get on my nerves cause the author updates all crazy like and i can't keep up. but you do it just right! it gives me enough time to let my imgination wonder and guess what your going to do next, and let me tell you i've been right in my guessing about two times. lol which is so good! This keeps me on my toes, i love it! I tried reviewing once...i think chapter 24 (where you left us at the cliffhanger) but it didnt go through. So sad, i had all these questions, but now all i have are comments....whichi think can still be put in question form. lol
~I love how your bringing the families into the story now, i actually think draco and blaise's family will take it....eh maybe semi well but id love a little senerio for Max and Nasta's families. I don't know why but im thinking all the families just pop in on the same day.....while harrys in heat, just to make things extra awkward.lol even mrs weasly might show up on that day to pimp smack her son for being such a prick and just has to see harry to see hows he doing....
~Hermiones finally coming around ,yay for mione, i wonder if she's just sticking with ron because he's abusing her? and/or she feels that she has to stay with him because he's her first wizard boyfriend with a family that loves her and accepts her muggle backround and she doesnt want to lose that? mmm just spitballing that
~And finally! *Gushes* just keep up the mushy lovey crazy random goodness! XD!!
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From clairevictoria on October 10, 2011
I love it when you update, it makes my day. But I do understand that writing takes time. I know myself that I have people yelling at me to publish another chapter, but I wouldn't be happy publishing something I wasn't completely satisfied with, so just ignore all the others and write when you want. I love this story, and Life and Trials, and when there is a new chapter, I practically want to scream for joy. ( I don't, because my neighbours already thinbk I'm crazy enough) When i've finished with the new chapter, I go back and read all my fave bits in all the other chapters. I love how sweet and caring all Harry's mates are, and, might I add, HOTTTT!!! I love Henley, please tell me he'll crop up again? Harry needs all the love he can get, lol. I adore how Harry keeps all his mates in line, it makes me lol when he wrangles them all. And I really want something good to come for Snape, he just makes me want to cry. I know you've said it won't happen, but I really want for Regulus to somehow be alive and for Severus to have a chick out there somewhere. I know it won't happen, but I can't help but want it. Severus needs the love! I adore your writing style. I don't read threesomes/moresomes usually, but this one really pulled me in and refused to let go. Please continue writing, I will be here, being patient and fantasising about being a submissive Draken with Henley as my dominant. Oh, that's another thing I want to see, Henley with his own submissive. By the way, I think I'm just missing it or something, but can I please have a detailed description of Henley, so I can have a clearer mental picture? It's probably already in there somewhere and I'm missing it, but I'm having a little trouble picturing him. Thank you. (PS, sorry for the longness of the review, I had alot to say)
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From Draconis2803 on October 10, 2011
I have so loved this story so far, please tell me this is going to continue?? :D
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From ANON - lisha711 on October 10, 2011
I don't care how long it takes to update your story. I will happily wait the time it takes because your story is intriguing, has plot, and actually follows a timeline. I'm sure other stories have that as well, but when you take the extra time to actually think about what your writing it comes across as even better.

That being said, I love your story and will faithfully check each day to see if you have updated even if you haven't. There's nothing like going back to certain chapters and rereading them to get acquainted with them again. Keep up the awesome work, and don't get burned out ^.~
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From ANON - jingko on October 09, 2011
dont worry about people and their "why have you updated" stuff. life happens and you can't help that or needing time off. go biking and take picture! i'm told Wales is pretty-(isk i've been to Japan and China those are pretty areas) but if it's anything like on 'Midsommer Murders' then must be pretty to live ><
at any rate, besides the Malfoys, are we going to 'meet' the other mom? i hope that she like harry _-_
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From ANON - tiatan101 on October 09, 2011
I love this story, I can't get enough! I'll look back in a bit for more updates! Don't let pesky readers get you down either, cause it's your story, you damn well can update it whenever the hell you want, and they can just get over themselves!@! Anyways I wanted to kill Ron in this chapter, he's such an ass, like really who hits a pregnant person? I'm loving the continued dynamic between the mates too, I wonder how Nasta is gonna deal with the prolonged heat, I hope nothing really bad happens cause that'd be... I don't even want to think about it!
Keep up the amazing work, and flip them pesky nogood whiners the bird for good measure!
-Andrew-
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From ANON - Hazel on October 09, 2011
You had me scarred there for a minute, when I first started reading this chap. You had me convinced that harry had lost the baby, until you went on to describe his dead mates. Then I was like, "Oh, he is having a nightmare" then everything was ok.
4 days to update, that's pretty good, I know how hard it is to update, work a full time job, and keep your readers interest; it take a lot of work. Well done.
I still wait with bated breath, and check on regular bases for your updates, and am always so excited when there is one.
Keep your spirits high, and your muse well fed. (or is that you bunnies well fed? And your muse happy?)
Ps. I know how you feel about the cold. I live in northern Italy, and the temp is pretty brisk at the moment. I just got back from my deployment in the dessert where the temp was 120+ back to Italy were a warm day is maybe 60
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From ANON - howlowl on October 09, 2011
You're an amazing writer and I love this story. You have me checking in everyday to see if there's an update. Kepp up with the good work, and I'm willing to wait.
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From ANON - Shay Khardeen on October 09, 2011
That was wonderful! I'm so glad that Hermione is back to being her old self. And your chapters are always well worth the measly few days we have to wait! Don't let pushy readers pressure you into updating sooner than you want. As a fellow author I know how much you want to please your fans, but you shouldn't give up your life for them! You need to take some time for YOU or you will surely go mad! So... Take all the time you need for your updates. I, for one, will still be here, anxiously awaiting each and every chapter even if you tak FIVE years.

Your Devoted (and slightly concerned) Fan,
Shay Khardeen

P.S. Please don't take five years. :)
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From ANON - Jazz on October 09, 2011
Ignore douchbags who think four days is too long. I really appriciate(sp?) your dedication to this story and it's readers. I for one am always extatic when you update that quick but i've learned to stop asking about the next one because you do a pretty awesome frickin job getting these chapters out and i just want you to know that atleast one of your readers acknowledges your reasons for when and how often you post chapters and regardless LOVE your story.
I await the next one, whenever your ready (and don't forget to get some sleep girl, i hear its good for you lol)
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From ANON - Shadowwolf03 on October 08, 2011
Should have let them snap Ron's neck... no great loss. You had me going thinking the baby/chick was lost. Great writing and suspense. I'm also looking forward to Lucius and Blaize's mom meeting their son's mates for the first time.
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From SkittlesPirate on October 08, 2011
I'm so bad, not reviewing your amazing work until now, and it is an amazing story. Max and Nasta are probably the BEST original characters I've ever encountered; I'd actually love to see them in a story of their own, but that's just wishful thinking on my part.
The only real criticism that I have is some very MINOR grammatical errors, which I blame on you working your butt off in what little free time you have to write another great chapter. Please don't listen to those people who complain about the four day wait. That is no time at all and if they have a problem, let them try writing a story and keep any kind of strict schedule!
Have watched a number of friends and family around me miscarry, I can say that Harry and his mates' reactions to the thought of losing their baby was very real to me. Starting off with Harry's dream was great and I was upset to think that he'd lost the baby. I'm glad he didn't.
Please get some rest and enjoy your free time; waiting to read the next chapter won't kill any of us, but pushing yourself so hard could certainly be detrimental.
Incidentally, I don't know how anyone can survive in temperatures bellow 60 degrees fahrenheit. But then I'm pretty sure I'm half reptile, or at least was one in a previous life. BOO snow!
Take care!
-SkiPi
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From ANON - freyja on October 08, 2011
I've been religiously following our story since you posted chapter 6,thats when i found it, i now hate ronald slightly more than i did before please kill him in a slow painful way.

Maybe Blaises mother could find out what happened and do it for them? Just a thought
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From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2011
Ah, some people will always be ungrateful. I think you're doing a great job! Just update when you have the time and ignore what everyone else is saying. Keep up the great work!
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From Recordkeeper on October 08, 2011
I actually didn't expect you to update that often. Every 4 days was more than I was expecting. Not that I'm not grateful I totally am. And I am also waiting for stories that haven't been updated in forever. The reason people complain is because they have no lives and sit there staring at their computer waiting for something new to read. I however have just picked up H.G. Wells "The Time Machine" and am loving it so far. So I will sit quietly for an update.

Thank you for not killing the baby. There is one author I can remember and every story of hers I read had at least one dead baby in it. Some more than one. It was awful. I also liked that you put Hermione back in the story. I honestly don't think she would have ignored Harry just to be in a relationship with Ron. She would have just hit Ron over the head. But it was such a small part of the story I didn't really care to mention it before. Hermione was devoted to Harry as much as Ron just for different reasons. But like I said, its not a big enough part of the story to matter.

As for the weather? I live in california. I cant stand the 100 degree weather. I pray for a gust of wind and sit by my Fan all summer. The blessed rain has come and gone but fortunately the colder weather stayed behind. Its FINALLY autumn!! ( how often does it rain where you live?)
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