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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

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From ANON - silver on July 05, 2011
I love your story. I hope Draco will learn fast not to mess with Harry. Submissive or not, he won't take orders from nobody. I love your OMCs, but I like Nasta. He's the strong, silent type.
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From ANON - mistalis on July 05, 2011
Loved how this went... I do have to wonder... with that failuar of a creature now dead... are they going to sell his scales and blood? It would be kinda fitting that the thing that wanted to hurt and sell their chicks would end up helping to pay for the nice life the galleons could give them.
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From ANON - thestralhorse on July 05, 2011
Awesome chapter, i love that everything is tense and everyone isn't suddenly just getting along! hmm if there is one more dominant i like Maximilius most but i wouldn't say no to all three being added either i like them all =)
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From bloodshound on July 05, 2011
Interesting. Are these flear ups going to happen often? If so, the Harry might want to look into finding a spell to toughen up or at least numb his rear. Go Harry, you stick up for yourself. I wonder how he'll make them let him keep his hair short.
Will they really sell those scales? Ah well, that brat may as well be of some use.
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From ANON - Nikte on July 05, 2011
Most confess that when they started torturing Dominic I kinda felt sorry for him, after all he is just a kid, and he had been drinking potions to supress his instincts, but Dracken or no Dracken, anyone who could risk a child to gain money, deserves to suffer horribly. I really like the fact that dispite everything, Blaise, Draco and Harry aren
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From ANON - Anna on July 05, 2011
I hated how abusive Draco was in this chapter. I realize that you established the dominant-will-punish-submissives-when-they-disobey system at the beginning of the story, but I thought it was more like how Blaise used his power over Harry. While Blaise only punished Harry when he thinks Harry`s refusing to take care of himself (like with the clothes), Draco seems to punish Harry to sooth his own ego. I found the fact that Draco kept on hitting Harry even after he begged him to stop especially revolting. That`s not a healthy relationship, and I don`t understand why Harry won`t do something like sending Draco away from his bed. It`s like you`re trying to give Draco a blank cheque regarding his behavior in the relationship, that no matter what he does, Blaise can`t interfere and Harry can`t hate him because of his chicks.

What happened to the strong Harry with his own ideals and opinions. What happened to the Harry who won`t be a doormat?

Please explain this to me, I`m afraid I don`t understand why you choose to take such a turn in the story.
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From ANON - pyro on July 05, 2011
Max should be the third one, he seemed so sweet. Are Blaise and Daco gonna sell the scales they took off Dominic? That I believe would be a very fitting thing concidering thats what would have happened to the chicks. You are a very talented author and I believe you could become a great author should you choose to right a book and have it published, if you ever choose to do that let me know I'd love to read it. Also will the haircut come back into play anytime soon or was it just for this scene? It seems like it could be either. Also will Lucius play any part in this story? If so how come he hasn't already apart from Draco being nervous about being a dracken? 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From killerkitty on July 05, 2011
hello...
Well i was one of the readers who wanted all three for Harry, but if forced to choose, then it has to be Maximilius
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From Lilitany on July 04, 2011
This story is actually marvelous. It's well-written and engaging beyond the smut, which is something I look for and often rare, and I can't wait to see what happens next. The characters are believable individuals, and I think you kept it in-character when it comes to the canon ones. I'm so excited for the next chapter! It's honestly really interesting and well-done.
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From ANON - ~ Mischief Muse ~ on July 03, 2011
(Okay, lesson learned, never make a "heart" symbol in a review. The site recognizes it as hmtl and will cut off one's review XD lol)

I absolutely love your story and I really enjoy your characters and style as well~ You keep a reader on the edge of their seat, and I love it! (Even if I have to sacrifice a few hours sleep here and there * insert heart symbol here * ) So if I don't review often (due to being too rum-dumb to type XD lol)I just want you to know that I really do enjoy your story and hope that you will keep up the awesome work!

And if you're ever in the mood to chat, or need someone to bounce ideas off of or anything, you can always email me at mischief.muse@yahoo.com Sadly I don't have the time or attention to write, BUT I'll always make time to help out a writer any way that I can! * insert heart symbol here because I'm not dumb enough to fall for the site's oddity again *

~ Mischief Muse ~
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From ANON - ~ Mischief Muse ~ on July 03, 2011
This is awesome! I can't help but think that having another submissive come into their inheritance would be cool. That way 'Sen and Max can come back and Harry can explain what happened while giving the other submissive a "push" in their direction XD lol Those two are great and deserve love! ^.^

If you would be interested in actually doing that and would like to bounce character ideas back and forth with me, or want to adopt a character out of my mind so the muses for said character will leave me alone, please feel free to email me
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From jo031891 on July 03, 2011
Excellent work, I adore "The Rise of the Drackens". I love the relationships between Harry and the other characters and I believe you present their personalities very well. I would love to read more when you update, and I look forward to it. However, I'm a bit new to AFF and have not noticed any "Story Alert" similar to that on Fanfiction.net. If it's not too much trouble, would you kindly be able to guide me to it or if you have time, would you be willing to notify me when you update? I look forward to reading more. Thank you for all your hard work.

Jo Manta
bakuraryoulover2007@yahoo.com
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From ANON - anon on July 03, 2011
after the connection made between max and nasta... i can not imagine harry having to pick between the two. It would be great to see them both interacting with harry...especially as mates!
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From soccergirl0388 on July 03, 2011
this is a great story i can't wait to read more
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From ANON - TiannaMVA on July 02, 2011
How about DM/BZ/HP/OMC/OMC? Hell, three OMC's would have been nice. You just /had/ to introduce such likable characters, didn't you?

Either way, if the 2 OMC isn't possible, I cast my vote for DM/BZ/HP/OMC.
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