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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre

From ANON - Annon. on October 08, 2011
I never leave reviews but your note at the end of the most recent chapter inspired me. Thank you for updating as often as you do. I will admit to anxiously waiting for a new chapter as soon as I finish the last but your writing is well worth the wait. It can be a pain to wait for a new chapter of a good story but the wait far outweighs the frequent small updates from mediocre stories. Keep up the good work and I am eagerly awaiting what happens next. On a slightly different note, I can't believe that we put up with the repeated heatwaves this summer (east coast US) either and that you might get snow already. We keep our sanity as we slowly melt on those long hot days by telling ourselves that we will miss the heat when we are in the throws of winter once again. And after last year with the Christmas blizzard that shut down all travel and multiple feet of snow, we await winter with a little more respect and fear. Thanks for the story!
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From ANON - Trivium Eden Bondrasi on October 08, 2011
I just wanted to let you know I've been reading this story from the beginning without reviewing. At first I thought this story would be crap or that you would get so far and stop updating however that's not what happened. I find myself enthralled by this story. Its wonderfully written and completely beautiful. Through the mating process I was so happy bc he became mated to the men o fell in love with myself. Especially Nasta. You have a spectacular creative imagination.
I want to thank you for updating this story at all. I can't imagine myself ever taking the sacrifices you do just to update this story and get it out there for your fans. Its more than I ever did when I wrote. I can say that even if you didn't update this for two years I would still check everyday on this story just as I do now. Its brilliant and you work so hard. I don't think humans understand what it takes to write something, go back and delete things, write more, then edit all in a matter of four days.
Please, take a break. And if you don't now ,pick a chapter goal and take a break. You deserve it and any human that dare say otherwise is selfish. Yes you may upset a few but I do believe your true fans will understand. However, if you don't take a break that too is your right and anyone who reads this is lucky you are that devoted.

T.E.B
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From ANON - blue on October 08, 2011
Lovely chapter! Take all the time you need to write a chapter, it is more than worth the wait!
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From ANON - Jaylynn on October 08, 2011
Lol 4 days is pretty fast for an update but I may think that since I too track many stories that hasn't had an update for years or months. So getting something in less then a week is always a nice surprise. Thanks for an update, and I can't wait for the meeting of parents.
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From ANON - Draconia Lesoto on October 08, 2011
Dearest Star,

Ignore the idiots who complain about when your going to update, they obviously have nothing better to do than bitch and moan. I appreciate that you even care to work as hard as you do so that we can have Updates in a timely manner (i really don't understand why people get mad after just 4 days, now two weeks i can understand, unless of course we have been forewarned that its going to be a while before the next update). You wouldn't believe how happy i was when you updated both this and The Life and Trials, i'd have been willing to give you a month off! The people who are complaining are most likely not aware of just how hard it can be to write on a normal basis, much less when your life is hectic! I hope they don't discourage you too much, just remember that for everyone of them their is someone like me who is willing to wait for the chapters because they're worth the wait!

Sincerly, Draconia
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From ANON - alice on October 08, 2011
Loving this fic! I'm dying to know the up and coming interaction between Draco & Nasta ^_^
Little "side" interactions like that in a fiction sometime excite me more than the major story (that said,these 2 characters are the pretty major!)
With regards to people telling you to update faster - you should just ignore those posts!
Some people can never be satisfied and only know how to whinge! This is you fic and you'll update it whenever you're ready!
^_^ Good luck with the writing and I look forward to me of your enjoyable chapters!

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From ANON - vittani on October 08, 2011
I am extremely thankful and impressed that you manage to update so quickly. I'm still working on the next chapter of my story and it's been two years, then again I am working on the old chapters too so maybe I have an excuse. But either way I am very envious that you write as quick as you do. And I love this story and am so glad that Harry hasn't lost the baby.
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From ladylizzy on October 08, 2011
YAY!!! An update, when's the next one? Just kidding, honestly it's amazing how much you write and I'm just grateful you share your talent with us. You should be pleased though that we love your story so much ;)
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From SilverLion on October 08, 2011
Consider it done! *carries out SLM's orders, then invites her and several others over for tea and biscuits during the torture* Aren't you just enjoying his screams? Especially the way they go beyond the vocal capabilities of the most skilled sopranos? *watches as the rope magically jerks Ron up and down like a yo-yo* Was it wicked of me?
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From ANON - Jen on October 08, 2011
Take as much time as you need to write and update. I like it that you take longer to update because I know each new chapter will be well thought out and a pretty decent length. Anyone who is complaining about how long it's taking you, can suck it. Just saying.
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From bloodshound on October 08, 2011
oi oi! do NOT rag on yourself! You're doing your best, neh? And I stand by my standard answer of to pushy reviewers. It's up to the WRITER to decide when we get up dates, NOT us. Considering they're writing around their real lives, we should (and I am) be bloody grateful for any and all up dates we get. Now. Not to the actual review. ^^
I'm glad Mio is finally growing a pair and pulling her head from her butt, but seriously, what the hell i Ron's damage. What a moron.
At any rate, this felt like a bit of a stock chappie. Important info was imparted, but nothing much really happened. Though the night mare scene was scarily realistic. The squabbling house elves were fun. What made Kreacher mellow out? Normally he couldn't give a toss over Har?
It's gonna be fun doing a meet the parents for all Har's mates. Down side of being a creature neh? All the in laws. ^^
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From Chrysania on October 08, 2011
I completely appreciate how fast you update. In fact, I wish that other authors would update as fast as you do. If anyone is giving you grief about it, they're holding you to impossible standards. That said, I'm really enjoying the story. I was rather hoping that Harry would get Arsenio, but Draco's already having some major issues with Nasta's age; I can't see him being anything but petulant with such a mature mate. I have to say that I can't wait for the parents to show up to meet Harry. Am I correct in thinking the Malfoys and Madame Zabini will be arriving the same day?

By the way, I was curious about the story you've been waiting 2 years for an update on. I'm just curious....
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From ashmounce on October 08, 2011
This is an amazing story! Ignore all those people complaining that you take to long, you can't rush perfection! Also, this is the kind of story that you don't mind waiting for the update! Also, I am one of those crazy people who live in the hot areas! I live in Texas and we had around 70 days over 100degrees! We even had a couple get up to 115, but felt more like 120. I love it though, great lake and swimming times, barbques, and the best part, margaritas! lol, it makes the summer worth it! Best part though is although it is October it has not dropped below 85degrees, except at night where it is the high 50s!
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From PandaGaara on October 08, 2011
Wow that was fast! And don't pay any attention to the people who want you to magically update with a wave of your wand. You're only one person so take as much time as you need (hell take a chocolate break if you need to) We've all waited longer than 4 days for some fics ro be updated so its not a big deal.

You scared me for split second at the start of the story. I hope Molly sends Ron the howler of a lifetime and that he gets expelled. Ahh well I guess I'll just have to wait and see!
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From ANON - heartstar on October 08, 2011
Oh do not scare me like that I loved this chapter the baby outfit sound lovely! Ron Should be expelled! he shouldn't have another chance!
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